Reviews for It Broke by naqaashi

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Allyonora (Chapter 96) - Fri 20 Jan 2012

Ow, that was perfect!

I loved how you portraited Inu/Shippo interaction! And I love how you're putting Shippo as a potential powerful youkai, he's usually such an overlooked character!

And better yet, you're writing a great Inu, I'm kinda tired of fics making him the dumb/crass/bad/blindly in love with Kikyo guy... That's awesome!

Great work!


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 69) - Fri 20 Jan 2012

Lol, it's like Three Men and a Baby ^_^  I do like Ayumu, by the way.  I hope he keeps appearing.  Keep up the good work!


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 97) - Fri 20 Jan 2012

YEAH!!!!  Here's to moving forward... progress... and... um... all that sort of stuffs??  LOL!  Poor 'Yasha, he's had a tough time of late, hasn't he?  I giggled at the thought of him cuddling a stinky, vomit-covered Shippou, I'm that mean.  And, yes, Shippou needs a bit of a comeuppance, methinks!  I'm quite looking forward to THAT one.  Still, also can't wait to see what the eagle does now that he knows 'Yasha's memory sucks.  Ooooh, MOAR fun to come!

:D

~~me~~


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 96) - Thu 19 Jan 2012

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but my computer is officially dead. I'm borrowing my mother's to read and review this. *sigh*

Ahem, anywho - plot still progressing nicely. I like how you tie Kagome in with the story thus far; I was beginning to wonder how you would go about it. Equally anxious to see how Sesshomaru will react to a missing Rin, and what his thoughts will be when he discovers where, exactly, Minoru spirited her off to. I doubt he'll enjoy the fact that the source of so much of his distress managed to worm her way back into his life again.

Great job!! 


Saraniya (Chapter 95) - Wed 18 Jan 2012

This was just amazing! Your description of Inuyasha was bang on! And this was what I needed after failing my presentation! Thanks for being me pick me up!


Silver Standard Society (Chapter 11) - Tue 17 Jan 2012

I love this one. It gave me a little flutter. Such beautiful writing. 

-SSS


Nev (Chapter 93) - Sun 15 Jan 2012

Fgsfdsfgs! Omg. This story is win! Squeeee! *waits for next update*


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 93) - Fri 13 Jan 2012

O.O

Poor Ship. This is...

It was really well written, and oddly cute, for what it was. Dunno how to explain. 

More?

*gets puppy dog eyes all a-shinin'*


martio (Chapter 93) - Thu 12 Jan 2012

Best last paragraph ever! I laughed so hard, srsly tho :)


koneji (Chapter 93) - Thu 12 Jan 2012

Ouch. Poor kit, but that was an interesting break from the previous chapters (funny too)!


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 92) - Wed 11 Jan 2012

Poor Minoru. Poor, poor Minoru.

I loved this Naq, amazing as always.


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 91) - Tue 10 Jan 2012

As I said on DDN, I luff these. And I desperately want to read more Naq. Pretty please?

::grovels::


Saraniya (Chapter 91) - Sun 08 Jan 2012

I loved it! Especially if I think the new guardian is the person I think it is or maybe it isn't...


KEdakumi (Chapter 91) - Sun 08 Jan 2012

It's such a good story!  Sess is going to kill and/or maim someone.  His associates obviously aren't aware what the "road to hell is paved with".  Can't wait for more!


criticat (Chapter 91) - Sun 08 Jan 2012

In Canon 'Inuyasha' I never thought what the consequences of taking in a human ward may be for Sess. Either way,  Sesshomaru is going to be displeased when he finds out. 

An evil evil cliffy, I want more! Thanks for the updates!

 


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 91) - Sun 08 Jan 2012

ZOMG!!!!!!!  They're really gonna do it????  Someone's gonna DIE.  Srsly.  And I like your OCs... but I fail to see how you're going to be able to keep 'em both alive if they really manage this.  As always, I am riveted to my email, watching for updates (which have been so DELICIOUSLY prolific this evening), and with a certain amount of trepidation this time.  *sigh*  You guys just love doing this, don't ya... keep the poor readers off-balance and guessing.  I should be used to it after all this time, but I keep forgetting.

 

Ah, well, no use whining about it.  You did manage to feed my poor, starving reader-like soul generously this evening, and I will be content with that - for NOW.  And no... NO TRAMPOLINES... I WILL follow through on my pledge!!

:D

~~me~~


Allyonora (Chapter 89) - Sat 07 Jan 2012

Ow, so cute! She told her name!

I could almost see Sess caring for her. It's so him! He doesn't cuddle, but he cares!

=]


Saraniya (Chapter 87) - Sat 07 Jan 2012

Aww! I love your portrayal of Sesshoumaru


koneji (Chapter 88) - Sat 07 Jan 2012

I love how caring he is of her. You write a fantastic side of the story, where Sesshomaru actually shows how he cares for Rin and how she follows him not simply out of blindness. Great work!


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 86) - Sat 07 Jan 2012

Aww, that was actually very cute, despite the fact that he doesn't cuddle. It's like watching a little boy that still believes girls have cooties.

As always, wonderfully written!


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