Oh my...you have got to keep going with this...oh so intriguing story.
You did a wonderful job in writing it. I hope you can make the chapters longer...I love long chapters. :)
Sesshomaru was pissed at what his commander did to the poor miko, which I assume is Kagome since her name was not mentioned. I makes me wonder was Sessho pissed because the commander went against protocol or was it because he knew it was Kagome or maybe a little bit of both.
Will he care enough to bring her back to life because an injustice had befallen her or maybe because of something else???
I am looking forward to your continuation of this story with, did I mention....many, many long chapters. lol :)
Excellent writing job!
Cheers!!!
Natalia (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Dec 2017
Dun dun! Some spy miko? What right have they to execute someone without the Lord's permission? They don't have that right. It's known that only the Lord executes so this is above his head and besides it's kagome! He must be enraged! It spikes my curiosity. Will be waiting for more!
nicole (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Dec 2017
Should turn it to chapter story
l'-'jj (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Dec 2017
Ohhh, I was just wondering when would this little piece show up :) I hope you get some nice reviews.
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