Reviews for S t a s i s by wonderbug

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Stella Mira (Chapter 13) - Sat 24 May 2014

Such beautiful description for such horrid realities, but more than that, more than pretty words, it's...haunting, really, hauntingly beautiful. It's so lovely that it becomes ugly and, when you look away for a minute, it becomes lovely once more. That's what I think of your writing. Lol What amazes me is your ability to engulf so much emotion, to summarize something terribly vast and pain-ridden in one single, short sentence like "No ghosts apart from herself." It gives me the shivers, truly.

Haaaa. Now that I've had my fangirl moment on your writing style, I'mma talk about this chappie. I can't say I didn't see this coming, but expecting one thing and seeing it written are two different things. The execution was flawless... It had flow, felt like slinking in deep waters, coming up for air only to swallow more water. I dunno whom I pity more here, but everyone is to be pitied -- even Sesshomaru. When you curse someone, you open two graves, as they say. I wonder when it will dawn on him. As for Kohaku, I fear he will do something stupid, brave but stupid. *shakes head* I hope he doesn't...

Thank you for this update. I loooooved it, Char! looking forward to more! :3


Ava (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 May 2014

This story is amazing. You are such a talented and original writer and I look forward to every new chapter you post. Stasis is my favorite work of yours and this most recent chapter was excellent, as usual. I did have one question about the timeline though... According to the most recent chapter, she only met Kohaku 1 year ago but has been with Sesshoumaru for 17 years. The wording of the previous chapter suggests that Kagome and Sesshoumaru still hadn't been together as of the time she met with Kohaku, so does that mean that they haven't been together at all in 16 years?


April (Chapter 13) - Mon 19 May 2014

You hoooome I'm so glad that your back I haz missed you so much 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 13) - Mon 19 May 2014

Great, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!


Maria-Salvatore29 (Chapter 13) - Mon 19 May 2014

YAYYYY! BEEN WAITING LIKE CRAZY FOR YOUR UPDATEEEE! AND WOW 17 YEARS????!!!! THAT'S A LONG TIME :o


criticat (Chapter 13) - Mon 19 May 2014

Ok, I'm officially pro Kagome/Kohaku now! 

I love this story, it is well-written, not overly descriptive and just awesome. Can't wait for this and 'Transgressions' to be updated! 


Moonlight Silk (Chapter 13) - Sun 18 May 2014

I really love your story, your writing is flawless. I am intrigued, can't wait to see how the rest of the fic develops.


Andrea (Chapter 13) - Sun 18 May 2014

I could reread this story for an eternity and never stop loving it. I am truly looking forward to finding out what happens next! I absolutely hate Sesshomaru in this fic, and I love that. Is that weird? :)


rose (Chapter 13) - Sun 18 May 2014

next chapter please


herpderp (Chapter 1) - Sun 18 May 2014

I hope you don't intend on them staying together till the end of the story. I can already see Kagome reaching absolution in death and Sesshomaru receiving a karmic ending. Maybe becoming trapped in the jewel or being bound to Naraku in Hell. 


Stella Mira (Chapter 12) - Sat 17 May 2014

Oh this chapter was sublime both in tone and character interaction. There were some sentences in there that caught my eye like "Perhaps suffering is the only currency." It's so poignant and terribly true...I think it summarizes her reality in a scant six words which is amazing!

Hm, so, the ice lord speaks of Izayoi and declares he was a twisted fondness for human females, but I don't think that's it, or more like not exactly it. If you ask me, I think is jealous - yes jealous - of the things his father and his brother possessed and gained strength from, things he lacks and for a good reason. Is this some messed up attempt to bond with his family, I wonder? Even killing his brother created a sort of bond...I dunno...it's so complicated and so simple all at once. He's a an enigma, an antithesis of himself, and intrigues me to no end. Lol Kudos for his portrayal!

Poor Kagome, she can't escape what's coming but she still tries despite the futility of her resistance. As time goes by though, she fights more with words and less with actions which is very good. She's learning, maturing, if you want. Woo! Clever girl!

And what's this bait you are dangling in front of us? Kohaku? I can believe all the titles and the fame and the experience, but...the big BUT named Sesshomaru. I can't help but feel that something will happen though. I mean, Kagome is walking a fine line between clarity and lunacy and Kohaku...I think he's unbearably lonely...he must be. That's never a good combination. :sighs:

The ending lines of the chapter though were so intense and beautiful! A mere illusion, him lying dead at her feat, so lovely written that I could see her sweet, sweet smile as she stares down at him then...probably kills herself. Yep, morbid I be, but it makes sense in my head.

Haaa, I babbled again... I looooved this chapter and can't wait for more!! Till next time, Char!! :3


Koi (Chapter 12) - Thu 08 May 2014

Wow that was intense! I can't wait until the next chapter!!! Great job! I can't wait until Sesshy gets it in!! lol I know i'm a perv, for wanting Sesshy to bng the fuck out her...more like make love. Show Kag her true meaning to him! I can't can't can't wait until the next chapter!!!


Lace (Chapter 12) - Sat 03 May 2014

This is literally my favorite thing right now. Oh so dark, and oh so inspiring.  You have me dancing in my chair waiting for an update :]

I can't wait to see if Kohaku's introduction to the storyline will be a small plot arch or something bigger...

Will post fanart when I can. 


Valasaurus (Chapter 12) - Sat 19 Apr 2014

thisstorykeeps sucking me indeeper and deeper


Jenna (Chapter 12) - Thu 10 Apr 2014

Deliciously dark! I love this story. Keep up the great work!


Maria-Salvatore29 (Chapter 12) - Wed 09 Apr 2014

Please update. I'm desperate to know what will happen next :)


Eryn (Chapter 12) - Tue 08 Apr 2014

I love this story!  I can't wait to read what happens next.  So Dark.

 


Maria-Salvatore29 (Chapter 12) - Wed 02 Apr 2014

please update! this is excellent in its own way. im waiting for your update!


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 12) - Mon 17 Mar 2014

Poor Kagome. I really feel bad for her. It's like her mind starts to snap then something brings her back to reality.
I do wonder if Kohaku will be able to help her though.......


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 12) - Mon 17 Mar 2014

Next, keep it coming.  


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