Can't wait to see what comes from Kira's plans. Really like the Shadow Warriors you have created... nasty and believable.

Wispr

Azumi's family is a nasty bunch! Though sad I like what you had happen in Inuyasha's villaige... adds more to the real life happenings.

Wispr

How you write Sesshoumaru and Taro is simply outstanding... you really kept Sesshoumaru in character an yet he his growing also.

Great work!

Wispr

Love how you wrote the meeting between Sesshoumaru and Oda... you really flesh out the supporting characters very well. Also really like your story pacing... nice and  steady while covering a lot of ground.

Wispr

Love the connection both Sesshoumaru and especially Taro have with Kagome. Also like the realistic idea of Sesshoumaru for handling Oda.

Wispr

I really like how you are writing a more mature Inuyasha and how Oda is affecting his 'empire'. Nasty stuff with Kikyo and wondering where you are going to go with that.

Great story!

Wispr

Amazing work with the father and son scene down in the crypt.

Wispr

Wow... I really didn't see that coming... so bloody sad.

Wispr

Love the scene between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha... you really know how to write their personalities wonderfully.

Wispr

Oh that was a heartbreaking chapter... wonderful work with Keads last words.

Wispr

Nice touch with Sesshoumaru's concubine advice. Really wondering what that spell is about!

Wispr

Love the twist involving Kikyo... you really are blowing me away with this brilliant world you have created with your words.

Wispr

I'm really wondering what Azumi has up her sleeve... if it affects humans will it affect Kagome to?

Wispr

Love how you are writing Rin's and Sesshoumaru's relationship... done wonderfully realistically. Also like how you are doing Inuyasha's actions.

Curious to see what happens to Sango and the Monk when they figure out they will have to watch their children grow old an die.

Wispr

Yet another great chapter, love how alive and vivid your scenes are. You got Sesshoumaru done wonderfully.

Wispr

Fantastic chapter, I really like your character Azumi, at times I feel sorry for her and then other times I dislike her. You have created a very wonderfully complex story line here.

Wispr

Love the world you are weaving with your words. Azumi is turning out to be an interesting character and I have a feeling Sesshoumaru's misgivings are going to come back to bite him in the butt.

Wispr

Oh looking forward to see how Sesshoumaru's mate reacts to humans in the house. Also like how you are writing Inuyasha's building of his kingdom.

What is happening to Kikyo is so well deserved.

Wispr

Another great chapter... your writing really makes the characters come alive. Also love Inuyasha's house he is building and how it includes ideas from the future.

Wispr

Bloody fantastic chapter... like the aftermath for Kikyo. Also love how you did Sesshoumaru actions in his castle.

Wispr