Reviews for Melancholy by Alon

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Debra (Chapter 7) - Tue 13 Oct 2015

Half demon pup. Sorry. I'd also love to see Sesshoumaru's reaction to her having a child of her own.


Debra (Chapter 7) - Tue 13 Oct 2015

I'd like to see Kagome get involved with another demon, and have a little have demon pup. Then I can actually see her wearing the ring so she can live longer with her pup. Otherwise she would probably die before he grew up. Then she would have something to actually be thankful to Sesshoumaru for. At this point she really doesn't have anything from him to be thankful for, since he only causes her pain. 


KairaB (Chapter 7) - Tue 13 Oct 2015

Is this gonna have a happy ending for the two of them?


Jcdbunny (Chapter 7) - Tue 13 Oct 2015

I hope you write in another love intreat for kagome, love triangles are so dramatic <3 I love how openly in love sesshomaur is in this story, amazing chapter thank you for the update 


xDori (Chapter 7) - Tue 13 Oct 2015

So much heartbreak!!! Gahhh. Thanks for the update :) hopefully things work out


Niomi (Chapter 7) - Tue 13 Oct 2015

P.S. Hiro is kinda of interesting, in a mature young man kind of way. My spidy senses tells me he has a crush on Kagome 


Niomi (Chapter 7) - Tue 13 Oct 2015

I can't take it. Seriously. The tension. Hah. I understand what you mean about the ring but I can't look at it any other way!! The whole married and mistress thing is just too unforgivable for me. Ugh I am seriously living for your updates but then again, I don't think I can handle the suspense. I am seriously hating on Sess. I don't want them to be friends! lol. I also enjoy reading the reviews too. Everyones so worked up


Glxydragon (Chapter 7) - Tue 13 Oct 2015

Good chapter. Thank you for the update.


Jcdbunny (Chapter 5) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

So in love with this story!!! I have read it like 30 times since I found it yesterday. You are an amazing writer. 


perilousporclyn (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

hmm...I'm wondering where this is going, but im loving the ride. Keep up the great work. :D


Glxydragon (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

I feel so bad for kags and sessh. Good chapter.  Please update soon. 


Adomani (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

What are you waiting for??you have no content?  go write more chapters!! (if you have time of course) 

Don't abandon this story never ): 


hana sora (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

This is so sad, when you love someone but you cant have her or him. . I just hope that this story has a happy ending somehow. .


Niomi (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

Thanks for the update :)  I am following Criminal too and hope you get your muse back. That characters you created and the plot is quite unique so it's understandable. 

Anyhow, i love how everything is so simple but so realistic. I don't really understand the meaning of his gift/note. Does he honestly think a stupid ring could fix things. UGH ITS so frustrating. And I don't even want to think about how is wife is gonna come into play. I don't want to feel sorry for her. Hah. I'm too much. Talk to you again soon ;)

 


YukiAi (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

Loving this story! I love the sadness and realistic overall emotions of the characters. And I love the unpredictableness. Please keep it up. 


LadyFugue (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

Almost didn't read this, now I'm glad I did, please update again, I love it.


Blommie8 (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

Selenityhyperion (Chapter 6) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

WHAT?! Seriously, Sesshomaru?! That will NOT make up for what you did! I don't think Kagome will wear it but she might keep it just because she wants to give it back to him when she sees him next!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 5) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

Awwww this situation is getting pretty annoyingly awful for them! Too bad Akemi didn't just die LOL


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 4) - Mon 12 Oct 2015

WOAH! Kags is seeing someone?! But there has been no mention of this yet! Maybe she is lying to him or just not telling the full truth? Still... take that bastard!

 

But still... poor Sesshy. He seems to really care?


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