Great idea for the story, I can't wait to read more! I added it in favorites!
The story captured my imagination. It looks serious and romantic already. I like your portrayal of Kagome. All the little details in your story make the story alive. I loved how he suggested her tea to heal her troubles. I didn’t expect that, but it was a pleasant surprise. It made the story more Oriental in my opinion and more soulful.
Please continue :)
Loved this part:
She knew it was mocking her. Left a friend of mine somewhere, did you? Now look where you are. Your secret’s been told to a stranger.
:) love the writing so far, can't wait for more.
Great beginning!!! I cant tell that this will be a wonderful story! Cant wait to see what he wrote her! :)
WOw...maybe Sesshomaru left her a note of his own as a reply :clasps:
:gasps: I bet Sesshomaru has a lot of questions!
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