Reviews for Melancholy by Alon

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ShikonNoTamaMiko (Chapter 3) - Thu 08 Oct 2015

Sure you can leave everything for love , as was marrying Sesshoumaru to humiliate human beings ; That is pathetic .

Kagome need a love that wants unconditionally, do not be afraid to love and show your love with facts.
Sesshomaru already has a life,
Kagome is alone , she needs a new love.

ShikonNoTamaMiko (Chapter 3) - Thu 08 Oct 2015

You can dejat all for the love , since Sesshomaru was marrying not only save a people , but to humiliate human beings loa ; That is pathetic .

Kagome need a love that wants unconditional and not subject to love and show your love forever.
Sesshomaru already has a life , Kagome this one she needs a new partner.

hana sora (Chapter 3) - Thu 08 Oct 2015

 

Keep it coming!!


Halcali (Chapter 3) - Thu 08 Oct 2015

"She left me."

lol Sesshoumaru. Of course, she's going to leave you. You're marrying another woman! Are you expecting her to be your mistress? You can't have it all.

That being said, I'm loving this story and their complicated relationship. I wonder how are they going to move forward now that Sesshoumaru finally found her?

Looking forward to the next! :)

 


xDori (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

Thanks for the chapter. The dual perspectives is good. It's nice to see what's going on in Sesshoumaru ' s head as well. Update soon :)


perilousporclyn (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

Wow. Sesshoumarus reaction when he sees her is everything. Although he does know that it is his decision that what's causing them to be seperated and in pain, my heart breaks for Sess. Keep up the great work. I'm loving it so far.


wiiTneSs (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

Interesting.  How will they get back together now that sesshoumaru has a family?  Does kagome  have a boyfriend? Inu yasha

 

 

 


Susy V (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

Awwww! What a chapter! I don't know but chapters where they're Sesshomaru's POV always get me. I guess because of his thought process and since he's so quiet most of the time. But, oh! I think I'll re-read this chapter again once I come back from dinner! oh, and just FYI, you did make my heart ache! 


Couldntbekeener3 (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

Heart breaking????????????


Mona (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

Enjoyed the dual perspective but I have to admit I was looking forward to read what happens after Sesshoumaru stated how long it's been.  Please update soon.


Kyo (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

Aaaaawwwww... All parties are hurting. Is Akemi only driven by pride to have Sess's heart or does she love him for real? Though it's obviously the latter if her reactions are an indication. Sometimes I feel bad for wives like that but other times I can say it's better to give up and move on. You'll only look pathetic trying to get the love of a man who doesn't want you.


Sarah (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Oct 2015
It wouldn't be unheard of for a king to give up his throne and legacy, King Edward VIII gave it up to marry his lover, Wallis Simpson

SessQueen (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

Good story so far.


Akoq (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

superb heartwrentching story. 


Alondra (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

You should continue with the story... Its has a good start


Sarah (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Oct 2015
Yes I agree with the other reviewer about not making this one of those cliche stories.

maricela (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

i really like this story thank you.


hana sora (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

I dont know but i really hate sesshomaru for not choosing kagome. . Only because of power? Huh


kagomesirene (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

Great story....and just like you i hope this plot won't become on of these cliché stories

"....he left because he needed na acceptable demon mate/pure heir...mate either died tragically/ is a bitch and neither deserves Sesshou nor their pup... Kagome forgives Sesshou his betrayal and becomes a happy wify-mommy...because she still loves Sesshou just so very much...and the kid is just soooo cute....and it's been such a hard decision for Sesshou and she can finally comprehend why he did not chose her ...and now that he has his inheritans and heir he finally realized his mistakes and that she is the one piece missing in his life"  

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 ...bah... life changing decision sometimes leave nothing but hurt feelings and regret...it's hard to work through something like that...and i can imagine that an innocent and cute child is the worst and most hurtful reminder of a betrayal like Sesshous :C

 

Please keep up the great work... XD


Haven (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Oct 2015

I can't wait to find out what Sesshomaru will do now that he's found her. 
Hmmmmm Maybe she has a boyfriend now? Who is someone Kagome hates besides Inuyasha and Naraku?
OH! What about Bankotsu?  


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