Reviews for It Broke by naqaashi

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Lumi (Chapter 104) - Tue 14 Feb 2012

Oh dear, Minoru could have worded that less... suggestively, couldn't he?

Sucks about your computer, though. :<


Kyonarai (Chapter 104) - Fri 10 Feb 2012

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Sesshoumaru and Pedobear in the same sentence broke my brain. Zomygosh!


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 104) - Thu 09 Feb 2012

:faceplants: Great job, Menaru. Great job. Now Kagome's thinking what YOU were.

Good luck with your laptop!

Thanks for writing.


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 104) - Thu 09 Feb 2012

PEDOBEAR!

XD

I got soda in my NOSE! That hurt far too much.

I am glad you've managed to retrieve what you needed, and I won't lie, this update makes me incredibly happy. So good to see you again! *glomps*


Aubrey Simone (Chapter 104) - Thu 09 Feb 2012

Good gravy, I've missed this story! And you too, of course, my dear, darling naq! *grin*

Anyway, I'm glad that you managed to get a chapter out today! You're still doing a marvelous job, and I absolutely love Minoru.

Keep up the great work!

~Aubrey

p.s. - Pedobear? *gigglesnort*


koneji (Chapter 104) - Thu 09 Feb 2012

*Gasping* Can't...breathe... That was hilarious!


KEdakumi (Chapter 104) - Thu 09 Feb 2012

He just made his Lord seem pedo.... sooooo gonna die for that one. :P  Glad your back!  Can't wait for more!


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 103) - Sat 28 Jan 2012

.....

Oh this is gonna be good.

And uh...Do I see a, what is that, a catastrophe on the horizon?

I think I do.

XD


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 102) - Sat 28 Jan 2012

I can't begin to tell you how much I laughed in this chapter, and also how happy it made me. Kagome never gets to be normal, and it's good to know she finds the spot and appreciates it.


Lumi (Chapter 103) - Sat 28 Jan 2012

I can tell you'te a little out of practice with multi-POV. Everything was understandable and clear, though. The only part that seemed awkward to me was: "Mutely, he shook his head. Secretly thankful that Shippou..." That shift from Minoru to Kagome. At first, it seems like it's continuing with Minoru. Not sure how you would fix that.


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 103) - Sat 28 Jan 2012

Your POV is doing JUST FINE.  Relax.  Deep breathing.  And just let it flow.  And flow, it does!  I can hardly wait to see what happens when/if Minoru deigns to inform 'Yasha that his brother doesn't even KNOW.  That should be a good one... along with Kags and her undying compassion for those small & helpless, 'Yasha is about to find himself royally... well... screwed.  LMAO!

;D

~~me~~


Saraniya (Chapter 102) - Sat 28 Jan 2012

I love Kagome! This chapter was fantastic! Yes Inuyasha is hot but his grooming habits are less than appropriate...


Lumi (Chapter 102) - Sat 28 Jan 2012

Kagome sounds like a teenager. How wonderful!


koneji (Chapter 102) - Fri 27 Jan 2012

With that realization, how can I not laugh? I LOVE your take on how she fell out of love with Inuyasha! Another fantastic chapter!


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 101) - Fri 27 Jan 2012

I LOVED THIS!!!

Seriously Naq. I woke up grumpy, and now I am not grumpy. In fact, I'm chortling. Thank you sosososososososososooooooooooo much for writing this chapter. I can't pick a favorite part, there's so much I love in it.

Cotton candy....

 

pfft...

 

BUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 101) - Thu 26 Jan 2012

What do I think? Why, I think you're brilliant! But it's only Thursday and there are two more days in this week for you to further stun us with your greater brilliance, sparkling wit and creativity! I await with bated breath.


Jessica (Chapter 101) - Thu 26 Jan 2012

omg lol, i cant stop laughing at the 'from person to person to weenie to person..' part lol and that fact that this is how her 1st love dies lol. this is just about the BEST chapter i have ever read in my life!! lol :D


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 101) - Thu 26 Jan 2012

That was... actually a little disturbing. I guess the way Kagome went into Really Weird Thoughts about what she probably should not have seen of Inuyasha.

Loved how she broke the silence though. Priceless. The eagle's reaction to that should be epic.

Thanks for not leaving Shippou and Rin out of the run-down. Many authors tend to forget when the little guys are around.


Thanks for writing~!


criticat (Chapter 101) - Wed 25 Jan 2012

Oh this was great! I cringed, chuckled, laughed and by the Disney bit just about had tears in my eyes.  Great use of the prompt too! 


AccidentalGoddess (Chapter 101) - Wed 25 Jan 2012

Oh sweet mother of us all...that was hilarious!! I loved it!


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