Reviews for Melancholy by Alon

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Mona (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Oct 2015

Amazing, I loved the title and it's double meaning.  I wonder when Sesshoumaru is scheduled to leave since he is only visiting on business.  

I wonder who Kagome dated after Sesshoumaru.  And if she will open her heart again for someone else, since it is officially over.  There is no more hiding because she has nothing to hide from anymore, she closed that chapter of her life.  Now it's time to move on.

please update soon.


Haven (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Oct 2015

I  can't wait to read more! :D


Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Sat 10 Oct 2015

Love, Love, LOVE This! I do hope that Sesshoumaru's eyes will be open to how his treatment of not only Kagome, but his wife and child will eventually leave him alone... and miserable.

Looking so forward to more!


Susy V (Chapter 4) - Sat 10 Oct 2015

I wanna be like, give the ifeel prince hell! But he did love her, he does! And not being with her hurts, but he chose power over her! I am so I trusted by what his next actions will be! Such a great chapter! And are you going to spin off some romance on the little worker bees that work for Kagome? 


Niomi (Chapter 4) - Sat 10 Oct 2015

Guurrl I live for your updates too. 

Boy, it feels all too real. I feel for them both but good for Kagome, she cant be anyone's sidebish ! she needs to stand her ground too, CONSIDERING HE'S STILL MARRIED. I love him, but that fucker! He has balls to ask or want anything. UGH PLease


perilousporclyn (Chapter 4) - Sat 10 Oct 2015

I agree with one of the other reviews, I live for your updates. ;D


Jennn (Chapter 4) - Sat 10 Oct 2015

LOVE! Can't wait for the next chapter (:


ofelia largadas (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

Gosh!!! im dying for the nexr episode!!!! but i really wish Sesshomaru will come to his senses and make his choice , they had been hurt so much already!!! please? thank you for this chapter , hope wou can make the next already since were already waiting ne?

 


Zyren (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

Who does he think he is to just waltz back into her life and expect her to slide back in to side chick position. And he's so unapologetic about it too! It's doesn't matter if you don't love your wife, you still have a wife! 


hana sora (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

If only he realize it before then this wont be happened


Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

Gahhhhhhh what a cliff hanger!!!!!!!


Silverblossom (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

Man this is so heartbreaking! :'( but this is also a great story!! I love it.. Wow what a mind-boggling situation huh. he loves her, even after she waa gone for that long... I wonder is she teally dating someone else or did she lie? And I'm guessing that someone else is Inuyasha..I wonder how Sesshoumaru will react... He will heartbroken with the idea that she has moved on but then again he's married.


Petrina (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

Does 'komainu' mean something? Ah the angst! Looking forward to seeing who kagome is with now. 


Mona (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

Maybe Kagome has a child of her own, to even the score so to speak.


Debra (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

I really enjoy your story already. I also feel that Kagome would never be the other woman. His business might be important but it was not life and death, he chose power over her, and that it's love, no matter what excuses are used. I definitely feel she would try to distance herself even more now that he has a kid. Kagome is not a home wrecker, and would want a child to have a proper family. I seriously hope that she does have someone else she is seeing.

I read one story on this site where Sesshoumaru and Kagome break up and never get back together. It was the whole he didn't realize what he had until she couldn't take it anymore and left him, hurting him like he had always hurt her. It was a really good story. I'm not saying that is how you should end your story though, but I think in your story it would be a long time before Kagome gets back together with him, if ever. 

It would also be nice if Kagome had a kid of her own before they ever get back together. Not one she adopted, but one she had. It would put them on more level ground if he ever divorces his wife. He with his kid and Kagome with hers, I really like that idea. I guess I have just read too many stories where either he or Inuyasha have kids with someone else and then want or get Kagome back. Yet she's usually the one that didn't move on and it's just sad, even when they get back together. Makes it seem like Kagome was only good enough after they got everything else they wanted, you know.? Plus, I like how at the end you said Sesshoumaru believes all actions have consequence. I wondler if it would hurt him as much to see her hold a child that isn't his. Would he step up his game and leave his wife?

Anyway I look forward to seeing what else you have in store for this story.


Mona (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

I'm happy with the update, was hoping Kagome moved on and found herself a boyfriend and/or husband.  

Please update again.


Tina (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

 

This story is truly heart-wrenching. Your writing is very real to life, and while I want to cry because of his love and heartache, all of me is proud of Kagome for setting her boundaries and sticking to them. She's a classy one, your Kagome. She faced her past and tried to leave it behind her. She moved forward like she said she would; Sesshomaru can't and/or won't let her go, bordering on being abusively possessive. Ok, maybe full on being abusively possessive. 

One thing I have a difficult time with stories that follow a Sesshomaru-betrays-Kagome plot line is the presence of children that are not Kagome's (meaning their Sess' children with the other woman.). As an umarried woman without children,  I'd be extremely hesitant to start a relationship with a man who has children, never mind with an ex who betrayed me (which is what Sesshomaru does when he chooses to marry for duty) and his children stemming from that betrayal. I know it's not impossible, but a part of me feels selfishly and wants a partner to experience the family firsts with me (first wedding, first house, first child). You kind of touched on this sentiment when they're talking about his son. 'Should've been their child.' Maybe Kagome feels the same way? I think your character development is really good, and I'm excited to read what happens. Is there a frank talk between the two of them coming? One where Sesshomaru bears his heart to her, and one where Kagome firmly shuts the door (and any slightly opened windows) on any reconciliation? Maybe there's a reconciliation after another 5 years when Kagome has had an opportunity to be married and have her own children? I don't know where your muse will take you but hopefully she'll bless you with many ideas and the writing flow to get them to us! Keep going, and good luck!


Haven (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

Awesome chapter!!! I can't wait to see how Sesshomaru reacts.


Couldntbekeener3 (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

Gah.  Kill me know I love the torture.


Niomi (Chapter 2) - Fri 09 Oct 2015
New fav author alert. Please update soon

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