Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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raphaella (Chapter 46) - Mon 19 Feb 2018


Kairichan43 (Chapter 358) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

Always get excited when I see this has been updated. Thank you for the new chapter, and I'm glad you are feeling better! 

Natalia (Chapter 358) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

Aw so sweet. Great family. I love how shows that he cares.

Take care of yourself, stay strong.


Paperwing (Chapter 358) - Thu 08 Feb 2018

Yay an update! Now mommy's peeking around huh? Hmmm... 

Kairichan43 (Chapter 357) - Sat 27 Jan 2018

I'm excited for the next chapter! Thanks for the update! 

Lauren (Chapter 357) - Fri 26 Jan 2018

Look at that! Shippo and Miroku are being influences already. At this rate, by two months, the kid will be speaking. He sounds adorable in this form too, by the way. Looking forward to a family dinner and cuddle time. And I can't wait to hear about that shadow guy. He's a link to Hoshishi and the Emperor, so that's terrible news for our couple. 


Sorry to hear that you have cooties. Hope you can run them off soon. Sending well wishes and Lysol. 

hw (Chapter 357) - Thu 25 Jan 2018

omg! Masamitsu is the cutest thing! Happy that he got his mothers' looks as well as his fathers'. Its so cute to see Sesshoumaru so proud of his son. And it looks like the kids are fast friends, lovely! I think Sesshoumaru will come to like Miroku, not just b/c he's Kagome's friend and trustworthy around her, but I think he'll come to appreciate him as a friend and ally. At the very least, he'll provide much amusement until he gets the hang of being yokai. hahahaha!


Paperwing (Chapter 357) - Thu 25 Jan 2018

I want to know about shadowy person too! And thank you for the update! I look forwards to more ungainly Miroku. 

WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 357) - Thu 25 Jan 2018

As always, I bow before your work ethic and creativity... and ability to create WORDS! Such wonderful, meaningful WORDS!! The germs have come calling here as well and I have been borderline walking pneumonia for a week now. The hubby is making me work but the kids are threatening to take me to a hospital. Glad I got away from both long enough to enjoy this bit of goodness before they could do either! Now, need moar sleepies, liquids, fever-reducers & such... hope you feel better soonest!!



Lauren (Chapter 356) - Mon 22 Jan 2018

Well, he's still a fast learner. At least there's that. And +1 on the uncle scoreboard for not making a noise that'd hurt the baby. 


What was that teaser for next chapter? Shippou doesn't feel like he belongs with the murderous puppy clan? I'm sure his little sister will show him how to perfect his stoic face.

hw (Chapter 356) - Sun 21 Jan 2018

LOL! Oh Miroku! A little soggy but he got the hang of it in the end. hahahaha!

DemonQueen17 (Chapter 356) - Sun 21 Jan 2018

Oh, Miroku. The big lovely peacock. Sesshy shouldn’t be so hard on him. It’s his first transformation. Onward!

Paperwing (Chapter 356) - Sun 21 Jan 2018

I'm so glad you didn't try to pretend peacocks are in any way melodious. Too funny. 

Lauren (Chapter 355) - Fri 19 Jan 2018

I'm kind of surprised that Miroku has been brooding as much as he clearly has. So much that he didn't explore this new form he didn't want but is stuck with. Miroku has a long way to go, but again, I'm glad he has Kagome. They'll no doubt need to lean on each other more than ever, once they land at the fortress.

Natalia (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Jan 2018

Amazing! Miroku is changing. And the new family is on the way home.  A big thank you for updating.  I love this fix and am so happy and excited you are continuing it. Thx for not giving up on it.

Take care!

hw (Chapter 355) - Fri 19 Jan 2018

Ohh! Yes! Miroku's transformation! He's gotta try to fly or atleast use a cloud of yoki like Sesshoumaru. Exciting, exciting!

Paperwing (Chapter 355) - Thu 18 Jan 2018

Miroku's getting in touch with the flappy side of himself perhaps?

I just had this hilarious image of the Sess/Kag brood running around in the future with Miroku minding them, and puppies yanking pretty feathers out of his tail.

Lauren (Chapter 354) - Wed 17 Jan 2018

Maybe Sesshomaru can control how imposing he looks? Or maybe he's like a cat and when he gets angry, he fluffs and appears to be much larger. LOL 

I almost forgot about Rin and Shippou, at home, no doubt causing havoc and making a mess while they play king and queen. Their Yoko must have her hands full. But they'll no doubt, be excited to see the baby and want to cuddle him. With any luck nothing fell into disarray and only paperwork has piled onto Sesshomaru's desk.

hw (Chapter 354) - Tue 16 Jan 2018

woohoo! another chapter! 

Soooo, since Inuyasha is human and therefore can't mate Sango to remove his tie to Kagome...will that be the thing that pushes him to accept his yokai half and desire to be hanyo again, thereby breaking the binding? It's really fun to guess what's going to happen or how things will play out...most times I'm wrong but when I'm right, I feel giddy. :D


Glad that Miroku is returning to the palace with them. Can't wait for the reunion with Shippo and Rin. And to see what people's reactions are to Masamitsu! 

Paperwing (Chapter 354) - Tue 16 Jan 2018

Sango can't always have what she wants. Life happens sometimes, and that's the way it goes. He did impart the insinuation if Inuyasha resumed his natural state, but will he really want to?

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