Ya, finially another chapter. I love the way the story is turning out. Keep up the good work and let Kagome stay mad if I was her I would have beatin Sessh into a bloody pulp.
Hello Texan lady!
Sorry I haven't had a chance to review for a while but, classes have kept me busy!
Wow this story is getting pretty angsty(I like!)..........I feel the tension between Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relationship. I understand both of their view points in the story. I find it interesting that many people reviewing are saying kagome's character in this story is very close minded.......but not Sesshoumaru's? In my opinion there both at falut in there own way.........and their also have some points to consider.
I feel for kagome, she feel's betrayed once again..........except this time it's worse, because she's not a virgin anymore. If I were to lose my virginity........without knowing that said person I was losing it too, was attached, I would be pretty shaken up. I think people should give kagome a little bit of a break, she is a nine-teen year old girl, and like every nineteen year old's she's going to get emtional we all do sometimes. I understand her emtions fine......even the jealously! Were human's and we tend to get jealous/possessive at times, but we learn to deal with eh, ne? Also, from the story it seems like the main reason she didn't understand that Sesshoumaru had something to hide is, because she was straight forward and honest with Sesshoumaru from the very beginning..........so Kagome probably though that he was going to be thes same! I don't think people realize that Kagome's character is having all this stuff thrown at her in the course of a couple of day's.........since this story is an epic it's going to take some time for Kagome to get over all this.
I like the fact that all these emotions and doubts are coming to the surface to begin with........show's character depth and growth!
Along those lines as well..........I feel for Sesshoumaru as well, he's having a hard time and is also hurt. But is character just isn't as emotional or even forecoming at times. Because of this though, he's mystical.......aloof and just sexy ;).
I know it'll take some time, but Kagome and Sesshoumaru with work it out!
On to other things, I really like the fact that Kagome is standing up and taking charge. Although the demure, hestiant kagome is nice at times...........it's nice to see take charge and let people know she's not fraglie and it's not okay for people to hide stuff from her! I know I don't appreciate when people do that to myself!
Inuyasha can be a little hard-headed sometimes. But I think he's finally starting to realize that Kagome and him are just friends and he needs to look for his destiny else where.
As always taro character holds a special place in my heart. Since i'm the mediator/pacifier in my family I can relate to him in many ways.
As always thankyou for the wonderful chapter Texanlady!
I'll be looking forward to the next one!
stars (Chapter 71) - Sun 18 Oct 2009
please updata
Hi there!! Sorry i have been absent, kids have a way to make everything 2-3 times more complicated than they should be. But they wouldn't be the aple of my eye if that was not the case, they keep me in my toes!!
This was a really heartwarming chapter! I loved the conversation between Inuyasha & Kagome's mom!! I hate to see him described as the "asshole bad guy", and was happy to see that you gave him some redeeming qualities that make him seem more human, more like someone who has experienced a large range of emotions and has learned from the huge mistakes done in the past. I applaud you for writing his character like that! After all, time has a way to change everything, the constant drop of water falling upon a rock will eventually change it's form, and so time changes even the most hardened individual into something else; perhaps no better, or worse, but always different. God knows I am nothing like what I used to be years ago, and those who knew me back then would be shocked to see the way I am today and how much I have changed.
The fact that Inuyasha is facing his emotions and reality thanks to the conversation he has had, makes this story much better for it!
Moving on, Kagome is suffering, but at the same time causing suffering in those around her, her pain is just overwhelming her reasoning and creating more grief than necessary, I hope she too will see things in a different light soon and finally allow things to slowly begin to move on.
As always, you delivered another great chapter and as usual, I look forward to the next one with anticipation.
Your gift as a writer shines every time and I find myself basking in it every time a new chapter is up!!
Please update soon and remember that the fans are always looking forward to more from you!!
Many hugs and much love:
MidCat.
