Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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ponpiri (Chapter 339) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

Man, you have a way with words. Now I have to reread all of this, not that it'll be a chore, but I don't remember where it left off. 

Treece (Chapter 338) - Tue 22 Aug 2017

Ahhh, at last!  My lovvvvve has come along...(Etta James version of course)

Whoot, whoot!

Hey!  I was sooo excited to see this updated.  Can't wait to see what happens next.  This is in my top faves.  I have nothing to add except to tell you it was a tease and I am thrilled.  Loved everything in this chapter.


Glad your writing is going well.  Hope to see your work outside of fan fic.  Another author whose fics I used to read is writing out there in the mainstream and I still keep up with her work whenever she releases something.





WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 338) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

EEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! <-- Happy Sunshiny Noise


You write WORDS, and gift them to us! Glorious WORDS... much awaited, beautiful, wonderful words. *happy sigh*




Ree-san (Chapter 338) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

I recall this is intricate but I only remember broad strokes...  But I think its good that you're inspired to post. Hope that momentum builds for you. 

ponpiri (Chapter 338) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

Yes!!!! You're back and the chapter is quite meaty. Thank you. I'm so glad I found your profile here as I've been a fan for so long in FFN. 

River (Chapter 338) - Mon 21 Aug 2017


Natalia (Chapter 338) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

i am grateful for the update! i love this fic! too tired to properly show my admiration but the update was very appreciated! hope to see more soon but take your time! can't wait to see kagome returned! yay!

DemonQueen17 (Chapter 338) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

YAY!!! An update!!! I like it. ONWARD!!!

ponpiri (Chapter 283) - Tue 15 Aug 2017

Miroku was my second fav character (next to dear Sesshou of course) so I'm happy that so much attention is on him in this story. Hoshihi is such a stunt queen. She really thought she could control her creation with tricks? Hasn't she read Frankenstein?? Haha

ponpiri (Chapter 178) - Sat 12 Aug 2017

Ugh gross. Inupapa is such a douche in this story and canon. I don't get why the fandom worships his homewrecking butt and those nasty eyebrows.

Anonymous (Chapter 60) - Sat 12 Aug 2017

"...somehow, he was just as intimidating naked and lathered with soapsuds as he was with a sword in his hand."




"'I should have let Kikyou have her soul! Then I’d have her. She’d have killed Sesshomaru rather than let him touch her – or died trying!'"

As much as I can't stand Inuyasha, he does have a point here. I don't really buy into the grand Kikyo/Inu love story (or his so-called love for Kagome, really), but Kikyo would have died trying to escape Sesshoumaru. This is the wrong thing to say, but it was the truth.
Gah I love your writing so much. I will definitely check out your published works later on.

Mulata (Chapter 337) - Sun 18 Jun 2017

I have been reading your story non stop for two days now. Oh My God, you are amazing. Really. You have some serious writing skills. That said, please, pleeeeease, update. Don't let this awesome plot die. I have seen a lot of crappy writings nowadays, your story is a breath of fresh air. Dont give it up! 

Treece (Chapter 337) - Sat 25 Feb 2017

I re-read all of the last three chapters.  Again.  Today.  Enjoyable to the very last as usual.  This is still my favorite as things go.  I hope that I will get to read more soon.  Otherwise, thanks for continuing this awesome torrid amazing story!

Skylar (Chapter 337) - Thu 03 Nov 2016

I am in love with the world you have created in this story! I can't wait to see what you have in store!

Leaora (Chapter 337) - Fri 07 Oct 2016

So, I am a newcomer to your work. It took me 3 days and 2 nights (1 through which I did not sleep) to read all 337 chapters. I am glad to have had such an extensive collection to read through, but I need you to take responsibility! Your story telling is incredibly addictive and so you cannot leave all of your fans destitute for unregulated periods of time. I shall attempt to sustain myself on your other works until the next update, but please have mercy and post SOON!!!

Inumaru_Rapture (Chapter 337) - Mon 03 Oct 2016

My dearest author, 


You have so entirely captivated my attention for the past weekend... please continue writing and giving us such glorious,  beautiful story. 


inu :D

Eva (Chapter 337) - Wed 28 Sep 2016

I believe that this vignette is possibly my favorite chapter, right along with"No Dialogue." This peek inside Rin's head teases at the nature vs. nurture question in such enticing ways.

Treece (Chapter 337) - Tue 20 Sep 2016

You knew I was waiting for this.  Thanks for this new update.  Rin is lurking, and I fear her truth is darker than any demons.  She knows and understands in ways the demons will never, and it makes her frightening.

Anything you writer, I read and enjoy.  Hanging on for the next chapter.  See you soon.  Yay!

xoMIA ;) (Chapter 336) - Mon 15 Aug 2016

I've been reading this whole story the last few days. Oh man, I'm in love. Bravo. Can't wait for more. I m a but depressed I'm all caught up. 

QueenAlice125 (Chapter 336) - Wed 10 Aug 2016

I've been reading this story for years. Really amazing and glad it's still going. Can't wait to read more!

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