Chie
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Created On: 05/01/2017 14:28:35
Good! That means the story did its job.
Thank you for your kind review on Miscellany! ^^
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Chie
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Created On: 12/26/2016 12:41:54
You sense correctly! ;D
Thank you for your review on Miscellany, and Happy New Year! :3
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M-Angel 05
USA
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Created On: 12/30/2015 16:34:21
I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. It took me awhile to figure out how to end it. Thank-you for the review on heat.
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Scar-bby
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Created On: 10/27/2015 14:19:25
Nicole,
Thanks for reading and reviewing Liberation, as well as your sweet comments on the forum!
-Steph
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Chie
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Created On: 05/22/2015 14:41:18
Thank you so much for your lovely review on LAL, and sorry for the belated reply. ^^; Your review really made my day, if not the whole week. :3
It is a fine line to tread, wanting to stay subtle but still having to drop hints, so I'm glad to hear you felt I managed it well. ^^ As for Sesshoumaru, I'm trying to really portray him here as a youkai - it does not mean he is necessary evil, but just make him appear more non-human I suppose, having these little culture clashes with Kagome as in the end of the chapter.
In any case, thank you again for your review and all the kind praise, I really appreciate it!
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The-infamous-one
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Created On: 04/20/2015 11:50:05
Thank you I was hoping to stir some feelings that most, if not all, women have felt at one point or another. And as for setsuna.... The plot thickens
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The-infamous-one
From a table away
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Created On: 04/15/2015 14:41:45
Thank you for the review! I can't say without Giving away to much But revenge shall be tasted, that I can assure you.
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kaoruhana
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Created On: 04/12/2015 22:19:50
Thank you for your review. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
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kaoruhana
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Created On: 12/13/2014 23:20:40
Thank you for your review. Yes, the romance was a little fast wasn't it? I wasn't originally going to do it that way, but it just made more sense. Part II focuses less on the physical/beginning part of their relationship and delves into more of the actual feelings. It's going to be another monster: I have to get through the chemo therapy sessions starting in January and take the story all the way up to Christmas.
You can probably thank my editors for that help in getting the emotions straight. And a few authors from here as well who I've taken inspiration from over the years.
Good to know that lemon was written well. I still don't like it to be honest, but I think that's just my opinion. Hopefully, they'll get easier to write over time.
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kaoruhana
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Created On: 10/26/2014 08:24:49
First, in regards to jigai: At this point, Kagome is a fifteen year old. While she is of the age to be a "woman" in this era of Japan, she's also still a teenager who is impulsive and can't rationalize as much as Sesshomaru can. Thus, we can assume she's always going to choose life.
Second, I haven't told you if she was one of the rape victims yet. I have hinted at whether she was or not though. You might want to read in between the lines for that until I explicitly mention it.
Third, one thing is sure: she did kill the lieutenant. She'll be going in and out of denial for a bit. She snapped out of it because of necessity but she'll go back into that "I killed someone" remorse soon enough.
I hope that answered all your questions
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