Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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Anonymous (Chapter 341) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

Love it!


Anonymous (Chapter 341) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

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Lauren (Chapter 341) - Sat 02 Dec 2017

Well, this is not good at all. We're supposed to be dealing with the friend issue. With Sango and Inuyasha running off into the forest and living in the dark, hiding from people. Throwing the emperor and his fear ridden tirade into this mess is not helpful to a pregnancy nor a newly cleansed/revised kingdom at all. 


Natalia (Chapter 341) - Sat 02 Dec 2017

What an ominous chapter! Kagome just can't take a breath  from evil plots dangers ahead!

Somehow this is like a quiet before the storm thing!

Just teased me! Thx for updating! I love it!


Emu (Chapter 340) - Wed 15 Nov 2017

Omg, I love this story. This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time, couldn't stop reading. You make it feel like it's a full story and not short chapters.


Natalia (Chapter 340) - Fri 27 Oct 2017

It was nice seeing his pov! Even he us able to feel fear! Fear of losing someone that has become important and the fact that he doesn't want to return to a life where there us no her! 

Beautiful! 

The very much for updating! 


Geisha Tactics (Chapter 340) - Thu 26 Oct 2017

This is great!! I can't wait for Kagome to see it all!!!  Please keep wrting!! I love this story!!!


ponpiri (Chapter 339) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

Man, you have a way with words. Now I have to reread all of this, not that it'll be a chore, but I don't remember where it left off. 


Treece (Chapter 338) - Tue 22 Aug 2017

Ahhh, at last!  My lovvvvve has come along...(Etta James version of course)

Whoot, whoot!

Hey!  I was sooo excited to see this updated.  Can't wait to see what happens next.  This is in my top faves.  I have nothing to add except to tell you it was a tease and I am thrilled.  Loved everything in this chapter.

 

Glad your writing is going well.  Hope to see your work outside of fan fic.  Another author whose fics I used to read is writing out there in the mainstream and I still keep up with her work whenever she releases something.

 

 

 

 


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 338) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

EEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! <-- Happy Sunshiny Noise

 

You write WORDS, and gift them to us! Glorious WORDS... much awaited, beautiful, wonderful words. *happy sigh*

THANKS YOU!

:D

~~me~~


Ree-san (Chapter 338) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

I recall this is intricate but I only remember broad strokes...  But I think its good that you're inspired to post. Hope that momentum builds for you. 


ponpiri (Chapter 338) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

Yes!!!! You're back and the chapter is quite meaty. Thank you. I'm so glad I found your profile here as I've been a fan for so long in FFN. 


River (Chapter 338) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

Thank-you!!


Natalia (Chapter 338) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

i am grateful for the update! i love this fic! too tired to properly show my admiration but the update was very appreciated! hope to see more soon but take your time! can't wait to see kagome returned! yay!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 338) - Mon 21 Aug 2017

YAY!!! An update!!! I like it. ONWARD!!!


ponpiri (Chapter 283) - Tue 15 Aug 2017

Miroku was my second fav character (next to dear Sesshou of course) so I'm happy that so much attention is on him in this story. Hoshihi is such a stunt queen. She really thought she could control her creation with tricks? Hasn't she read Frankenstein?? Haha


ponpiri (Chapter 178) - Sat 12 Aug 2017

Ugh gross. Inupapa is such a douche in this story and canon. I don't get why the fandom worships his homewrecking butt and those nasty eyebrows.


Anonymous (Chapter 60) - Sat 12 Aug 2017

"...somehow, he was just as intimidating naked and lathered with soapsuds as he was with a sword in his hand."

 

LMAO!

 

"'I should have let Kikyou have her soul! Then I’d have her. She’d have killed Sesshomaru rather than let him touch her – or died trying!'"

 
As much as I can't stand Inuyasha, he does have a point here. I don't really buy into the grand Kikyo/Inu love story (or his so-called love for Kagome, really), but Kikyo would have died trying to escape Sesshoumaru. This is the wrong thing to say, but it was the truth.
 
Gah I love your writing so much. I will definitely check out your published works later on.

Mulata (Chapter 337) - Sun 18 Jun 2017

I have been reading your story non stop for two days now. Oh My God, you are amazing. Really. You have some serious writing skills. That said, please, pleeeeease, update. Don't let this awesome plot die. I have seen a lot of crappy writings nowadays, your story is a breath of fresh air. Dont give it up! 


Treece (Chapter 337) - Sat 25 Feb 2017

I re-read all of the last three chapters.  Again.  Today.  Enjoyable to the very last as usual.  This is still my favorite as things go.  I hope that I will get to read more soon.  Otherwise, thanks for continuing this awesome torrid amazing story!


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