Oh, poor Hiro. Poor Maki! But I so loved this chapter. Full of angst and heartache! Am I weird for that? But this chapter is full of it and I completely love it. I wonder if Hiro and Maki are another Sesshoumaru and Kagome.
Amaya (Chapter 10) - Sat 17 Oct 2015
Your story has me hooked! I'm really enjoying it and chapter 10 was full of complex emotion that was very relatable. Keep up the amazing work :)
So she found her! I wonder what she's gonna do. Is she gonna try and chain Kagome to Sessh? Or kill her? I can't wait!!
Next, keep it coming.
Adomani (Chapter 10) - Fri 16 Oct 2015
MOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Awww this was a really good chapter. I really like the character Hiro.
A rapidly developing bittersweet drama.I love the interplay between the characters and enjoy the twists and turns. 'Criminal' is great, but this moves me in a different way. They might be demons, but the way they respond to love and sadness are so much the same as humans. Can't wait to see how this pans out.
Yaaaaay!!!! Next Please...
I just want sesshy no other can replace him XD
Amazing chapter! Hope we get details on kagomes date, loved all the drama
Mona (Chapter 10) - Fri 16 Oct 2015
<3 This was a great chapter. It revealed a lot, Hiro feelings, Maki feelings and the appearance of Sesshoumarus wife.
It just, i dont know. . Kinda sad for the whole relationship between kagome and sesshomaru :(
yes Bankotsu! I've read BankotsuxKagome fics before and they were entertaining. I wouldn't mind seeing more of the story from Hiro's perspective. I love that you have original characters in the mix and they arent just used as love interests! Once again thank you for updating!
angel (Chapter 9) - Fri 16 Oct 2015
I really love this chapter keep up the good work:)
love it update soon
Keep it coming.
Haven (Chapter 9) - Thu 15 Oct 2015
I'm really liking Bankotsu in this!!
Always happy to see an update. Hope bank askes kagome out <3 I would love to read how sesshomaru would react
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