Annalena (Chapter 71) - Sun 18 Oct 2009
I understand Kagome. Sesshoumaru is mated, mistake or not. But he was sleeping around with other women. I think Kagome’s problem is not that he was sleeping with other women over the 500 years but that he was mated when he did this. How can Kagome be sure he will not do this when they are mated? It is not easy to trust someone who can this easily cheat on his mate. And it will take time for her to trust him that he truly loves her and would never do this to her. Well, this is my opinion.
I like your story. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
(Sorry for my bad english. I’m from germany. ^^)
Okay; I have to admit that I've just spent the past four hours reading your epic. Even locked my husband out of the computer room so he would leave me alone. Yes, there are a few typos and missed words here and there...but WOW! This has been a first rate E-ticket ride from the very beginning. And it thrills me that it's not over yet! I need another box of tissue...
Also, thank you SOOOO much for talking up DOKUGA. I had no idea it was out there, and admit to following you here. Call me noob; whatever..8>)
chevonne (Chapter 71) - Sun 18 Oct 2009
It just makes me angry that kagome is hapring on this stupid notion that sesshomaru
was mated. she didn't care one way or another about him. and I just don't like her pulling his
strings like this. I hope she gets told off by sess's old lover. I hope that she gets a dose of
reallity. I still burns me that she ask to see her.
what was he supossed to be (pure)! for her for over 500years. That kind of selfrightes attitude
I just can't stand. Yes he lied about him still being mated and that was wrong. But that was the only thing
he was wrong about.
What a wonder story keep up the good work.
Inuyasha (Chapter 71) - Sat 17 Oct 2009
That was such a good and interesting chapter. Poor Inuyasha though. Hopefully he finds happiness soon.
All the sadness and pain. I'm close to tears reading this. I hope things get better soon.
REDWOLF (Chapter 71) - Sat 17 Oct 2009
I can see where Kagome is coming from, trust, it is a pertinent emotion with so many draw backs. Seems like once a trust has been broken, it is so hard to repair. I think Kagome's actions are real and her character is correct! Great Chapter!
autumngold (Chapter 71) - Sat 17 Oct 2009
You're back, you're back!! Yay! Thank you so much for the update! Part of me wishes that Inuyasha would get together with Kagome's mother. Kagome isn't the only one who has suffered from pain and neglect. Kagome's mother has gone through the death of her husband, her daughter traveling through the well, and now the upcoming battle. She deserves some happiness too! I just hope that Inuyasha doesn't try to interrupt Kagome and Sesshoumaru's conversation. They need to talk things out. I'm glad that Inuyasha is going to let Kagome go, but I really hope that he stops calling her a whore and treating her so badly. Maybe he needs to learn what a real friend is. Kagome needs some! Can't wait for more! Please post another chapter soon!
(Chapter 70) - Sat 17 Oct 2009
You really did an outstanding job with the talk between Amaterasu and Kagome. Awesome story and I can't wait for more!!
Wispr
Sealeena (Chapter 43) - Fri 16 Oct 2009
I don't know if anyone has mentioned this, but it pertains to your take on spelling "Daiyoukai" the reason you see the "ou" instead of the accent is because the "ou" gives the same pronounciation as the accent. Americans revert to the "ou" usually because it is easier for translations (who wants to insert the accent all the time) and how to pronounce as well. That's why you see Sessho's name spelled differently by so many people. Hope that helped clear things up a little for you! By the way, I do love the story. Epic and one of the few Sessho/Kag pairings that are so believable and true to character, although circumstances of our fancy always help push a character in the right direction ;) --Keep up the amazing work! I'm looking foward to making the rest of the way through this!
(Chapter 69) - Fri 16 Oct 2009
I really love how you did Kagome's talks with her friends and family. You captured the emotion of the scene very well.
Wispr
(Chapter 68) - Fri 16 Oct 2009
Wonderful work with the talk between Kagome and Sesshoumaru... again you got their characters personalities done to a "T".
Wispr
(Chapter 67) - Fri 16 Oct 2009
Oh can't wait for Kagome to unleash on Azumi... also on Sesshoumaru a bit... he deserves a bit of hell also.
Wispr
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