Reviews for S t a s i s by wonderbug

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Utsukushi tenshi (Chapter 18) - Fri 29 Dec 2017

Such Masterpiece! 

Such a precious gem yet fragile and rare in the dept's of the dark sea,

This story is full of emotions dark, angst yet beautiful!

Exquisite enough to destruct this poor Heart, too much to handle,

Your writing style is unique, every words is Breathtaking! Perfection!

You keep  me hanging for more. ..

Thus i believe this story is not yet finish!

Thank you for writing and sharing this with us!

Such Phenomenal writer you are...

 


Valasaurus (Chapter 18) - Wed 27 Dec 2017

Beyond happy to see another update!!!

 

i wonder though, at the ending you have planned for this story.


Maria-Salvatore29 (Chapter 18) - Wed 27 Dec 2017

HOLY SHIT YOU'RE BACK OMG OMG OMG I WAS SO HAPPY TO FIND AN E-MAIL ALERT THAT YOU HAVE UPDATED!

What I love about the way you write is that you ALWAYS, ALWAYS SHOW, you never tell. I can almost feel your words crawling on my skin and my heart beat pounds like I am watching the story unfold right before my eyes. You are an amazing writer and I can only hope to have even half of your talent. Your storytelling is phenomenal and inspirational.

YOUR UPDATE IS A WELOME BELATED CHRISTMAS PRESENT!


Geisha Tactics (Chapter 18) - Tue 26 Dec 2017

I've reread this story so many times, i've lost count. everytime I hope for some miracle that another chapter will just pop up. And today it did! Why Wonderbug is choosing to torture me further but stating the story is finished but we are getting a chapter once a week, I do not know? But i'll take what i can get. This is one of my favorite stories and I looking forward to seeing how it all plays out!


ponpiri (Chapter 18) - Tue 26 Dec 2017

Welcome back!!!!


Geisha Tactics (Chapter 17) - Sat 05 Aug 2017

This story is really one of my favorites. It's amazing how the author was able to show off the Sesshomaru you see from the outside and then have your brain move into viewing him the way Kagome does. The real him. I'm really hoping against hope that the author finishes the story. I'm waiting on baited breath to see how it all ends!


Haven Himori (Chapter 17) - Mon 16 Nov 2015

Wow just...Wow I hope you continue this


Genevieve (Chapter 17) - Tue 30 Jun 2015

Awesome!


The-infamous-one (Chapter 17) - Sat 27 Jun 2015

I have missed this story terribly and am wondering mayhap, if you will grace us with a new chapter soon. 


Maria-Salvatore29 (Chapter 17) - Mon 15 Jun 2015

When will you update? HUHUHU


Haven Himori (Chapter 17) - Wed 20 May 2015

PLEASE tell me there will be more of this


GoofyGrin (Chapter 17) - Fri 17 Apr 2015

Wow.


QueenOfTheDream (Chapter 17) - Fri 23 Jan 2015

My oh my. This fic is incredible! The characterization is just insane. The characters feel so real and believable, and the dark atmosphere is as delectable as it is uncomfortable: most impressive. I certainly look forward to the next update.


Maria-Salvatore29 (Chapter 17) - Mon 24 Nov 2014

PLEASE UPDATE THIS. I HAVE BEEN STALKING THIS FOR A LONG TIME NOW, HOPING FOR AN UPDATE :( PLEASE GO BACK TO THIS STORY AND GIVE US A CHAPTER AS A CHRISTMAS GIFT :(


wiiTneSs (Chapter 17) - Sun 26 Oct 2014

Darn. I was really wishing this to turn into kohakuxkag. Poor kagome. Why does sesshoumaru keep her around?  I hope kagome can escape from this somehow,


Taki Mokuzai (Chapter 17) - Sun 28 Sep 2014

What a fantastically dark story! Yoku dekimashita!


Catalina (Chapter 17) - Tue 16 Sep 2014

O.o I'm so sad I didn' twant to get back on this site at all these last months, to miss this! Awwww damn girl. I can't ever beat you! 


Stella Mira (Chapter 17) - Fri 25 Jul 2014

A shout fades in the shape of her name. Wow. I think I stopped for a whole minute to reread this sentence a couple times. It's so lovely, and being the opening line gave it even more impact... I was stunned for a few moments. I really love this line. :3

Your descriptions as she lunges towards him and tears herself apart later, seething with hatred and despair were chillingly wonderful. It wasn't overly gory or splatter-filled, but the subtlety of your word choice and its vividness gave me goose-flesh. I always cringe a little when fingernails break and split, I don't know why, but I find it more disturbing than evisceration, for example. *cringes at the mere thought*

Is it wrong of me to think of both Kagome and Sesshomaru as cruel and pathetic in equal measures? It's ironic, really - that their own words could be used against them and vice versa. He's the the epitome of cruelty, makes no discrimination when he delivers torment, but I think that is the only difference left between them. She has become a cluster of baneful thoughts; she rips her soul apart with her own hands, little by little. I think the real tragedy is exactly that, the growing similarities between them.

You have woven such an amazing, stunning piece of corruption. It's so twisted... I both love and hate it for the same reasons. I won't lie and say I didn't enjoy this chapter because I did, immensely so. It was the culmination of many things. The magnitude of what she lost is tremendous, her physical hurt pales in comparison to the wounds inlficted on her psyche. I truly gave up on any chance of her recovery after this chapter.

As for our cruel, pathetic lord, I don't think he truly fathoms that love has many faces, some wretched and twisted, blacker than even his own heart. He is falling into the trap he's sewn on her soul, slowly, insidiously. I wonder when he'll realize that, and more importantly, what he will do then.

Oh, and I adored how you accented the cruelty in his eyes. So intense, so raw, especially at the end!

Gah! This was an excellent chapter, Char! I adore you and your freakin' awesome brain and your talent in word making! Can't wait for the next chapter! :3


Sammi-Chan (Chapter 17) - Wed 23 Jul 2014

:( I wonder if she will go in search of the blade that can kill him....


Loren (Chapter 17) - Tue 22 Jul 2014

Wow, I have to be honest, this chapter made me shiver at the end..

Gosh that was one dark episode..

please do continue, you do it so well.


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