Reviews for Melancholy by Alon

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Kyo (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

Wow huh? Sess really did took note of the time. I wonder how you'll bring them together. Oh, drama is now in full blown. What will happen next?


xDori (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

Oh no... that card huh? Nice chapter! Keep 'em coming.


Zyren (Chapter 2) - Tue 06 Oct 2015

Ouch! I felt that, so sad! How did he find her? Was he there knowing she would be? if so why now?


Mona (Chapter 2) - Tue 06 Oct 2015

p.s. looking forward to the next update, hopefully soon.


Mona (Chapter 2) - Tue 06 Oct 2015

I was hoping he didnt mate, have coitus and produce a child/heir, sadly he did.  I hope Kagome at least has a boyfriend and within those four years, two months and fourteen days had coitus with someone as well.  Hopefully it won't be her getting shit on (excuse the language), like always when I read some other fanfics.


Susy V (Chapter 2) - Tue 06 Oct 2015

He has a son!? That... demon! I mean, ugh! this is really just the foam. You're just teasing! And you got me anxious to see what will be around the corner! Oh, please oh, please! Update soon? 


perilousporclyn (Chapter 2) - Tue 06 Oct 2015

I love love love this story.  I find myself lost in thought thinking about what our favorite couple is going to go through. I am excited to read Sesshoumarus POV for the last "4 years, 2 months and 13 days". Please update soon. I can't wait to read! :D


No Uta (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Oct 2015

Ooooh I like this so far!!!!!! I shall follow it! 


DaughterOfTheSevenSeas (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Oct 2015

Wow that was really good. I'm hooked :) Sometimes the dialogue confused me, like at first I thought he was breaking up with her, but I understood in the end :) Good job, can't wait to read more :)


White_Lotus (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Oct 2015

I hope all is well! I've actually read Criminal a few days ago, so i'm glad you have a new fic up :p Oh there's just something about depressing stories that get to me. Looking forward to reading more of your writing!


wiiTneSs (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Oct 2015

Looking forward to see where this will lead.


Jennn (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Oct 2015

Oh my gosh I cannot wait for the next update!! I love it!!


Mona (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Oct 2015

Great!!!  Please update soon, I'm dying to read if he went through mating anyway.


Yin - Yang M (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Oct 2015

love it. update soon.


Inudemoness (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Oct 2015

OH I LOVE THE PLOT!!!! i hope its not too depressing though cuz i don't want themto suffer like crazy!!! i wonder if there wud b a time skip in nxt ch..... can't wait!!! <3


tabitha (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Oct 2015

Omg please I need more!!!!!!!!


xDori (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Oct 2015

Nice chapter. I want to read more! Update soon but take your time :)


Pineappowl (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Oct 2015

Saddd, but SO well written. I definately will be waiting to read more. C:


Kyo (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Oct 2015

Hey, the fic is starting to be getting good but I hope it won't take the route "She left him, got someone else, they had a confrontation, both went back to each other and broke their lovers' hearts, conflict everywhere, and voila, happily ever after". That is so cliche and I'm tired reading fics that are like that. Philippine dramas ruined me in that department.


Shae_Nichole (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Oct 2015

very interesting opening, it was very thoughtful and didn't gave away to much on what was to happen next. I am very interested in reading your next chapter, can't wait for future updates.


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