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KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Sun 16 Aug 2015

Very sweet chapter. I like how he is comforting her. There are a few times you use words that don't quite fit properly. You are using denounce and I think you want to mean the opposite. Just by the way you have the rest of the sentence written. Here is another one that reads strangely: 

“Hush, son,” the General silenced him. He looked at him sideways, trying to agree his thoughts without actually saying a word. “Later,” he added in a whisper." I think the General is trying to "relay" (or transmit) his thoughts silently to Sesshomaru. Are you translating from another language?

This is a lovely fic and I am enjoying it very much. Looking forward to your next update. Cheers.  

 

roberta. (Chapter 9) - Fri 14 Aug 2015

I enjoyed your story I hope to read more. I like the way the father is and sasshy.


desi_chan (Chapter 9) - Wed 12 Aug 2015

I wonder what's going to happen next.


Eva (Chapter 9) - Tue 11 Aug 2015

Thanks for sharing, no matter how you feel it turned out.This was so.touching. there isn't much more attractive than a man unafraid to comfort a child. I love to see what people do with the Inu do Taisho. I appreciate the little history lesson too. I had wondered whether it was a typo. I'm always gratified to learn sonething new while I'm entertained. 


Adomani (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

keep it coming ): but like more often plis ?

I missed you


Samara (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

I love this story its so cute.  Thanks for the update.


hana sora (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015
Yey you update it, more chapter please!

No Uta (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

Ooooooooo oooh this chapter was absolute preciousness my gooooooodness gracious!!!! I cannot get enough of Inu no Taisho's gentle demeanor in his handling of a tiny Kagome! He was so tender with her Omg I just want to KYAAAAAAAAAAH aloud but I'm at work and can't do that AAAAAAAH! I'm telling you that I am positively in love with this tale. I seriously tend to favour angst, horror and all things tragic and twisted. But this right here has been a surprising breath of fresh air to my dark soul. Aaaand Omg was little Sesshy a tad bit jealous of how his sire held his prey in his arms? CUUUUUUTE! I couldn't tell you had trouble with this chapter. It was absolute perfection. 


Denise (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

Great great chapter!! More please..when you can!! :-) 


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

I love it when Inu no Taisho is written into the stories. I love your depiction of him. Such a quandary. Will our two brave Inu discover her truth and send her home. The visual is so sweet. Loved this update. Thank you. Cheers!


Mona (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

Wonderful!!!  Two stubborn pups and the great dog general, please update soon.


Elspeth (Chapter 8) - Fri 07 Aug 2015

Aaaaahhhh!!! Kawaiiiiiii!!!!

Looking forward to the future updates of this story. So kawaii.


Denise (Chapter 1) - Sun 02 Aug 2015

What a great Siri! Can't wait to see what happens. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 8) - Sat 01 Aug 2015

Great, keep it coming.


Sleeping_lullabies (Chapter 8) - Fri 31 Jul 2015

I can't stop gushing. It's super cute. Looking forward to more chapters. 


Eva (Chapter 8) - Thu 30 Jul 2015

That's Kagome, Big trouble in a small package. 


hana sora (Chapter 8) - Thu 30 Jul 2015

 

Yey an update. . Again!! :))


Takari (Chapter 8) - Wed 29 Jul 2015

yay another awesome chapter :) .....i cant wait for the next one to come out!!!!


Mona (Chapter 1) - Wed 29 Jul 2015

I just realized what this sort of reminds me of 'Remembering', which is posted on Fanfiction.


KShadeslady (Chapter 8) - Wed 29 Jul 2015

Poor papa Inu. Stubborn son. Cute chapter. This definitely gives me lots of smiles everytime I see it in my inbox! Thanks for updating this delightful story.


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