ahh yes. Editing. How I hate it.
So Alpha. I am on the cusp of liking it and being unsure if I like it. It's well written as usual: my bone (get it, get it? Bones-and Sesshomaru is inuyoukai) to pick is with Sesshomaru. I can understand him but I can't! I'm so conflicted.... And then Kagome's submission! Gah! She's being disloyal to Inuyasha but I'm a firm Sess/Kag shipper and Inuyasha knew what he was doing was wrong but they were together and Kagome cheated on Inuyasha (which I've already said)...
And now I'm going in circles.
Suffice to say, I'm conflicted.
:P
All I have to say is this...get the rest of these out ASAP. I know you have more. Can't wait. Poor, poor, Inuyasha. I feel bad. Will he find someone of his own to be with now that Kagome is with Sesshomaru? I guess not if Sesshomaru can help it.
O_O wow!
I love your word use. Frantically silent! Awesomeness!
Keep the chapters coming. I really enjoy your story.
lara (Chapter 13) - Fri 20 May 2011
hehehehehe
D: TEASE!
MORE!
*wiggles c0okies violently!*
I'm really liking the story so far. I'm curious as to what Sesshoumaru will plan as punishment. Thank you for the update.
I love your story. It's so interesting. I can't wait to read more.
Pleeeeaassee update soon!! I can't wait to read more
Mifnight Sun (Chapter 4) - Tue 17 May 2011
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