Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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hw (Chapter 365) - Sun 15 Apr 2018

Ooooh! Exciting developments! I knew Miroku shouldn't have let those guards live! Now there's a war on their hands. I'm interested to see how you work in the historical figures and how things play out against the actual warring states period events. I like how Hojo Ujiyasu is seeing things clearly...he seems to understand what's really happening and not falling for the Emperors' call to arms. 

I'm assuming word will get to Kagome and she'll want to help protect Edo and her friends. Will Sesshomaru be reluctant to help defend the humans? Will Hoshihi have a role to play in this? She's been preparing for the time when yokai are no more...maybe she'll think this is the decisive moment and want to affect how things play out? 

Will Kagome go to Edo? and if so, will she leave behind Masamitsu (would it be safe to do so?)?

Will Miroku join the fight and will he feel conflicted fighting as a yokai? 

Arrgh! So many questions!!! 

 

 


Treece (Chapter 365) - Sun 15 Apr 2018

Splendid and outstanding chapters.  Loving the moments of Miroku's rejection even as a handsome youkai!  He's still tied up into drama.  The shift over to the historical elements and preparation for a different kind of war was excellent.  It has me contemplating Kagome's role in all of this.  Great update!! :-)


Natalia (Chapter 365) - Sun 15 Apr 2018

Dun dun.

So it started...

And sango is helping. Protecting Edo!

Thx for updating.


Makuro767 (Chapter 365) - Sat 14 Apr 2018

Less of a oneshots collection and more of a chapter stories...but this is the first time someone actually add the human part of history into an Inuyasha's fanfiction...I'M LOVING IT!!


wonderbug (Chapter 44) - Sat 14 Apr 2018

Nicely done :)


hw (Chapter 364) - Thu 12 Apr 2018

LOL! Poor Miroku! I feel a bit bad for him but its his own fault. He'll have to come to terms being mated to Hoshihi. 


Nana (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Apr 2018

Seeing your updates make me so happy. I wonder if masamitsu is VB the first of his kind? I can't wait for the other nobles and Lords to see Kagome and Sesshomaru's  version of a hanyou, oh the chaos!!!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 364) - Wed 11 Apr 2018

I kinda feel bad for Miroku, but then again I don't. That's what he gets for mating Hoshihikari. Oh, well. ONWARD!!


Lauren (Chapter 364) - Wed 11 Apr 2018

Still such an unsuccessful flirt. ItsI nice to know that he isn't so different than before.

 

You're spoiling us with all these updates. We're going to be looking at our alerts constantly now. LOL 


Natalia (Chapter 364) - Wed 11 Apr 2018

Huh. Poor miroku... Such torture and teasing...

And do I see the emperor stirring up problems again?

Thx for updating!


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 363) - Tue 10 Apr 2018

OMG, finally got the chance to catch up... and such WORDS! Such beautiful, terrifying, overwhelming WORDS!!! Such heart-melting, inside-squishing, wonderful words. Only you, m'dear authoress, could manage to evoke such emotions with such a paucity, yet bounty of words. Thrilling, soaring, then dipping... then soaring again. Just... beautiful. Thank you so much for such goodness. I am beyond grateful, especially given the past few days!

<3

~~me~~


hw (Chapter 363) - Tue 10 Apr 2018

sqeeee! Ah! I love this chapter too. Well, well, well, look at all that honesty a few bottles of vino can inspire. ;) So glad that Sesshoumaru got his confession from Kagome as well. Gotta love those two love birds! 


Makuro767 (Chapter 362) - Mon 09 Apr 2018

I am worried about Rin. And the curse...I have a terrible inkling that they linked...


Natalia (Chapter 362) - Mon 09 Apr 2018

Se beautiful... It melts my heart... Sesshoumaru's adorable! If I can say so myself. Thx for updating such an amazing chapter!


Skylar (Chapter 362) - Mon 09 Apr 2018

So sweet!!!


hw (Chapter 362) - Mon 09 Apr 2018

squeeee!!!!!! omg! i wasn't prepared for all the veritas from that vino Sesshoumaru drank. What a way to confess his heart. All I can do is swoon! Lovely chapter! That last line tho! Perfection. 


Tessitura (Chapter 362) - Sun 08 Apr 2018

It seemed Sess spoke in beautiful haikus.. mysterious and haunting.  The last line made me melt. Just a wonderful chapter.


Anonymous (Chapter 362) - Sun 08 Apr 2018

Ah, finally!


wonderbug (Chapter 11) - Sun 08 Apr 2018

Holy Christ...had to pause just now to review because this is AMAZING. Love the whole alpha dynamic—unique, and dear Lord, the tension! Good luck resisting him, Kagome...gotta say, I’m not terribly optimistic - but hey, that’s not such a bad thing ;)

Anyway, fantastic writing...seriously... <3


Lauren (Chapter 361) - Sun 08 Apr 2018

 

LMFAO How sweet? This was sweet. They are bonding and acting silly and embarrassing Kagome. Looking forward to the next installment. 

 

Hope you are doing well and feel better  


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