Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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Treece (Chapter 388) - Tue 17 Jul 2018

Another amazing and wonderful installment.  Many, many thanks!

maria (Chapter 388) - Thu 12 Jul 2018

this story  gives me liiiiiiiiffffeeee!!!

maria (Chapter 388) - Thu 12 Jul 2018


Treece (Chapter 387) - Mon 11 Jun 2018

Shades of Youkai Orgies, Batman!  This got wild!  Ah well, we were overdue for the fun.  Looking forward to more changes and what happens next.  Another great update.  Yay!

Treece (Chapter 386) - Mon 11 Jun 2018

And my Favorite Author rocks my world again!  I didn't see any of that coming. I feel dizzy and giddy.  I love babies!  They keep it all in perspective  Back to Edo!

Treece (Chapter 385) - Mon 11 Jun 2018

Wow!  Boy did this chapter kick major double universe existence butt!  Can't wait to see what happens next.

maria (Chapter 387) - Sun 10 Jun 2018

omggggg I need a boyfriend or girlfriend after this chapter 

Kayelyn (Chapter 253) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

MWAHAHAHAHA MONGOLIA >.> You also know why I am here. :runs away:

Lauren (Chapter 387) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

Sango does work fast. But she's always been impatient. What was the gift Miroku gave though? The thing Sesshomaru spoke of? 


Yay! More adorable babies! They definitely don't need to worry about being outnumbered if this is how they're always going to celebrate. LOL I guess Kagome'll need to tell Sango that the breast feeding isn't birth control for them. 


Trying to figure out how he didn't break his back bending like that. Maybe he kind of did and doesn't care? Hmm...


Here's hoping poor Kaede slept through the show because that'll be mortifying in the morning if she wasn't.

Kayelyn (Chapter 175) - Sat 09 Jun 2018 know why this here :cackles: 

Natalia (Chapter 387) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

Uh oh... 

Hot ... 

Need a fan. 

Thx for updating  

Lauren (Chapter 386) - Wed 06 Jun 2018

So we're in 1615, this time for good. That was a fantastic chapter. I figured that you'd approach the time issue eventually, since the jewel was still a serious issue, but this... It was sweet and tidy and I love the way you wrapped the things up for the shikon. It's fitting. I just hope those shadows didn't hear or see anything after they murdered Kagome. Speaking of overhearing important facts, did everyone die or did they leave the room?


The next chapter will be split into two parts, I hope. One part about the old emperor's kid, the other half a wedding. 

Lauren (Chapter 385) - Tue 05 Jun 2018

I didn't get a notification of your update! But I made it. And wow. That was disturbing. A dip into string theory and parallel universes? Had that golden string always been there, or was it a sign of desperation? Does that mean that Masa will one day be able to travel through the well? Will Inuyasha have to to retrieve Kagome since only he can travel through the well? Is Sango okay? @____@ 

Leaora (Chapter 386) - Mon 04 Jun 2018

Ack! This was amazing!!! Where is the next chapter already?!

Skylar (Chapter 386) - Mon 04 Jun 2018

That was spectacular!

Alysha (Chapter 386) - Mon 04 Jun 2018

This is for sure one of my favourite Sess/Kag fics I've read in a while. Story is written strongly. Grammar is solid. Smut is descriptive and passionate. I look forward to future chapters and works.

Makuro767 (Chapter 386) - Mon 04 Jun 2018

Talking about sacred beast.... If we are to follow Rumiko Takahashi's revelation about Sesshoumaru ’s design origin and inspiration as well as how Japanese language derive from Chinese, Sesshoumaru is also a sacred beast known as Tian-Guo or in Japanese, Tengu. Both meaning Divine Dog. Except in Japan that dog is changed into crows or long nosed red faced winged beings.

Tian-Guo is a large dog who ate the sun and desecrated the moon, a black comet that devours the heaven also known as the eclipse. I checked Japanese folklore and myth and there are no mention of Inuyoukai or large dog beasts for youkai other than the dog head that is the result of a Japanese curse where a dog is starved while being buried to their neck underground with a meal just at the end of their snout. Once the dog's neck elongated enough and they are starved and tortured to the point of feral, they were beheaded and the dark spirit remained of the dog's hunger and hatred was enslaved as a dark shikigami.

Can't see Sesshoumaru as an enslaved beast...

DaiTengu or Greater Divine Dogs are considered almost a sort of deity. While KoTengu or Lesser Divine Dogs are true demons that pillage and cause all sorts of grief and mischief. This also explain Inu no Taisho's design with the Mokomoko appearing like wings on his back. Perhaps Japanese painters of the era saw Inu no Taisho and mistook his Mokomoko for wings.

That being said, Inuyasha is a shrine guard dog alright. And maybe Sesshoumaru is Kagome's patron deity and is enshrined there.

merrrcurius (Chapter 386) - Sun 03 Jun 2018

fucking epic

Amanda (Chapter 384) - Sun 03 Jun 2018

I love this chapter..

River (Chapter 385) - Sun 03 Jun 2018

Thank-you for gifting us with more chapters!  It is always such a treat when you find the time in your busy schedule to update this story.  It is much appreciated!  Brilliant!!


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