I need someone to glance over my fic, Total Eclise of the Heart and this fic, A Wolf's mate. While the author of wolf's mate claims it is a hakkaku/kagome, it is almost the exact same situation that I have in Total eclipse. Here are the links and please tell me if I'm just being a bit too sensitive. It's been a long day and I don't want to go and get someone yanked if I am feeling a bit bitchier than usual. Thanks
mine Total Eclipse
www.fanfiction.net/s/2448421/1/Total_Eclipse_Of_The_Heart
Wolf's mate
www.fanfiction.net/s/5425170/1/A_Wolfs_Mate
Again, thanks for the input.