I'm speechless except for the fact that I kept grinnig while reading this and my professor who put me down kept staring at me but I guess I really shouldn't read fanfiction updates during seminars.
I received many an odd look from the laughter this chapter caused me to admit. To list which parts were hilarious, I would have to copy+paste the entire thing in here.
Also, what an amusing way to settle the Kagome-Inuyasha thing. Quick, effective, and absolutely guffaw-inducing.
I knew it!!! Can't wait to see how these two get on.
I enjoy Minoru very much. lol Poor Rin. She's probably not too sure what to make of this angry, naked guy swinging a big sword around. :P Alright, alright! Where's Kagome? This should be her cue to run in and straighten things out.
I am. Not. Good. With. These. Snivelling. Bundles. Of. Joy.”
This will be what I say from now on when anyone tries to ask/tell me to hold their children. Period.
And as for it being 790 words, it's the hundreth chapter. I'm sure you get some leeway.
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I really, really loved this chapter, and I love it when you show what's going on in Minoru's head. He's probably insufferably annoying, but he's just so d**m likeable.
....And all I can see is Inu Yasha doing this naked, flopping *ahem* in the wind.
It's a very strange image.
While everyone who knew Inuyasha agreed that he was an action-now-thinking-later sort of person, they meant it as a euphemism for act-first-because-thinking-takes-too-much-energy sort of person.
THis is perhaps the best description of Inu Yasha I've ever read.
*does a cheer*
*goes back to reading*
*blinks*
Hmm, this was actully an awesome perspective on pack dynamics, and it's one peole generally don't put up in stories. I guess my only question would be if kagome would even still be alive when Shippou was old enough to try for alpha.
And it was Minoru that suggested it, wasn't it?
*goes to read and see*
Oh jesus. See, this is why you're cute Naq. I stand by my point made earlier today. You fluffyized Inu Yasha.
*blinks*
Potato flowers?
You know, it actually makes sense. Nevermind.
Saraniya (Chapter 100) - Mon 23 Jan 2012
Very much a chapter that is worth remembering! The cat is finally out of the bag! Or should I say the human?
Lumi (Chapter 100) - Mon 23 Jan 2012
It amuses me that they're having this entire discussion while Inuyasha is in the nude. Unless I missed something.
What a way to handle chapter 100 of a drabble series -without a drabble! :laughs: Although I suppose to some under 800 is still drabble-worthy.
Loved it. Awesome touch having a surprisingly Thoughtful Inuyasha there. And the descriptions were beautifully rendered.
So I suppose the cliffie question is: is it Kaede or Kagome to whom Minoru is speaking?
Thanks for writing!
Awesome chapter! I loved how you illustrated the internal debate in his head and that he even had time for that considering the fact Inuyasha went psycho on him. :)
Figures Inuyasha would go psycho... sometimes I don't know who's the worse of the two brothers.
Boys will be boys :) Silly Inuyasha, what if Rin got hurt?
ah... did both forget that RIN IS RIGHT THERE? geesh.
So is this deviating from canon then, or expounding on what went on behind the scenes of the story we know longer into the timeline?
Thanks for writing.
So, in other words, they both need a good slap? I can see Rin getting in the way here. Can't wait for more!
I like! Although I really should be doing school readings instead of this...need to ignore your name when the updates come through but sometimes you need the distraction. Thanks for the update!
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