Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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wonderbug (Chapter 50) - Tue 17 Apr 2018

Hawt. Jesus... XD

Lauren (Chapter 367) - Mon 16 Apr 2018

No! You can't have more horrible chapters than happy ones! That's mean. And what is this with the soldiers cheating, using demon weapons?! Automatic death for bigots using that which they hate against their enemies!!! 

Lauren (Chapter 366) - Mon 16 Apr 2018

So this is the beginning of the extermination that we see the result of in Kagome's future, but it'll be different now. Now that she's in te past and is the mother of a thousand generations, and Miroku and Sango and Inuyasha, and Rin, and Ssshomaru have been changed, everythng else has been too... Right? That has to be it. And Inuyasha better be breaking throgh that lousy ward on his youki soon. He still has to atone for alll of this and make good on his promises before he can die.


I totally forgot who Kou was. Is that terrible?

Lauren (Chapter 365) - Mon 16 Apr 2018

Well, this is definitely different from the usual Oda-bullshit. Great use of the Hojo family. Can't wait to see how all of these people play a role, and how the emperors' insanity/obsession/greed for Kagom'es power are revealed. And after such happy moments and pretty words...

hw (Chapter 367) - Mon 16 Apr 2018

Oohh! we're so blessed with these rapid updates! And this glorious cliffie you left us teetering on! I don't have fingernails left to bite in anticipation of what happens next! You're so evil! But I love it. ;) 

DemonQueen17 (Chapter 367) - Mon 16 Apr 2018


Natalia (Chapter 367) - Mon 16 Apr 2018

I hope inuyasha becomes himself soon and breaks the seal on his blood.

Thx for updating.

WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 366) - Sun 15 Apr 2018

Er. Mah. GERD!!!!!! Holy Moley!! My dearest authoress leaves us with the dreaded CLIFFY OF DOOOOM! DOOM, I tell you!!!!! O.o Last night, just before I toddled off to bed, I was buoyed by the thought that InuYasha & Sango would save the day until Sesshy & Kags arrived to let them all know what a BIG mistake they'd made in attacking Edo. Now? How do I sleep wondering if our valiant duo is gonna make it through. I mean, I know 'Yasha is all buff and stuff, but he's not hanyou anymore!!! Will 'Roku fly on the wings of the phoenix & save the day? Will Sesshy take to his primal form and stomp a bunch of samurai that should know better?? I'm glad I only have to wait 'til tomorrow, but still. DOOOOOOM, srsly!!!!! You have honed your skill at keeping us all guessing and on our toes, that much is certain! Okay, you've made me abuse punctuation in a horrid fashion, so I will leave off until the next round of WORDS brings me either some relief or more DOOOOOM!




hw (Chapter 365) - Sun 15 Apr 2018

Ooooh! Exciting developments! I knew Miroku shouldn't have let those guards live! Now there's a war on their hands. I'm interested to see how you work in the historical figures and how things play out against the actual warring states period events. I like how Hojo Ujiyasu is seeing things clearly...he seems to understand what's really happening and not falling for the Emperors' call to arms. 

I'm assuming word will get to Kagome and she'll want to help protect Edo and her friends. Will Sesshomaru be reluctant to help defend the humans? Will Hoshihi have a role to play in this? She's been preparing for the time when yokai are no more...maybe she'll think this is the decisive moment and want to affect how things play out? 

Will Kagome go to Edo? and if so, will she leave behind Masamitsu (would it be safe to do so?)?

Will Miroku join the fight and will he feel conflicted fighting as a yokai? 

Arrgh! So many questions!!! 



Treece (Chapter 365) - Sun 15 Apr 2018

Splendid and outstanding chapters.  Loving the moments of Miroku's rejection even as a handsome youkai!  He's still tied up into drama.  The shift over to the historical elements and preparation for a different kind of war was excellent.  It has me contemplating Kagome's role in all of this.  Great update!! :-)

Natalia (Chapter 365) - Sun 15 Apr 2018

Dun dun.

So it started...

And sango is helping. Protecting Edo!

Thx for updating.

Makuro767 (Chapter 365) - Sat 14 Apr 2018

Less of a oneshots collection and more of a chapter stories...but this is the first time someone actually add the human part of history into an Inuyasha's fanfiction...I'M LOVING IT!!

wonderbug (Chapter 44) - Sat 14 Apr 2018

Nicely done :)

hw (Chapter 364) - Thu 12 Apr 2018

LOL! Poor Miroku! I feel a bit bad for him but its his own fault. He'll have to come to terms being mated to Hoshihi. 

Nana (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Apr 2018

Seeing your updates make me so happy. I wonder if masamitsu is VB the first of his kind? I can't wait for the other nobles and Lords to see Kagome and Sesshomaru's  version of a hanyou, oh the chaos!!!

DemonQueen17 (Chapter 364) - Wed 11 Apr 2018

I kinda feel bad for Miroku, but then again I don't. That's what he gets for mating Hoshihikari. Oh, well. ONWARD!!

Lauren (Chapter 364) - Wed 11 Apr 2018

Still such an unsuccessful flirt. ItsI nice to know that he isn't so different than before.


You're spoiling us with all these updates. We're going to be looking at our alerts constantly now. LOL 

Natalia (Chapter 364) - Wed 11 Apr 2018

Huh. Poor miroku... Such torture and teasing...

And do I see the emperor stirring up problems again?

Thx for updating!

WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 363) - Tue 10 Apr 2018

OMG, finally got the chance to catch up... and such WORDS! Such beautiful, terrifying, overwhelming WORDS!!! Such heart-melting, inside-squishing, wonderful words. Only you, m'dear authoress, could manage to evoke such emotions with such a paucity, yet bounty of words. Thrilling, soaring, then dipping... then soaring again. Just... beautiful. Thank you so much for such goodness. I am beyond grateful, especially given the past few days!



hw (Chapter 363) - Tue 10 Apr 2018

sqeeee! Ah! I love this chapter too. Well, well, well, look at all that honesty a few bottles of vino can inspire. ;) So glad that Sesshoumaru got his confession from Kagome as well. Gotta love those two love birds! 

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