I adore this story and am really looking forward to seeing where it goes. It is refreshing having a more balanced depiction of Kikyo as a character.
My only reservation so far is that you incorrectly wrote that the author of Peter Pan was American, when actually J. M. Barrie was Scottish! I know it seems like a small detail but it is a classic book and a favourite of mine.
dearlord. when did i start this fic? was it friday? or this morning? either way, i could HARDLY put my phone down. i needed to keep reading until i at least reached this last chapter. i didn't even eat dinner, lol, it's just that good. how are you do talented!? wish i had this much skill. and then sess' personality felt so on point. dearGOD, that guy was stubborn asF.
i do hope you come back to update. however, i understand that life can be hectic and whatever obstacles yer facing, i hope pull through! just don't ferget about us, ok? :) have a good day!
Great lemon also what a cliffy. I hope you don't abandoned this. Please update this is my third reading.
Wow what a cliffhanger. Poor sango. And yes there wass lemony. Goodness.
I have been reading your story since I found it the other day this is the first review. One my condolences on your dad. I know what that kind of loss feels like. Second this is an epic story your talent is amazing. Looking forward to seeing more.
I am so in love with this story after stumbling on it. I doubt I'll be able to catch up on time though with all the work I have left to do. I really like the way the "old" dead characters make their appearnce known in the story.
My only complaint is that you typed the word "bowel" instead of "bowl" in the latter half of Chap. 21. Bowel refers to your stomach/ intestinal organs; bowl is the thing you eat from. I normally wouldn't care. but I'm sure you didn't mean to make that mistake!
I can't finish this story now, but I hope to get caught up one day because it has been simply such an amazing read so far!
Love this story. The lemon was very tasteful and not over the top. Very good and can't wait for another chapter to come out.
kathryn (Chapter 70) - Wed 09 Sep 2015
the lemon you wrote was one of the best i have read. It was not just some type of smutt, but showed a joining of to people who loved each other. I have enjoyed your story so far and hope to read more. I don't review often but when i do it is because i feel the need to. Thank you for the story and i will be awaiting more
Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next..I love this story so far... Thanks
Koree (Chapter 69) - Tue 08 Sep 2015
Poor Tara :/ i feel really bad for her , great chap :)
Wow i like your beach story on the spider demon.great story over all.
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Mon 07 Sep 2015
First off....So sorry for your loss, losing a parent is beyond heartbreaking. Even if you know they are not welll it still does not soften the blow any less when they do pass. Losing a furbaby is hard also, they are so much a member of the family. My prayers go out to you and your family.
I was so thrilled to see your story posted and immediantly clicked on it to gobble every last word up. Your story NEVER disappoints! And I am so very happy to see you back...Looking so forward to reading more. Much Love and Peace be with you......
It's been a year and three months since I heard from you, I'm glad your back. I'm sorry about your dad and callie I will be praying for you and your family. Great chapter, keep it coming.
xinyi (Chapter 69) - Sun 06 Sep 2015
im sorry to hear about Callie and your father. it's always tough when our loved ones leave us.
thank you for updating, it was another beautifully written chapter that I thoroughly enjoyed.
Wavie (Chapter 53) - Wed 22 Apr 2015
Loving this story hope you update again soon!
Aziza (Chapter 68) - Sun 22 Mar 2015
So its taken me two days to read this story(its great, totally sucked me back into Dokuga again) and here are just my lil impressions about it. The author is clearly awesome, somehow I want more Ocraseous and Kagome (honestly i want fanfiction of them from this fanfiction!), I really can't wait to see where this chaper leads. Im pleased with the thought of a ticked off Naraku somewhere curing a certain miko's name. I also want to see where Sesshomaru and Kagome's relationship goes to, considering Kagome's sort of fear/timidness in upseting Sesshoumaru. And me feeling guiltly that my heart is wanting to ship Ocraseous and Kagome together...damn right in the kokoro. I really love your story and hope such a cool author as yourself has a great day now :)
mari (Chapter 68) - Tue 17 Jun 2014
awesome inspiration and chapter thanks.
I love the consistency of this fanfic, I love how you've managed to keep hold of Sesshoumaru's characterization whilst he falls for Kagome, as well as the rest of the characters. I can't wait for another update!!
Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. Nice, keep it coming.
What Makes A Dad
God took the strength of a mountain, The majesty of a tree, The warmth of a summer run, The calm of a quiet sea, The generous soul of nature, The comforting arm of night, The wisdom of the ages, The power of the eagle's flight, The joy of a morning in spring, The faith of a mustard seed, The patience of eternity, The depth of a family need, Then God combined these qualities, When there was nothing more to add, He knew His masterpiece was complete, And so, He called it...Dad.
Happy Father's Day!
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