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VS (Chapter 15) - Sat 21 Jul 2018

Hello,

this chapter was super sweet!!! I love the overprotective and possessiv Sesshoumaru! The whole Shiro will know now, that Kagome is his, because of how often he claimed her in front of his mother!!! :D Also that he was waiting outside of the room for her was just adorable!!!

I really like that you are using terms like puppy and snout. It definitely helps the sweet factor of this story! And I also like the way you characterise Sesshoumaru's mother. She may be a strong and somewhat stubborn woman, but at the end she only thinking about her son.

You are doing a fantastic job with this story!!! Keep it coming!

I'm looking forward to see Sessoumaru's reaction, when the door will open.

 


JeniNeji (Chapter 14) - Fri 13 Jul 2018

I am enjoying this story very much. Thanks for sharing. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 14) - Sat 07 Jul 2018

That was delightful. Winning over mother is at the top of the list, even the Great General knows this. I feel that dear Kagome will continue to charm her. 


Cheyanna (Chapter 14) - Sat 07 Jul 2018

Can’t wait to read more!!!! Lol the man cub part reminded me of the Jungle Book! 


Pamelamoores (Chapter 13) - Fri 06 Jul 2018

Such a cute story beginning... I wonder if it'll be completed....


S4toonee (Chapter 13) - Fri 06 Jul 2018

Really enjoying this story.  Looking forward to updates.


Toni (Chapter 13) - Fri 06 Jul 2018

really enjoying your story   please keep it going 


Minime (Chapter 13) - Fri 06 Jul 2018

So swret and cute. Waiting for the next chapter


KShadeslady (Chapter 13) - Thu 05 Jul 2018

Great Big Awwwws...Nicely written and very well done visuals. I’m so glad you updated. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 12) - Thu 05 Jul 2018

How very sweet. I’m glad that you are continuing with this lovely tale. 


Cheyanna (Chapter 13) - Thu 05 Jul 2018

Can’t wait to read more!!!;) 


Amber (Chapter 12) - Thu 05 Jul 2018

I LOVE THIS STORY. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!


Neelixonee (Chapter 12) - Wed 04 Jul 2018

Super cute story!  


Inuyaoi (Chapter 12) - Tue 03 Jul 2018

My only compliant is that there isn't more to read. This is wonderfully written and I'm quite fond of this style of writing. The dialogue is perfect. I can't believe English isn't your first tongue. Adorable story. I love this little sesshomaru. 


Sleeping_lullabies (Chapter 11) - Mon 21 Sep 2015

So cute >.< Looking forward to an update. 


Elizabeth (Chapter 11) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

Way! I knew you were refencing Harry Potter! ;). I liked the update and can't wait for the next update. Not sure why you were worried though, it was good!


hana sora (Chapter 11) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

I love it, thay are too cute awr


Denise (Chapter 11) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

Another great chapter! I like we're you are taking the story! I can't wait to see older sesshoumari! I love little sesshoumaru though. I hope there are more chapters of him. He is just adorable!!! :-) 


Sleeping_lullabies (Chapter 11) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

I melt.  <3

 


Eva (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Aug 2015

I love your Inu No Taisho. He and Sirius do have the right idea. I'm excited to hear that your storyline spans into canon and beyond Naraku's defeat. Your English is quite good, so don't worry too much about it. I've read native speakers that can't write half as well.


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