Woops! Well, now you probably have to find a way to make her mad enough to forget she's scared. Good Job Sesshoumaru.
OOO yea! hes writing back, thats always my favorite part, after of course how he embarrasses hisself so whole heartedly infront of her. This story is so absolutely endearing, I obviously totally love it!
Ps. Crazy Stupid Love is a fantastic movie and you should see it if you haven't yet! (lol I just watched it tonight, and when I read this chapter it reminded me of it, *sigh* true love)
lol Leave it to bokusenou to absolutetly neglect sesshoumaru and his quest for information! And the funny thing is he's going to have to take it in stride, its not like he can just kill him for information, that would be utterly impossible!, ok maybe not impossible, but highly unlikely Sesshoumaru made that entire trip for nothing
Rin (Chapter 13) - Sun 06 Nov 2011
Yep. That would be mixed signals with no sign of clearing those up anytime soon. Good luck to Kagome.
Rin (Chapter 12) - Sun 06 Nov 2011
Kagome's just so cute here. <3 Let that educated mind of your work for you girl!
As a side note, I disagree with Kagome being usless in a fight...but I can overlook it with how cute this seems. <3
Rin (Chapter 5) - Sun 06 Nov 2011
Awwww! That is freaking adorable....and now I have to go make myself some tea. XP <3
Sorry I was away so long, happy to get a small pack of chappies to delight in. Sesshomaru was so funny trying to pawn off Rin's coronets and I loved how he wanted space to ask about Kagome. It reminds me of my little cousin who always acts touch then pulls me aside to talk about a girl. Too cute!
I can't wait for more progression!
You're doing great
See you soon
--SSS
lol what is a tree going to know about a time traveling miko? Sure he's extremely old and extremely wise but he's stuck in one spot. I can't wait to find out though
Stacy (Chapter 59) - Wed 02 Nov 2011
Tell he says, eh? *snicker*
I wonder how'd that turn out?
-Why?
-I want to court her!
-Following your father's footsteps now, eh?
But seeing as he was in her time and in her school, I'd say he ain't as successful as he'd like, at least not in that old era
lol
I guess Bokuseno was like, "Eh? That one?"
Lumi (Chapter 58) - Tue 01 Nov 2011
She should kill her lack of desire for Sesshomaru.
Sorry, that was completely unhelpful.
Uh... Oh! So far, I'm loving all your representations of the characters. I think you're doing them all a lot of justice. :)
Since my grammatical help is unwanted, I'll try something new.
Extra Space Mistake:
"I say killing spree because you attempt repeatedly and never succeed." *It seems as if you have an extra space in between "because" and "you", it should look a little something like...
"I say killing spree because you attempt repeatedly and never succeed."
lol I can't believe I actually noticed that.
Also this chapter is funny, because at the end Kagome was extremely close to killing something, when throughout the chapter she was talking about how Inuyasha was the one attempting to kill a thing. lol It's like...ironic!
D: SIT HIM! :@
D: What a daring male! She's not urs!....Yet!
ehrm.... Sesshomaru-sama are you all right? Did a moquitoe bite you or something?
lol Sesshomaru is a NERD!!! Nom nom!
Aww... he can't lick her pain away :(
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