Poor baby. Poor Sesshomaru... Ugh. It may have been instrumental to the story, but you are still horrible for killing her! *sobs* And to make him kill her... *sigh* Now Taro'll be traumatized for the rest of his natural-born life. God. >< Hopefully the Kami-sama will send her back once Kagome awakes. *x* That'd actually be convenient given, you know, the way others usually write the two and everything. Either way, that evil little bitch will get her just rewards. I hope it's slow and painful. <--- I'm trying really hard not to say anything to revealing. @_@ *rereads review* I don't think I said anything.
Lauren (Chapter 10) - Sun 20 Sep 2009
Great story so far. Your original characters are great so far. I want to like Haru, but I'm a little worried that he might have been one of the spies that Azumi's father set up in Sesshomaru's territory. *crosses fingers* Don't make him evil. Sesshomaru trusts so few people.
I'm really glad that you'd decided to tell the reader of the happenings in both, or all three, I should say, locations (Musashi, Hokkaido and the Western Lands) while Kagome is resting/asleep. My only question is about Kikyo's new Mistress. I'm confused. Why is it that her name is 'Yuki' in the beginning, but every now and then you write her name as 'Suki'? Am I missing something here, or are they really typos?
Other than that? Hmm... I hope that you'll let Sesshomaru's feelings for Kagome develop over time. I've noticed that he's already calling her 'his miko'; though apparently, it's without his own notice. I'm just hoping everything will proceed at a more... realistic pace. *continues reading*
Okay... whoo! Finally, after 500-or-so years Kagome's going to awaken! Not to mention the 20-30 something odd chapters >,> BUT, it was all definitely worth reading through since it was so eventful and intuned w/the actual history of Japan and the world! I'm going to work but when I come back, I'll def shower and sit down to read after 8 hours of hard labor @,@
?Aoi-Kaji10
P.S. thanks for informing us about this site again ^_^
Yay! I'm so glad I finally get to read further into this oh-so wonderful fiction ^_^ THANK YOU for finally posting that you recognized the problem and another site to where we could read the fic ^_^ I deeply appreciate it a whole lot =D
Now back to more reading >,<
?Aoi-Kaji10
Inuyasha was the biggest ASS in the history of the world!! No matter how hurt you are, no matter what you think, you never, EVER!! Say such a horrible, insulting and hurtful things! I was so mad at him and I wanted to choke the lights out of him!! I can't believe Sessho waited that long before he smacked some sense into the jerk!!
Then I got the biggest shock:
Taro grew a HUGE pair!!! Hehehehehe!! You go boiii!!!
No, seriously, I was shocked at Taro's reaction because I never thought possible for him to stand up for what he though was fair, and to do it and in such an amazing way was...WOW!! AMAZING!!! I am so proud of him!!! ***Wipes tear from eye*** My little Taro is finally behaving like a man and not like a scared teenager!!
I applaud this chapter and the way you portrayed Taro!! It was about time!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
Much love, hugs, and a few kisses: MidCat
***Snif!! Snif!!!*** I can't believe how much this chapter got to me!! I just began to cry and that does not happen to often!!
In the scene where Taro is with Kagome, I lost it! He was so hurt and in so much pain to see Kagome suffer so much!! I just wanted to hug him and kiss his tears away!!
Sesshomaru broken was also a tense moment and I knew rage would be a part of his effort to deal with the situation...
What can I say? Another excellent chapter done beautifully and with so much emotion, that I would put a warning at the beginning to have kleenex ready!!
Thank you for writing!
Hugs, and much love:
MidCat
You tell them, Taro! Love It! Another Terrific Chapter! :)
stars (Chapter 66) - Fri 18 Sep 2009
please updata
Oh this chapter had the ol' tears trying to spill. Was very hard not to, trust me. Bravo, on yet another wonderful chapter. So happy to see this being updated as quickly as you have been. Can't wait to see the next one.
Anonymous (Chapter 66) - Fri 18 Sep 2009
Dana (Chapter 66) - Fri 18 Sep 2009
It's like Christmas getting so many chapters in so short a time. Love you for it. Great job. Everyone's digging themselves into gigantics holes! They're screwing up bad. It's going to be great seeing how they get OUT of their holes and start patching things up. I hate Naraku!!! Great chapter!
REDWOLF (Chapter 66) - Fri 18 Sep 2009
Great chapter, I want to say more but I am so upset at those two idiots for making the entire situation bad! I'm glad Taro snapped and threw them out!! They deserved it! Again, a great fic!
malom (Chapter 66) - Fri 18 Sep 2009
Yay! This is better than my afternoon soaps!
Kanna37 (Chapter 66) - Fri 18 Sep 2009
Wow. Again, that's all I can say. Such powerful writing, the moment I start to read, my heart is already pounding! Can't wait for more...
Amber
autumngold (Chapter 66) - Fri 18 Sep 2009
Stupid Inuyasha! I really, really hate him!! He sees that Kagome is broken, but proceeds to belittle her and call her a whore. Inuyasha bedded Kikyo, he wasn't pure. If he really cared anything for Kagome, he wouldn't care that she wasn't either. He is a selfish jerk who can only care for himself. I hope something horrible happens to him in this story because he has done so many bad things to everyone else!! There, I had my rant. I feel so much better. Of course Sesshoumaru was a jerk too, but not as bad as Inuyasha. Thank you for the update! Please let Taro help fix the mess Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru caused!
awwwww!!! This chapter definately tugged at my heartstrings... Though you have warned us long before in several A/N regarding this confrontation... reading that scene actually broke my heart. When Sesshoumaru fell to his knees and showed emotion like that, I wanted to pick him up and put him in my pocket and soothe him.. Great chapter!
Kanna37 (Chapter 65) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
Gods... how much pain can poor Kagome take? And Kikyo... damn I'd love to slap the hell out of her, and Azumi. I can't wait for the chapter where she gets hers, especially for what she did to Rin.
Amber
sunset in love (Chapter 65) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
oh, this is cliffy... in fact almost every chapter is cliffy! you are simply evil.. the only problem is... you are one hell of talented writer taht i couldn't stop wanting for more... so, kikyou, yuki and azumi has finally get on with the act huh, and the battle has started... i can't waith to get to the chapter where azumi is proven guilty, kikyou sins catching up and yuki become Naraku....
stars (Chapter 65) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
please updata
mrslegume (Chapter 65) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
Your driving me crazy with these cliff hangers!!!! AHHHHHHHH!!!! Kagome can be such a dolt sometimes. It's obvious these things are happening for a reason. She doesn't seem to have a very strategic mind. I hope Azumi and Kikyo get what they deserve really soon. I WANT AZUMI TO PAY!!!
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