Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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hw (Chapter 381) - Wed 09 May 2018

Wowza! What a chapter! Happy for the return of Kou. He's a sly one and ran circles around Miroku in the negotiations, ha! And its starting to become clear about how the center of influence will move from Kyoto to Edo. I'm excited to see the gang's reception in Kyoto. Shock and awe?

And boy! Is there something in the air? In the water? Everyone's getting it on! Maybe the great purge by Kagome and Sesshoumaru also got everyone's hormones in an uproar. hehehe. So many who thought they'd never cross that line are doing everything they can to do just that. I guess there'll be a LOT of tired miko abouts...sleeping their way through pregnacy! Even Shizuka fell for a woman?! Well, well, well if its good for the lord, its good for the advisors! And Suzume gets double the fun! ;D I like how Haruka gave as good as she got and won in the end with that kiss. 

 

I'm a little surprised it took Sesshomaru this long to steal some time with Kagome, but then again, there was a lot of work to do. On to Kyoto! 


Natalia (Chapter 381) - Wed 09 May 2018

Wow seems like Masamitsu will have others like him to play and train.

It was quite intense. The Miko were in vogue.

Can't wait to see them arriving in the capital. Who knows maybe the emperor is alraalr dead or fled?

Thx for updating.


Lauren (Chapter 381) - Tue 08 May 2018

That went all the way left. LMFAO I can't say that I am not shocked at that chapter. I think I expected the puppies to have more tact, but then, they are puppies  

 

Kourtney will be integral but what of this palace? Is that the mark of permanent change? Will the palace built be in place of Kagome's old future home, or will the house near the shrine come later regardless? So many questions but I'm sure the answers will be forthcoming. Better yet, the Emperor will be getting a haircut soon. I look forward to it. 


hw (Chapter 380) - Tue 08 May 2018

Lol! Hoshihi gave birth to an egg! Of course. hahahaha! And good ole Miroku, he's got good daddy instincts doesn't he? A chick and a pup, huh? Interesting set of twins! His poor daughter seems confused that her dad's a bird when she's not. Glad that Hoshihi is outta the picture for now and Miroku and Yoko have their chance for happiness. No time for you grandma! 

Lovely bit with Masamitsu being claimed as heir. But what the what?! Sesshoumaru had the Kusanagi-no-Tsurugi as a family heirloom!?!?! Of course he did, of course. Jaw totally dropped, letting all the flies in man. And a yokai with a holy name and a miko for a mom inherits it now. Very cool. 

I love how you're weaving in all the historical and mythological stuff so naturally. 


hw (Chapter 379) - Tue 08 May 2018

Omg! That was amazing! No one can doubt that Kagome is a match for Sesshoumaru. Powers combined (ha, just thought of captain planet!) and they cleansed the land of those that would stand against each other in hatred and prejudice. So the stage is set for a future with yokai in it. But what of the capitol? 

 


Treece (Chapter 380) - Mon 07 May 2018

Amazing, vividly fascinating and kool chapter bursting with all kinds of mad grandness.

 

Loved of the shocks (and I can't wait to see what the young heir does with such a grand prize he has inherited. Yikes!)

 

Miroku is going to have a wild ride!  Can anyone imagining his youkai son accosting all the ladies?  Wow!  

 

Yes, time for troublesome old ladies with delusions to take a lonnnnggg napppp.  Tick-tock, Granny!  Heh

 

Great chapter, lots of love and I can't wait to see what happens next.

 

Inuyasha is getting married!  Miroku is a daddy!   And the Emperor is about to get his behind handed to him by a Priestess and a Youkai Lord!

 

Sounds like I must keep reading. 


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 380) - Mon 07 May 2018

BWAHAHAHAHA!!! "Time to take a nap, grandma." *snicker* *snort* *guffaw* How awesome was THAT?! The perfect way to get her out of the way!! So Miroku & Yoko, plus new additions, get their chance at romance now. MOAR SQUEEEEEEEEs!! And 'Yasha gets to marry Sango, and Edo gets rebuilt, and... and... the evol Emperor gets his comeuppance? Or... does he get to stay on his throne, nothing but a figurehead?? Or... is he even still alive, since he was definitely NOT one of the peeps that had goodness in his heart? Oh, yesh... we haz MOAR questions! :D Still, love, love LOVE each new chapter unfolding like the NOT EMPTY road before them!

<3

~~me~~


Natalia (Chapter 380) - Mon 07 May 2018

That sword?

Wow.

And good riddance!

Thx for updating.


Lauren (Chapter 380) - Mon 07 May 2018

Well, that was unexpected. I could see Miroku sitting on his egg, though. And those two who tied down Hoshishi were the twins, correct? We haven't seen them in a while. I wonder what they'll have to say about what Hoshishi was fearful of... Great job sealing her, by the way. Best and only action to take right now. More time to breathe and more romance time for the peacock and the dragon.


