Really amazing story. I appreciate how the plot has unfurled slowly, with purpose. I don't know how you manage weaving the plotlines of each character so intricately. I can tell that you have put massive amounts of love, dedication and work into this story. Can't wait to see the meeting of Sesshoumaru and Kagome, but I'm willing to wait!
I have to admit, I didn't think this story would be much going by the summary but once I gave it a chance, I got hooked! The story is very well written, different from what is normally found on dokuga. Very descriptive, no "shortcuts" taken in the way its written. You did an awesome job in writing this story and making it interesting! I like how you've truly made a story of your own, only borrowing rumikos characters.
I can't help but wonder if naraku is a good or bad guy.. whether he's just someone who has his own interests or is just plain old bad.
I started the story when there were ~23 chapters. I had plowed through this story for 2 days reading whenever I could and now that I'm all caught up... all the anticipation and excitement is building up. I can't wait to read the future chapters!
Once again, great job with the awesome story!
Oh my gosh! This is getting heavy!
I just got caught up and i'm so curious about Kagome being turned into a Homing Beacon and the highly likely Baasratu attack. I mean they're right on top of the Eden now! You've got me in such suspense. I'm still puzzling over the Baasratu from the assassin mission, and it's weird message to them.
Some how I didn't get notified about your updates, but it means I got to have a nice burst of chapters to catch up on.
Thanks for all of your hard work you've put into this crazy fic. I'll say this time and again, you could very seriously flesh this further out and write a killer scifi/fantasy novel or series.
I wish you good luck in writing the rest of this story, as I'm really hoping to see another thirty or more chapters.
Much respect and appreciation,
Holy crap batman!! The energy that was pulsing from kagome's back had to be some type of homing beacon!! Oh my gosh!!! The brown stuff is going to hit the fan!!! Gah!!
Such an awesome chapter!! I kind of wonder if the Baasratu are going to be able to control Kagome?? That'd be so crazy If they would be able to use her powers as a weapon against the others. I can't wait for the next chapter, i love your story????
Nooooo!!!! How could you! I still cant figure out if Naraku is behind all of this or if someone else is. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat trying to figure out whats going to happen next! Please update soon. The suspense is going to destroy us all!
Omg it was totally a beacon. I'm on edge waiting for an update!
Eroviaa Hunter (Chapter 23) - Sun 20 Nov 2016
Sorry I was too lazy to log in. I dunno why but for some reason this reminds me of the Macross series. I wonder if Kagome is going to turn into a kind of emulator and be able to connect to the 'bad' aliens. Though it seems that Kagome herself is a little more than human because the accident happen. Cant wait to see what happens.
(Chapter 23) - Sun 20 Nov 2016
I got to read a couple chapters in a row and I didn't want it to stop. How could no one think it was a beacon?! It also makes you wonder why they are going after Kagome. Well Sesshoumaru ain't having any of that! I love when the pieces start coming together and I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Mary Sun (Chapter 23) - Sun 20 Nov 2016
This is amazing! Thank you for writing this story. I can't wait to read more!!! This is keeping me on the edge of my seat!
Dear god the anticipation is killing me!!!!!
Hmm odd. something very odd is going on specifically with the bas and kagome. obviously targetting her, but God, Naraku knew who it was?! that ass
blommie8 (Chapter 23) - Sun 20 Nov 2016
Oh my! The early update was truly welcomed and appreciated, but to leave it there! This story is phenomenal...I don't know what else to say. So, did the energy they planted in Kagome turn her into a beacon or had this already been in the works? Is she connected to the baasratu somehow even before this? Please update soon! I want to know whats going on!!!!
Must you allways end on a cliffhanger????? I CANNOT LIVE LIKE THIS. HOLY CRAP THO
(Chapter 21) - Thu 17 Nov 2016
honestly, I love the way the story is going. it's not too slow those "bitching" about wanting it to go faster don't understand good storytelling. you have worked wonderfully on this story I can tell you put allot of thought and care into this that is why I appreciate it all the more. You have REAL talent as I stated before you can make this into a stand alone book or manga if you so wished it, IT IS THAT GOOD.
Amazing Chapter. I can't hardly wait for an update but I guess I will find a way. I love the world you have created and how the characters interact with this new world. These last few chapters were incredible! Keep up the great work.
Omg! This chapter was so good! I can't wait to see what happens to Kagome!!
(Chapter 22) - Tue 15 Nov 2016
Great chapter, thanks for update on Kimi. i can only assume Naraku shouldn't be sharing all the top secret stuff he's been working on With the rest of the team. Makes me wonder about him, like it can't be him bc it's too obvious.
My fave part is that Kags so openly shared what happened to her with Sess like it was just not up for discussion. Very telling of how trusting they are of each other, and I love that. But seriously, what the hell kind of cliffie?!?! Poor Kagome and poor Sess. Wonder if they are still psychically linked though not through the pods. thanks for writing!
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