What a wise father and leader the Ino Taisho..love it!

Another great update, thank you! I think you've done impressively well being that English is your second spoken language. There are very small mistakes here and there, however to be completely honest; I leave it to others to aid you in that area. I realize you are openly seeking the correction where needed. I admire that. I'm much too enthralled by this tale to give a damned about that stuff haha. I think you're doing great! I highly enjoyed this chapter. You've managed to show that though Taisho is a warm, caring Lord - he is still Lord and not one to be reckoned with. Sesshomaru may make the occasional fuss and react a bit huffy toward his sire, but you've clearly demonstrated the boy knows his place. I believe you've done a good job at preserving the dog General's character as well as dignity. We want him to have compassion yes, we do not want a pushover. Well done!

Sounds a whole.lot.like Jesus philosophy to ;) 

That was a wonderful chapter. And a good lesson for young Sessh. I love Taisho in this. I'm looking forward to seeing how they learn about her coming through the well. That is an excellent adage and it works very well in all aspects of life. Another one is to watch what a person does as opposed to what they say. Same tbought just different words. Thank you for this lovely update. Looking forward to the next one. 

The emotions!!! I am really wondering what Inu no Taisho is going to say to Sessohomaru. Looking forward to further updates. IT's an amazing story. 

Still loving dad. Sassy is so jealous its funny. Looks like dasd wants a daughter?

Possesive arent he? Aw this is good!!

Awww, how cute! Love the chapter. I am truly enjoying this story. Keep up the amazing work! 

Hope you have an amazing rest of a summer!

Oh my goodness, such smoldering intensity within a pup version of Sesshomaru! I like this! You are developing the depth of his character beautifully. I'm also very much enjoying Inu no Taisho in this. His demeanor is smooth, gentle, yet he is not to be reckoned with. I cannot wait until father and son have their discussion. 

Very sweet chapter. I like how he is comforting her. There are a few times you use words that don't quite fit properly. You are using denounce and I think you want to mean the opposite. Just by the way you have the rest of the sentence written. Here is another one that reads strangely: 

“Hush, son,” the General silenced him. He looked at him sideways, trying to agree his thoughts without actually saying a word. “Later,” he added in a whisper." I think the General is trying to "relay" (or transmit) his thoughts silently to Sesshomaru. Are you translating from another language?

This is a lovely fic and I am enjoying it very much. Looking forward to your next update. Cheers.  

I enjoyed your story I hope to read more. I like the way the father is and sasshy.

I wonder what's going to happen next.

Thanks for sharing, no matter how you feel it turned out.This was so.touching. there isn't much more attractive than a man unafraid to comfort a child. I love to see what people do with the Inu do Taisho. I appreciate the little history lesson too. I had wondered whether it was a typo. I'm always gratified to learn sonething new while I'm entertained. 

keep it coming ): but like more often plis ?

I missed you

I love this story its so cute.  Thanks for the update.

Ooooooooo oooh this chapter was absolute preciousness my gooooooodness gracious!!!! I cannot get enough of Inu no Taisho's gentle demeanor in his handling of a tiny Kagome! He was so tender with her Omg I just want to KYAAAAAAAAAAH aloud but I'm at work and can't do that AAAAAAAH! I'm telling you that I am positively in love with this tale. I seriously tend to favour angst, horror and all things tragic and twisted. But this right here has been a surprising breath of fresh air to my dark soul. Aaaand Omg was little Sesshy a tad bit jealous of how his sire held his prey in his arms? CUUUUUUTE! I couldn't tell you had trouble with this chapter. It was absolute perfection. 

Great great chapter!! More please..when you can!! :-) 

I love it when Inu no Taisho is written into the stories. I love your depiction of him. Such a quandary. Will our two brave Inu discover her truth and send her home. The visual is so sweet. Loved this update. Thank you. Cheers!

Wonderful!!!  Two stubborn pups and the great dog general, please update soon.