Stupid Inuyasha, playing right into Kikyo's hands. Kagome doesn't need this now, she needs to deal with the hurt from Sesshoumaru's betrayal, not receive more from Kikyo. Please have Taro keep Inuyasha away from her! Thanks for the update!
REDWOLF (Chapter 65) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
Azumi! Kikyo! I don't know who's the bigger bitch!! No, maybe Inuyasha is (lol), but one thing is for sure, Inuyasha is stupid, maybe more so than Kouga ever was!!
Great chapter. WOW, that was a fast update!!Great job!
Hi,
I love this story. It sucks that they have to go through this but sesshomaru should have been truthful from the beginning...oh well what is done is done...
I can't wait to see what happens next it will be interesting to see...
great job and great chapter and update soon...
Wow wasn't expecting another chapter soo soon, but I'm not complaining! Not one bit! :D Bravo, once again another great chapter and I want to put Kikyo next to Auzmi as they both get slapped, repeatedly! Can't wait to see what happens next chapter. Again, bravo!
Kat (Chapter 64) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
This is one of the best fanfiction I've ever read and my only regret is that I started it before it was finished!
I love how you actually delved into the development of all additional characters. Not just the Sesshoumaru/Kagome pairing, but ALL characters: Taro, Azumi, the traveling group, even Jaken just a little bit! By the way, we haven't heard about Haru for a while. Is he still around.
The lemon parts are good but it kinda feels like you're going into porn at that time, with words like "cunt, pussy, cock"--it just kinda...changes the feel of the story when that happens. Although I do find it amusing when Sesshoumaru's beast keeps calling her "bitch", since it's accurate according to him but to us, it's in insult. Just funny.
OMG! I hate Azumi. And while I feel bad for Kagome right now, I'm also mad because she promised to listen to him and to trust him but she's not! And that bitch Yuki! Damn it! Although it is a brilliant plan....
Right now, I'm just so sad/depressed, angry, hopefully waiting for the next chapter to come out soon! I can't wait for more of your genius writings!
REDWOLF (Chapter 64) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
WELL, that was truly interesting! Kagome was truly fooled and betrayed all because of Sesshoumaru's stupidity! I hope Kagome doesn't regret her decision! Great chapter! Now, i'll just have to look everyday for an update, I hope you find time to update soon, this is a fantastic fic!
Ashley (Chapter 1) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
Please don't make Kagome weak again!!!!! Great chapter.
stars (Chapter 64) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
please updata
first things first
*cry* *wail* *noooo* *wail* *cry*
sigh...what a heartwrenching chapter...poor kagome...poor shessou, but he really begged for it, should have told kagome sooner that azumi is still alive...
...but most importantly, sesshoumaru should not forget to ask his devious mate how she managed for the jouranl of theri most feared and hates enemy to fall into her hands!?! that's going to be an interesting story for sure! she may be able to block taros sight, but shessou can sniff out lies like no other, i'm sure she is in for a long interrogation...argh please update soon...i cannot wait to continue reading :)
Fairqueen (Chapter 64) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
well all i can say is wow. U can sure write, that was a wonderful chapter. even if Sess lied to Kags she should listen after the first hurt is over. but for Sess to get to his knees in pain,wow. i am sitting at the computer waiting for the next chapter and ty for this story it's great> :)
Ouch! Azumi needs to be ... slapped, repeatedly! Very, very well done chapter, glad to see the update and can't wait for more! Bravo!
First of all, let me begin by saying THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! for updating so soon!! Just when I though I was about to have a coronary you come out to save the day!!!
My little ones also wish to thank you for saving their mommy from dying a most horrible death! We all love you very much!!
Now for the review: Poor Sesshy!! I feel so bad for him!! However, if he would have had a bit of faith in Kagome and had told her about the mating, things would have been so different!!
I just hope Kagome doesn't close her heart to see that she is also at fault in part because Sess warned her and she didn't care at the moment. Come on! She loves him!! She should at least give him a chance to explain!!!
I really look forward to the next update!!! Thank you again for updating!!!
Tons of hugs, love and all the mushy stuff you can handle:
MidCat
Did she forget the dreams telling her to keep her heart and mind open? Did she forget how many times Sess tried to let her know that he had things to tell her? He even tried to stop the intimacy between them before it went too far! Oh No! This is sooo wrong! I so want Azumi to get trounced!
What?!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't let that b***h Azumi get back into Sesshy's good graces (like that'll happen). Kagome's an idiot for falling for Azumi's lies. Will they ever find out the truth? Don't they know this is all part of the Shadow Warriors' plan? Ugh, if things continue like this, all youkai and hanyou are doomed. Next chapter please.
autumngold (Chapter 64) - Wed 16 Sep 2009
Your chapter has broken my heart! I feel so bad for both Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I can't believe he has to accept Azumi as his mate again. Yucky! Where will Kagome go? I can't believe Azumi will allow her to stay in Sesshoumaru's house. Please, please don't have her get together with Hojo (or however you spell his name). Two wrongs don't make a right! Great update!
This chapter brought tears to my eyes! The thought of Sesshomaru being brought to his knees like that, and Kagome losing all hope and walking away ..... so sad! When will they find out Kagome's pregnant? How long will Azumi be able to block Taro's sight and lie about Rin's death and Kagome's abduction? When will Inuyasha be back with Kikyo? Update again soon!
sunset in love (Chapter 64) - Wed 16 Sep 2009
what... oh ow... sessh, you are son IN to that... you really should update more ofthen, the suspense is absolutely killing me... i hate that azumi... please do something to 'cast her off'... at least for the sake of my poor heart!
Oh my god!! I can't believe you left us in such a HUGE cliffhanger!! After everything that has happened!! After everything that Kagome has gone through!! This is pure torture!!! Please!! Have some mercy on the readers!!! Please!!! I beg of you!! I have no idea how to ask, but please!!! Don't leave us like this!!! I am going to go crazy while I wait for an update!!! My adrenaline is up to the roof!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!! I'll do anything!! I promise to write more reviews! I promise to be your loyal fan!, I promise to read every little thing you write and love you so very much!! but for the love of kamis!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I can almost feel a heart attack coming!! My little ones will be left motherless and you will feel the full force of the guilt if you cause my poor weak heart to blow up due to stress!! Please update!! Please update!!, please update!!! Love, hugs & all that mushy stuff I feel for you: MidCat.
mrslegume (Chapter 63) - Wed 16 Sep 2009
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! You are so cruel!!! I knew this was going to happen but to leave it on a cliffy!!! I'm going to be frothing at the mouth until the next chapter. Great work by the way.
HHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLYYYYYYY.....SSSSSSSHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIZZZZZZZZ....
I've never wanted to draw so badly IN MY LIFE!!!!
There's so....I just....AUGH!!! I can't even begin to describe...
Expect fanart TONIGHT!!!! TONIGHT, I SAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
OH SNAP. THIS $#!+ just got REAL!!
(BTW, I'm SO looking forward to "Beach Day"! Love!)
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