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hana sora (Chapter 15) - Thu 12 Jun 2014

Sesshy sure will kill him! Cant wait for the next!


Itoe Hime (Chapter 15) - Thu 12 Jun 2014

yikes!

I need more~!! need to find out what happens next, quick!

=)

 

Another great chapter, Wonderbug! It was captivating!


Maria-Salvatore29 (Chapter 15) - Thu 12 Jun 2014

OH GOD, OH GOD, OH GOD, OH GOD.

 

I DONT LIKE KOHAKU THOUGH.

 

STILL TEAM SESSHOMARU.

 

HEHEHEHE.

 

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!


Luna C. (Chapter 15) - Thu 12 Jun 2014

Omg Sesshomaru now knows! Oh lord, I'm on the edge of seat! I wonder what he's going to do, will he now have his way with Kagome or would he find Kohaku and kill him! This suspense is killing me.

I hope you update soon!


Lace (Chapter 15) - Thu 12 Jun 2014

I am really enjoying how Kagome is maturing throughout this story. Granted, she is so incredibly fragile, and were she not immortal she would have broken apart and left the world long ago, but under that flimsy psyche is a strength that makes her who she is. Her desperation is really tangible in this chapter, as the rational part of her mind attempts to keep a grasp on reality. And poor Kohaku, he is still that guileless boy at heart, taken advantage of by circumstance and his love interest's attempts to stay sane.

I can only hope that bit of Kagome's strength will spark a bit soon, because shit's gonna go down soon and she'll need it, ughhh. (I keep imagining Kagome suddenly going super Saiyan on Sesshoumaru and tearing him a new one, but I doubt that'll happen anytime soon LOL. D: )

Safe travels this weekend! :)


Andrea (Chapter 15) - Thu 12 Jun 2014

UH OH.


Stella Mira (Chapter 14) - Mon 09 Jun 2014

This has to be the darkest chapter of yours I have read so far...the horror runs deeper in this than even in Ab initio. I must say I both loathed and loved it - for the subtlety of the violence visited upon her, the illusion of freedom, the blood-lathered reality of her situation, and the flawless execution of it all. Gods, I love you, I adore this so much! I think I hate you a little for making me like such things. Lol

Kagome's matured so much in these last chapters, or more like forced to mature, but her transformation is lovely. How she cornered Kohaku, made him hearken to her will...it was magnificent. The nightmare that overlapped with reality was sublime, I'm kinda stunned speechless, actually. Your word choice, level of description, insidious lust and mindfuck...I dunno how you do it, honestly, but you need to teach me that! It was so tangible...I felt shivers crawling over my skin - so wrong but so right. And I still can't find it in myself to abhor Sesshomaru because he's so terible that he becomes perfect. Beauty lies in the purity of things and he holds another kind of purity. @.@

Seriously, I'm in love with this! Please update soon, yes? :3


Loren (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 May 2014

Finaly! I was wondering when Sesshoumaro will lose his patience.  17 years.. well, WOW. 

You write it beautifully (hunted and beautiful).

I like the slow pace you pull off between Kagome and evil Sesshoumaro . By far more thrilling.

Please please update sooner!


Lace (Chapter 14) - Wed 28 May 2014

I totally missed the chapter 13 update- imagine my joy when I realized I could read two chapters in one day. Euphoria~

Ohh, I knew it would have to happen eventually in such a dark story, but it is still heartbreaking all that Kagome endures.  I am worried about her state of mind and sense of self, and especially about what Kohaku may do if he senses a change.  Your writing is so fluid and lovely as usual :) those transitions are smooth as butter.

[Currently working on a Transgressions fanart; slow down with all the inspiration you're giving me, please! I can't keep up :D ]


Lace (Chapter 14) - Wed 28 May 2014

I totally missed the chapter 13 update- imagine my joy when I realized I could read two chapters in one day. Euphoria~

Ohh, I knew it would have to happen eventually in such a dark story, but it is still heartbreaking all that Kagome endures.  I am worried about her state of mind and sense of self, and especially about what Kohaku may do if he senses a change.  Your writing is so fluid and lovely as usual :) those transitions are smooth as butter.

[Currently working on a Transgressions fanart; slow down with all the inspiration you're giving me, please! I can't keep up :D ]


Miko Sayuri (Chapter 14) - Wed 28 May 2014

Great chapter!!!! Loving the details you put forth in your story. Well executed and brilliantly written. 

 

Kagome and Kohaku scene was heart breaking and beautful. Under different light would have made a good couple, but we all know it won't last. Therefore I'm glad Kagome got some good and happy memories with him. Its hard to believe 17 years have passed but then again time slows down when your soul bounded to someone, where time no longer matters.

 

Sesshomaru and Kagome's scene was hard to read but i couldn't stop reading it. Its sad to see someone like her break, but at the same time anyone would feel defeated, if we were in her position. I just hope she somehow finds a way out of this and gets him back. Hell have no fury like a scorn woman, in this case an abused one. 

 

Thanks for the update, its appreicated!!! 


April (Chapter 14) - Wed 28 May 2014

Now I sleep happy congrats on a great chapter it's almost 1 am here sweet dreams


Kounami (Chapter 14) - Wed 28 May 2014

Lemme just say as beautifully written and engaging as this fic is... I've never disliked Sesshoumaru so much in my life! But I LOVE his dsrk character.... my emotions are at war!


Sammi-Chan (Chapter 14) - Wed 28 May 2014

Yay! I was so glad to see you updated! It made my week! Love that its dark! Hope you finish this fic! 


Luna C. (Chapter 14) - Wed 28 May 2014

I love the interactions between Kagome and Kohaku, but I have a feeling all good things must come to an end.

Can't wait for your next update!

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 14) - Wed 28 May 2014

Nice, keep it coming.


The-infamous-one (Chapter 14) - Tue 27 May 2014

It's a beautiful story, tho I'm not going to lie, Kagome is rather selfish for letting Kohaku love and be with her. 

They will eventually mess up.  please update soon.


rose (Chapter 14) - Tue 27 May 2014

next chapter please


Stella Mira (Chapter 13) - Sat 24 May 2014

Bah, I messed up my wording and didn't convey this well: "It's so lovely that it becomes ugly and, when you look away for a minute, it becomes lovely once more." I meant the situation that is taking place, not the words themselves. The words are pretty, so pretty, that you almost forget how ugly what occurs is. That is what I wanted to say, but I'm an idiot and I haven't slept for 40 hours, so I messed up. >.< Sowwy, Char!


Stella Mira (Chapter 13) - Sat 24 May 2014

Such beautiful description for such horrid realities, but more than that, more than pretty words, it's...haunting, really, hauntingly beautiful. It's so lovely that it becomes ugly and, when you look away for a minute, it becomes lovely once more. That's what I think of your writing. Lol What amazes me is your ability to engulf so much emotion, to summarize something terribly vast and pain-ridden in one single, short sentence like "No ghosts apart from herself." It gives me the shivers, truly.

Haaaa. Now that I've had my fangirl moment on your writing style, I'mma talk about this chappie. I can't say I didn't see this coming, but expecting one thing and seeing it written are two different things. The execution was flawless... It had flow, felt like slinking in deep waters, coming up for air only to swallow more water. I dunno whom I pity more here, but everyone is to be pitied -- even Sesshomaru. When you curse someone, you open two graves, as they say. I wonder when it will dawn on him. As for Kohaku, I fear he will do something stupid, brave but stupid. *shakes head* I hope he doesn't...

Thank you for this update. I loooooved it, Char! looking forward to more! :3


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