Wow what a terrible chapter for Kagome... love how well you wrote Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha fighting... their words fit their characters very well.
ANother awesome chapter, I know I use that word a lot but that's the best way to describe your writing. Really love your solid plot and story ling you got going here.
Wispr
(Chapter 64) - Fri 16 Oct 2009
You were very right to make this short... any longer would have weaken the powerful emotions you packed into this chapter.
Wispr
(Chapter 63) - Fri 16 Oct 2009
Awesome and horribly nasty... fantastic writing and you did both Azumin and Kagome brilliantly.
Wispr
(Chapter 62) - Fri 16 Oct 2009
Bloody hell the angst for Kagome is coming closer... wonderful work in building the tension.
Wispr
(Chapter 61) - Fri 16 Oct 2009
Speachless... that was a bloody hot and steamy scene... feel bad though for Kagome when the truth comes out.
Wispr
(Chapter 60) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
Oh mna Sesshoumaru is really digging himself deeper every chapter. Great story.
Wispr
(Chapter 59) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
Another great chapter... love how you are drawing closer the big reveal about Azumi.
Wispr
(Chapter 58) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
Oh things are really starting to heat up... love how alive you make the characters with your writing.
Wispr
(Chapter 57) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
You got me on the edge of my seat waiting for the time when Kagome finds out about Azumi... bloody good story.
Wispr
(Chapter 56) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
Oh what a awesone twist who is Kikyo's son... a very nice surprise.
Wispr
(Chapter 55) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
You wrote Inuyashas's reactions and thoughts wonderfully... really can see him being that way.
Wispr
(Chapter 54) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
"Gulp!" What more can be said... ;)
Wispr
(Chapter 53) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
Really love how you got thing progressing between Kogame and Sesshoumaru. Also love the mother/son relationship between Kagome and Taro.
Wispr
(Chapter 52) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
Wow that was a bloody hot ending!
Wispr
(Chapter 51) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
Now that I bet wasn't the reactionKagome was expecting... though it does answer her questions... lol
Wispr
(Chapter 50) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
Oh so looking forward to reading about Kagome 'testing' Sesshoumaru to see if he's interested.
Wispr
(Chapter 49) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
Very cool dream and I simply love how you did Kagome waking up from it.
Wispr
(Chapter 48) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
Love how you are writing how like a married couple Sesshoumaru and Kagome are acting... bloody wonderful!
Wispr
(Chapter 46) - Thu 15 Oct 2009
The talk between Sango and Kagome was awesome... emotionally powerful and both heartbreaking and yet heartwarming at the same time. The scene with Hojo was bloody hilarious!!
Wispr
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