You know, Sesshomaru... your straight out LIE that you have no interest in courting her Probably didn't help Kagome's mindset on you.

Thanks for writing.

I just found your story and I love it already! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Nerds everywhere unite! lol This was great.

Sesshoumaru? A romantic? NOOO. WHAT HE IS?! well now he is at least. For a minute there I was pretty sure I was reading shakespeare.

It was utterly fantastic! Oh? you thought I was referring the the cheesyness? Of course not! That was utterly epic. Yes, utterly epic, thats how wonderful it was!

Grammar "?":

"Sweet where he was unbearably sour, soft, where he was hard, bright where he was so very dark."

*Here you put the common but in the other two there is no comma seperating the adjective and the clause. I think you meant...

"Sweet where he was unbearably sour, soft where he was hard, bright where he was so very dark"

awww poor sesshoumaru always gets the short end of the stick. Nobody understands him! lol not. Anywho, what could Sesshoumaru possibly have to talk about that he doesn't want people to overhear, and he's uncomforable about? hmm. idk

lol that actually made me laugh out loud. yea for real! who would have guessed?! I think it has something to do with imagining the canon sesshoumaru as a nerd, lol it just kinda doesn't fit, its weird

...I can't believe you didn't tell me you were updating this, it pains my heart to have to find out on the front page *sigh*

Anyways, Sesshoumaru needs to stop pouting he put himself in the situation he's in, come now sesshoumaru get your .... together

I LOVED this chapter! I was laughing so hard from that first sentence. Beautiful!  I love this little war they have going on and the fact that only one of them even knows it's happening is to funny for words.

"And pigs could fly." Hahaha! Fucking great. That cracked me up, big time! Thanks for a slew of updates~ happy writing!

.......she regifted it....D:....that's so terrible its hilarious! I do believe that's karma! She deserved getting wacked. And good news no glaring mistakes lol, not even little tiny ones either! i'm so disappointed jk. Anyways You better update quickly! Yes, I know you just did but that doesn't count!

LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol Kagome is hilarious, and poor Sesshoumaru his feelings have probably just been crushed by that reaction. lol, and yay! Bokuseno is in the next one!! (maybe idk for sure)

Question Time:

Did she wear the flower crown?

Spelling Mistake:

“Oswari! I’m not anyone’s, anyways.” *Osuwari (No offense but... I'm a little disappointed, this word is at least every fic, at least 6 times lol jkJK)

Phew, good thing she didnt say it... Im sure he would have been offended xD

Ah, Sesshomaru. To learn that the best laid plans gang aft englay. :pause: Gosh I hope I spelled that right. :sheepish: ah well. Comes with the territory of not seeing the spoken words written before.

Thanks for writing.

Poor demon....

lol kid's say the darndest things, and then just totally ruin your life. lol I do believe rin has fallen several levels on the favorite child chart, if she keeps it up he's going to like Jaken more than rin, and nobody wants that! And sesshoumaru stop brooding and take control of the situation!

Oh Heavens! I would jump for the moon if Rin let that slip this was Sesshoumaru's idea if I were Kagome.  Kagome needs to use some modern day girl on 'Lord Sesshoumaru' ;)

lmFao, he better come up with an excuse fast other wise he is going to going to have a lot of explaining to do lol But they have to remember he's not human so why would he be doing human courtship? HMM?

Spelling Mistake:

"the silence that filled the cleaning after Rin’s guileless statement was loud." *Clearing. Well I'm going to assume you meant that. And I only caught it on like my 5th read through, I'm so proud of myself. lol

Grammar lessson!:

lol I know, I know grammar who needs it *eye roll* lol

Anyways I just wanted to throw this out there, but when I took english 2 years ago, I remembered one rule lol its never plan on, its plan to. But this is just strict grammar rules, in everyday language its accepted. so your sentence would be...

"insinuating things he had not yet planned to insinuate"

also

"Sesshomaru had not planned for Rin to state it was his idea"

I'm not sure if you actually care about nit picky opinionated things such as planned on VS planned to but I thought I'd let you know just incase you did. Also, it was two years ago, english changes alot. Anyways take it or leave it you're awesome either way!

Also It makes me feel important, like my review actually means something instead of YAY UPDATE!! lol

Lol! I imagine Sesshomaru muttering, "Hrn"

LOL...

"Knowing him, he’d probably poisoned it or something"
so funny... hehehe...
missed reading this story past few days...
glad to get back to it.
^_^