Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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Paperwing (Chapter 356) - Sun 21 Jan 2018

I'm so glad you didn't try to pretend peacocks are in any way melodious. Too funny. 

Lauren (Chapter 355) - Fri 19 Jan 2018

I'm kind of surprised that Miroku has been brooding as much as he clearly has. So much that he didn't explore this new form he didn't want but is stuck with. Miroku has a long way to go, but again, I'm glad he has Kagome. They'll no doubt need to lean on each other more than ever, once they land at the fortress.

Natalia (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Jan 2018

Amazing! Miroku is changing. And the new family is on the way home.  A big thank you for updating.  I love this fix and am so happy and excited you are continuing it. Thx for not giving up on it.

Take care!

hw (Chapter 355) - Fri 19 Jan 2018

Ohh! Yes! Miroku's transformation! He's gotta try to fly or atleast use a cloud of yoki like Sesshoumaru. Exciting, exciting!

Paperwing (Chapter 355) - Thu 18 Jan 2018

Miroku's getting in touch with the flappy side of himself perhaps?

I just had this hilarious image of the Sess/Kag brood running around in the future with Miroku minding them, and puppies yanking pretty feathers out of his tail.

Lauren (Chapter 354) - Wed 17 Jan 2018

Maybe Sesshomaru can control how imposing he looks? Or maybe he's like a cat and when he gets angry, he fluffs and appears to be much larger. LOL 

I almost forgot about Rin and Shippou, at home, no doubt causing havoc and making a mess while they play king and queen. Their Yoko must have her hands full. But they'll no doubt, be excited to see the baby and want to cuddle him. With any luck nothing fell into disarray and only paperwork has piled onto Sesshomaru's desk.

hw (Chapter 354) - Tue 16 Jan 2018

woohoo! another chapter! 

Soooo, since Inuyasha is human and therefore can't mate Sango to remove his tie to Kagome...will that be the thing that pushes him to accept his yokai half and desire to be hanyo again, thereby breaking the binding? It's really fun to guess what's going to happen or how things will play out...most times I'm wrong but when I'm right, I feel giddy. :D


Glad that Miroku is returning to the palace with them. Can't wait for the reunion with Shippo and Rin. And to see what people's reactions are to Masamitsu! 

Paperwing (Chapter 354) - Tue 16 Jan 2018

Sango can't always have what she wants. Life happens sometimes, and that's the way it goes. He did impart the insinuation if Inuyasha resumed his natural state, but will he really want to?

Treece (Chapter 353) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

I loved that Kagome and Seeshoumaru's son is a puppy! Brilliant!

Treece (Chapter 353) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

Wonderful updates! Loved every moment.  This is still my favorite story.  Thanks for all the new chapters and new revelations. Looking forward to more.

hw (Chapter 353) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

Woops! I meant strife not strive...heh.

hw (Chapter 353) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

Oh Kagome, why indeed. Why is there so much strive between yokai and humans and what are you going to do to lessen it, Mother of One Thousand Generations? 

Glad they're going back home and can't wait to see everyone's reactions. Will Miroku go back as well or will he go look for his mate? 


And what about Sango and Inuyasha? Will they get a chance to talk to Sesshoumaru before he leaves? Ack! So many questions! 


Thanks so much for another lovely chapter!

Paperwing (Chapter 353) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

I hope you have a safe trip! I'm not sure how that affects updates, but we'll be waiting!

Lorena (Chapter 352) - Sat 13 Jan 2018

I hope I'm not weird or alone in my opinion when I say that for some reason I found this chapter so romantic-

nicole (Chapter 352) - Sat 13 Jan 2018

I think we should draw a picture to go with this setting keep,up the void work

hw (Chapter 352) - Sat 13 Jan 2018

Another excellent chapter! Thanks so much for updating so soon. And we finally have his name! Masamitsu kinda just rolls off the tongue, nice. Its interesting that he needs blood and power...will he not need Kagome's milk because he's more yokai than human? 


Paperwing (Chapter 352) - Sat 13 Jan 2018

I'm totally imaging the puppy trying to run after giant daddy and faceplanting like a total goof. He might be greedy to be a big bad grown up hokay, but he's still a newborn. 

Lauren (Chapter 352) - Sat 13 Jan 2018

Another sweet family moment. I like his name. It'll fit, I'm sure. 

WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 351) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

Ah, escape from China for another chapter full of meaningful words... GOOD! No name for our little hybrid... BAD. I won't do it, but you know you will be hounded!! ;) Love that everyone else is questioning the pup's provenance - this should be interesting, and I will be waiting (patiently, of course) to see how that goes going forward!!! :D


hw (Chapter 351) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

Another chapter!! Yes! I'm so glad you managed to escape China to drop this bit of awesomeness on us. :) Its amusing watching Sesshoumaru slowly realizes the extent of change Kagome brings to his life. He's got her friends to contend with and not threaten to kill if he wants to keep her happy. hahaha! 

I was wondering if their son would be a "reverse" hanyo...have a hanyo night but the rest of the time yokai. Nice to have a hunch confirmed! So nice to see how happy and proud (with a bit of awe!) Sessh is with Kagome and their son. What's his name by the way? And I hope someone does a fanart of the happy lil family. A mini Sesshoumaru must be soooo cute! 


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