Reviews for S t a s i s by wonderbug

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LavenderBoots (Chapter 12) - Mon 17 Mar 2014

Whaaaa this is amazing! I love it so far. I have always thought that many Dokuga fanfics are too sentimental when it comes to Sesshoumaru, granted this is darker than I would have ever imagined him but I love it, and thank you for sharing your beautiful imagination! Im super excited that Kohaku grew up and became strong just like Sango wanted, and I can't wait to read more. Great job Love!

 

~Boots


Catalina (Chapter 12) - Sun 16 Mar 2014

"Perhaps suffering is the only currency." That was a beautiful line. I loved it! I also love Sesshoumaru molesting her. A great deal. I still don't think Kohaku is strong enough to kill Sesshoumaru, but maybe? I don't know, I'm anxious, I have no trust in my ability to guess at any damn thing you write! XD


Rhonda (Chapter 12) - Sun 16 Mar 2014

Lovin' It!!!

Hope Kohaku can help Kags out eventually.....


Maria-Salvatore29 (Chapter 11) - Tue 11 Mar 2014

PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE THIS U PORTRAY SESSHOMARU SO WELL


Stella Mira (Chapter 11) - Mon 03 Mar 2014

The level of description in this chapter was sublime, to be quite honest. The rush of adrenaline, wounds stinging, respiration failing...I could almost feel it as if I was there, as if I was Kagome actually. Truly magnificent! I think you outdid yourself in this chapter!

Poor Kagome, how long has it been since she has smiled a genuine smile? I do wonder, and mourn for that smile that never touches her lips any longer...

Kohaku has grown up to be a manly man...Woo! Never thought I'd say that, but it suits him, the scent of leather and polished metal on his skin, the taste of danger in his eyes, the touch of huskiness in his voice! I do hope his role doesn't end here because it's exciting to see a new element thrown into the mix!

Ha, of course he caught the scent, and of course he recognized it...his last sentence inundated the air with dread... *shivers*

I can't wait for the next update!! Thank you so much for this one! I know you have been busy, so I'll wait patiently. ^^


Andrea (Chapter 11) - Mon 03 Mar 2014

Just found this story and i loooove it!


Sammi-Chan (Chapter 11) - Mon 03 Mar 2014

Oh no! Kohaku Run! Ahhhh now im worried for him.  Love the story happy for the update! Thank You!


Valasaurus (Chapter 11) - Sun 02 Mar 2014

i seriously how sess isn't going to hurt kohaku. too bad hefound out so soon. i thought they would  have secret rendezvous before being found out.


Luna C. (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Mar 2014

Omg now Sesshomaru is gonna kill Kohaku, and I have a feeling Kohaku is gonna fight him back for Kagome.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Mar 2014

Next, keep it coming. 


April (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Mar 2014

Ooooh noooo is he going to kill him or let kagome think she has a frie d and when they get so close he takes him away from her..... 


Eryn (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Mar 2014

XD

So beautifully done.  Go Kagome!  Go Kohaku! Go away Sesshoumaru!  J/k.  I like how he's evil, yet not.  He seems really bored with his life and doesn't know what to do with himself.  Like a child who treats an animal like it's play thing...before they become a serial killer? Um... 


smcandy (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Mar 2014

 Indeed. Kohaku's sudden appearance did surprised me and I sure other readers said just the same thing and reacted the same. Not all the time do I see Kohaku get that much spotlight in S/K stories. Too bad the Chapter was not longer. Please update again ASAP.

 Sincerely,

Authoress smcandy


Miko Sayuri (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Mar 2014

OMG is going to kill Kohaku for touching his property!!! I feel sorry for Kagome. It has been so long since she had to talk to anyone, let alone hug someone. Poor Kohaku doesn't even know is fate. I can just picture Kagome covered in scars and her face devoid of any emotion. This is so intense right now, I can't help but wondered. Though a question has been popping in my mind. What happened to Kaede? Maybe she can help her? Well, thank you for this chapter. It was awesome! Keep up the great writing, you do :-) 


Catalina (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Mar 2014

Silly girl, not to consider scents and such things as that! I'm glad at least that she didn't ask him to help her, in any other way that simply giving her the physical contact she needed... now we'll see if/when Sesshoumaru kills Kohaku. Oh! There's another person who might be interested in her too, ya know... a certain Hojo of the past. Just a suggestion... 


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Mar 2014

uh ho!
I hope he doesn't go after Kohaku now....

But I am a bit confused......if her fiesty spirit is what pleases Sesshomaru, why is he doing everything he can to break her spirit? Or is it because he is a youkai and sees things so differently that he believes he just needs to force her to turn to him for companionship and that will eventually makre her have affection in her eyes?

And yes the appearance of Kohaku greatly surprised me!
Wonder what Kohaku will do, still try to help her or just wait for her to return to him when she needs to? Love this!


satuross (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Mar 2014

yayyy! please kill the taijiya boy. slaughter the village. heh heh heh


Sammi-Chan (Chapter 10) - Tue 25 Feb 2014

OMIGAWD! My heart started thumping at the end! Kohaku still alive? Whaaat.... i cant w8 nooooo why must you do this to meeee whyyyy?!  Hmmm i wonder if she will try to kill sesshy?


Stella Mira (Chapter 10) - Mon 24 Feb 2014

Ah, yes, the curse of time... time never heals and bleeding wounds never close, time only numbs and the wounds only become septicaemic. Though, if she still seeks contact, if she still wishes to reaffirm the presence of skin above her bones then she's not that far gone yet. That is good, very good, means there is yet hope.

Did Totosai craft some kind of loophole for her with this armor?? Hm, I can't help but wonder...

Of course he knew she'd come to him... such devious bastard he is... thsi time he has planned well. I guess he did learn from his experience with Izayoi, though it was a lesson that should have never been learned. 

Kohaku is a man now, yes? *chuckles* I do wonder what that meeting will bring? More pain, a sliver of solace, another mistake?

Ah, lovely chapter, full of pretty words and questions! I can't wait for the next update! Thanks for this one! <3


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 10) - Mon 24 Feb 2014

Wow, you can just feel Kagome's mind starting to break with the angst and hate.
I would love to see some of Sesshomaru's POV though.

Does he understand Kagome's mind is starting to break? Does he want her spirit and mind broken? How does he take her constant attempts at hurting herself or does he care? He seems to consider Kagome his "treasure" so wouldn't he want her whole and sane?

I wonder who will end up with the darkest fic? Catalina's story is way creeper with her take on Rin! But your story shows Kagome just ever so slowly breaking.......can't wait for the next chapter!


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