The twin would be considered Masa's great aunt and uncle, right? LOL Miroku will feel so old, so maybe we should be nice and call them his "cousins". They sound so cute though! Now Masamito will have playmates the way Rin has Shippou. Very sweet. 


Just where did Inuyasha's father get Ame-no-Murakumo-no-Tsurugi rom? Didn't Sasunoo take it back? And what's this about Sesshomaru not ignoring the wedding plans? Sounds like we'll be spending two more chapters in the village. Fun.


Lauren (Chapter 379) - Sun 06 May 2018

YES! A little stab stab and then whoosh, their great power worked in tandem and all of the evil people are dead. Fantastic. Not bloody as I wanted, but this was a very beautifully written chapter. Almost romantic in its reverence. They are as it was said, and now they've shown it. If their powers swept over the whole of Nihon, had they reached the sneaky, greedy emperor? Here's hoping he's been wiped away. 


It'll take years for the village to rebuild without help. Perhaps a few more of Sesshomaru's men, Akihito with them, can remain behind? I'm sure Kaede and Inuyasha will appreciate the assistnce.


Don't think I didn't see that AN. While I wasn't necessarily optimistic to believe that all would be solved in this chapter, I was looking forward to a few of the possibilities of demonic eradication being closed paths. What else will have to be done to ensure everyone makes it to Tokyo? And what part is the merchart playing in this future???


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 379) - Sun 06 May 2018

OMG!!!!!!!!! I've finally caught up and I'm totally breathless. I mean, like, really! WOW. Didn't see this one coming... nope, not at all. HOORAY! 'Yasha lives and is hanyou again! Sango lives!! Kags & Sesshy RULE the day!!!!!!! And the night, and the next few hundered years, and... and... yeah, getting ahead of things, methinks. But, YES! SQUEEEEEEEEEs of delight! And another love story blooming to fruition, and one in the offing, perhaps? Cuz, we still have to get back to naming Sesshy's heir, and whatever 'Roku is gonna do with that stupid Hoshishi, and... and... yesh, excitement!

 

Oh. Wait. We still have Edo to rebuild, don't we? Hmmmm... can't wait to see what Sesshy does about that one. Or who he directs to do something about that one. And... QUESTIONS. Yes, questions! Did the power get the evol Emperor dude and snuff his stupid person off the planet?? Will anyone 'left behind' recognize just what DID happen? Or will our intrepid heroes have to battle it out a few more times before all is said and ready for the future??? Yes, indeed, we haz the questions! :) *happy sigh* And we trusts that our dearest authoress-person will reveal all in its time, yes we do!

:D

~~me~~


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 379) - Sun 06 May 2018

A very interesting turn of events can't wait to see what everyone thinks about it


Natalia (Chapter 379) - Sun 06 May 2018

Wow just wow.... 

A future forever altered. It was magnificent.

Thx for updating.


SmilingFool (Chapter 379) - Sun 06 May 2018

Wow, what an ending...  Loved it glad all those hate filled critters got what they deserved....  Oh one thing?  What will happen to the emporer?  I can't wait to read more....  Awesome story really and truly one of the greats.


Treece (Chapter 379) - Sun 06 May 2018

Awesome and fabulous chapter.  I guess everyone is striding into their destiny and self-acceptance.  Kagome is the shield to keep Sesshoumaru from truly becoming a monster. This was amazing.  And her power, purpose, and purity are proven to all, believers and non-believers.

 

The descriptions are visually amazing and I was present there with them until the final moments.  

Loved this update!  Great time and can't wait for more to come.

 

 


Treece (Chapter 378) - Sat 05 May 2018

I fell in love with Riku and Akihito as they fell in love. A  cute, delightful meeting!


Of course, I value this chapter as much as a dark chocolate lava cake or an all expenses paid vacation to one of my favorite cities for three weeks. 


Loved the banter and all the foreshadowing.  Until then, Favorite Author Dear,  -


Many thanks, and loads of love!


Tessitura (Chapter 379) - Sat 05 May 2018

That was awesome.  Love how Kagome's reation that was so in character!????


Chaos (Chapter 379) - Sat 05 May 2018

()_()

WOW


hw (Chapter 378) - Fri 04 May 2018

I love when Kagome's being all badass, she's such a good leader. LOVE LOVE LOVE the story of Riku and Akihito! So cute. Would love to read more about those two lovebirds. And it seems Riku is preggers? What a surprise for her soon to be mate! Sesshoumaru set a precident with not only mating a miko but also knocking her up and starting a family quickly and Akihito is following that precedent to a T so far. Ha! 

I know Riku was frustrated that her powers weren't stripped from her after sleeping with her love, but its nice to see that there are other miko who prove that virginity doesn't equal purity...and that supports Kagome's concept of where her power comes from. 

Thanks for the super fast update! We are so spoiled! 


REDWOLF (Chapter 378) - Fri 04 May 2018

Ohhh... another exciting chapter...but, you left us worrying for Sesshoumaru. Please hurry back...okay? ;) Thanks for the update :)


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