Can't wait for more! This is such a fantastic story - thank you for writing this. I feel like this would be so cool if it became a movie or anime because there's so much technacality and fighting that would really be easily to understand visually! (But also great to understand via words because that leaves so much to the imagination of each reader). Love it!
Can't wait to learn more about what's happening, and also some more romance~
Thank you for writing! Eagery anticipating the next chapter...
Was trying to read this all day, finally got to finish! Woo, feel like some pieces are starting to fall together. I'm so excited for the next chapter!!!
This was a great chapter. It really does help to fill in some gaps as to what's happened so far. I'm really getting excited to see how the story will proceed from here. I feel like the mission that they have the next morning will be a bit of a turning point, but then again, I could be completely wrong. Anyways, onwards and upwards! Can't wait :D
LOVED IT! great chapter. I always look forward to your updates. I can't wait to see what happens next!(:
Love this story! So original I'm absolutely hooked. Thank you for the amazing job!
Oh, one last thing , I (think) I caught a slight typo in the paragraph before the last one this chapter. It should be "vial", not "vile". At least I figure that's what you meant, as a vial is a sort of bottle, and vile is an adjective, not a noun.
Hope to read more as soon as you post the next chapter ! So excited to see what happens next!
Mona (Chapter 21) - Sun 06 Nov 2016
Great! I hope to read more soon.
(Chapter 20) - Sun 06 Nov 2016
Good things come to those who wait. And your story is def a good thing. I am looking forward to their explosive first meeting. I can't wait to see what happens until then :)
(Chapter 20) - Sat 05 Nov 2016
No update today I'm sad ): This story is one of the greatest I've ever read on here. Awesome job.
I'm sure I haven't left enough reviews to express this but I love this story. Its so original and the development of the characters with their different relationships has been great. Seriously keep on writing!
(Chapter 20) - Wed 02 Nov 2016
I'm neither frustrated nor upset, i'm just so in love with your story omg!! I don't usually leave reviews (insert lazy reader here) but after spending my afternoon reading this how could i not leave one! Love how detailed this is, don't let bad reviews take you down! (when you're that good ppl just hate *shrugs*) Now excuse me while i stalk my email for the next chapter~
Lonelylulaby (Chapter 20) - Tue 01 Nov 2016
Well, I would just like to state for the record that Yuka never crossed my mind in a million years. I really didn't think it was going to be someone we had already met before. Poor little Yuka getting eclipsed by Kagome her whole life and developing an inferiority complex. Favorite part was of course the Sess & Kag scene, I really thought Jess had died but I'm glad he didn't. I wonder what that thing was that Yuka gave to Kagome tho. A flash drive of information? The perfected drug? Find out next time on Her Voice.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
First review, I just wanna say that I love this and while yes I do tend to get frustrated with the pace it has to do with the fact that I LOVE this story and waiting for updates makes me anxious because honestly: you tell one HELL of a story. Everyday I actually look for an update even though I know you only update once a week. But that is literally now much I love this story and the web you are weaving. I'm invested in this and it'll will be one I read over and over again once its completed. Don't let anyone stress you out!
So Yuka was a twist! But good lord, that was intense. I enjoyed that little subplot because it was creepy and felt a whole lot like the anime it's self, since we often got treated with subplots that fell into the main plot subtlely. Poor Kagome, she's really in the thick of it isn't she?
Can't wait for next week!
Love love love it! I cant express how wonderful this story is. Let it be as long as you want it. I love all of the detail and plot you've put into it! Keep up the wonderful work :-)
(Chapter 20) - Mon 31 Oct 2016
Awesome story. Can't wait for the next chapter! Love the amount of details you have put into this :)
Wow, so it was Yuka! Interesting chapter, I can't wait for the next!
Aww thanks for mentioning my art!! Of course still loving the story! Can't wait for Chalter 21! I'm on edge about this "secret mission".
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