Wow what a twist there at the end... nifty touch woth Kagome's human friends. Very nice way to keep them around without boosting their powers. Wondering what will happen to Kikyo now with what her punishment was.

Wispr

Awesome work with everyone's personalities... love how you are doing Sesshoumaru noticing Kagome... supple and believable.

Wispr

Nasty chapter, good work on how Kikyo manipulated Inuyasha.

Wispr

Really like your begining, love how Sesshoumaru got Kagome to get training.

Wispr

i love this story (:

i got a dokuga account just to read this story! Darn FF! ;p

Hey there, awesome authoress!  I saw your post on FF.net that your stories weren't posting properly so I came here to read your new chapters :)  I'm so excited with what you've done with the characters.  The emotions were very real and powerful.  Kagome has learned that you can't win them all and nice guys aren't always going to save the day.  I really like that about your story, the characters are realistic.  They have dimensions and thoughts and feelings just like real people should.  Even demons and hanyous have depths of emotion that a lot of other authors don't really reveal.  I hope you keep posting because I'll be here until the story's through.  I want to know what happens to Azumi and Yuki and Naraku and Rin and all the other characters.  I'm also curious if you're going to reveal who Inu's soulmate is...  Great work, keep it up, and thanks for sharing your wonderful writing abilities with us!

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OH MY GOD, I DONT KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY SO IM GOING TO SAY WHATEVER I CAN, IT WILL NOT TO A SENTENCE JUST WORDS. LOVE EVERYTHING, ALMOST CRIED, FELT HEART IN THROAT, FINALLY A STORY THAT FITS PERFECTLY TO THE CHARACTERS, BEST STORY EVER, PURE HAPPINESS, DID NOT GO TO SLEEP SHOUD HAVE SINCE I HAVE WORK AND I MIGHT BE FIRED IF I MISS BUT I CAN FIND ONE EASY, I THINKS THATS IT PLEASE REVIEW SOON

I'm on chapter 21.

Very good so far!

FREEEEEKKKEEEN AWSOME STORYYYY!!! at first i wasnt sure i wanted to get right into the whole sess and kagome stuff but now i am soo glad that i stuck with it!! definately worth every second!! Definately like that kagome makes mistakes to, not one for highlighting that shes supposedly perfect. keep writing, can't wait for the next chap!!

Oh my goodness, I must say, that was just simply amazing and put all of the missing pieces together. I'd noticed Kagome was actually acting "human" in all of your fictions and which is another reasong why I love them, but I wondered how she would be able to get that doubt off her shoulders. I honestly don't know the Japanese culture as well as other or at all, but the way you put the Amaterasu made sense to me ^-^. Ano, point is: The chapter was worth the wait and I kent wait till the next one and for what will happen when she severs the bond between Sesshoumaru and Azumi! UPDATE SOON! PLZKTHXBAI! ♥

AWESOME!!! Now I really can't wait to see what happens with Sessy and the hag he has for a mate... She has got to get what's coming to her in the end.... and Kags will have to give a little with our little fluffster... Please update again soon.
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Alpine ^_^

Apologizing ahead of time for the abundance of actions and parenthesis.

Hazzah! A update! And Amaterasu (more or less anyway)! *huggies* "Right now her priority was stopping Naraku, the Shadow Warriors and saving the world.  End of story.  The rest she’d deal with later." As if that isn't enough to deal with? O_o So, she can commune with the gods. Or the god's gods. Nice ability to have (especially since she's technically, their child).

Ugh, why does everyone reference 'The Wizard of Oz'? I get the feeling your trying to convey, I just...  Bah.

"We are you as you are us.  We are everywhere.  We are everything." on the other had is very pantheistic (my Romanticism in English class is becoming relevant/useful! And it only took three weeks. Awesome XD). Very Wordsworth-y. To be more natural, child-like and accept things instead of seeking to understand. In understand something, you undermine it; ruin it. I like it and his/the concept. And I do like the way you've brought Kagome's more favorable ad story-specific attributes into the story. ^^ YAY! I'm loving her again. She's self-assured and self-doubting/loathing all at once (now if only she could listen and just do). LOL What is it they say? "Absolute power corrupts absolutely", no? Who'd wanna be an all-powerful, immortal and corruptible being? Not me. = P

I love this chapter. Freedom and awesome direction - or should I say redirection? In any case, you totally get a cookie. *hands you one*


*blushes* I'm glad you approve of my reviews so much as to recommend others to read them. Thank you.

~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl

Once again great chapter and so can't wait for the next one. 

I read Lauren's review and I see what she is saying and I agree with most of it but I can also see why Kagome is acting the way she is.

The one thing I didn't understand about her in the chapter were Sesshomaru tells her everything is why in the hell does she want to meet his previous sexual partner.  LOL isn't that a no no when first getting to know someone?  The only problem I would have had through all of what Sesshomaru told her is the knowledge that once again the person she loves was in a way in love with another being that looked like her.  I do realize that Sesshomaru is nothing like Inuyasha but being only a couple months to her that all that happened with Inuyasha I would be more concerend about that than him being mated to someone he doesn't care for at all.

I do love the drama and I can't wait to see whats going to happen next.  To bad the bond being broken didn't hurt.  I would have loved to see Kikyo in some pain:P  

oooh i like this confident kagome :D

Excellent chapter!  But what are they going to do with Kikyo now?  If they keep her, that just plays into the shadow warriers plans, but if they let her go she'll just rejoin them.  Is there anyway where Kagome won't be hurt by her again?  Also, I'm so mad at Inuyasha.  Kagome is definitely going to have to beat the truth into him.  Sesshoumaru also needs to give her time.  She isn't turning against him, she just needs time to process what has happened to her.  The sad thing is that the only one who seems to care about all of the bad things that are going on around them is Kagome.  Everyone else just has their own agenda.  Please post again soon!  I can't wait for more!

YEAAAA!!!!!...I finally fund the story and boy am I glad....I still can't believe Azumi is stupid to believe that Kagome will fall for all these plans....but I am glad Kagome is taking action now.

I've been so caught up in this story for the last three days, it's all I do at work! You have such a brillant way of sharing there feelings that it's like you are them. Look..looook...you have to update. I am Sesshoumaru without Kagome if you don't update! :)

WOW!!! What a stunning story! I just know got caught up and it takes a lot to keep me interested in Sess/Kags story(Don't get me wrong they are my favorite couple of all time^_^) A lot of stories you read of this couple almost always kinda repeat each other, but with your story it is so unique. You have me on the edge of my seat wondering what will happen next. I couldn't stop reading and when I had to I kept thinking back to the story and what would happen next. They way you tell the story and portray the people in the story just draws you in and keeps you. I just love how you brought each person together. I love how you brought Sesshoumaru to the point of being able to love a human woman that was just unique as well as special. I love how you have brought Kagome out of her shell to realize how strong and independent she can be. How she realizes she can fight this battle but at the same time she can rely on the people she trust most. Oh and little Rin yet to be born I can't wait to see how that is revealed. I just adore this story as well as your writing keep it coming! Can't wait to see/read what awaits us^_~   Heather   

So the new and improved Kagome is here, huh? Time for them to get those plans roled out and arm themselves.

This stry has been very god so far. Very good and never corny ups and downs along the way (aside from this chapter - a little... well, a lot of cheese associated with the "new Kagome/last stand" op). I'm enjoying this fic overall though and am awaiting the next chapter. *hands you a cookie*