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Inuyaoi (Chapter 12) - Tue 03 Jul 2018

My only compliant is that there isn't more to read. This is wonderfully written and I'm quite fond of this style of writing. The dialogue is perfect. I can't believe English isn't your first tongue. Adorable story. I love this little sesshomaru. 


Sleeping_lullabies (Chapter 11) - Mon 21 Sep 2015

So cute >.< Looking forward to an update. 


Elizabeth (Chapter 11) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

Way! I knew you were refencing Harry Potter! ;). I liked the update and can't wait for the next update. Not sure why you were worried though, it was good!


hana sora (Chapter 11) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

I love it, thay are too cute awr


Denise (Chapter 11) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

Another great chapter! I like we're you are taking the story! I can't wait to see older sesshoumari! I love little sesshoumaru though. I hope there are more chapters of him. He is just adorable!!! :-) 


Sleeping_lullabies (Chapter 11) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

I melt.  <3

 


Eva (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Aug 2015

I love your Inu No Taisho. He and Sirius do have the right idea. I'm excited to hear that your storyline spans into canon and beyond Naraku's defeat. Your English is quite good, so don't worry too much about it. I've read native speakers that can't write half as well.


iin (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Aug 2015

What a wise father and leader the Ino Taisho..love it!


No Uta (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Aug 2015

Another great update, thank you! I think you've done impressively well being that English is your second spoken language. There are very small mistakes here and there, however to be completely honest; I leave it to others to aid you in that area. I realize you are openly seeking the correction where needed. I admire that. I'm much too enthralled by this tale to give a damned about that stuff haha. I think you're doing great! I highly enjoyed this chapter. You've managed to show that though Taisho is a warm, caring Lord - he is still Lord and not one to be reckoned with. Sesshomaru may make the occasional fuss and react a bit huffy toward his sire, but you've clearly demonstrated the boy knows his place. I believe you've done a good job at preserving the dog General's character as well as dignity. We want him to have compassion yes, we do not want a pushover. Well done!


Marie (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Aug 2015

Sounds a whole.lot.like Jesus philosophy to ;) 


KShadeslady (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Aug 2015

That was a wonderful chapter. And a good lesson for young Sessh. I love Taisho in this. I'm looking forward to seeing how they learn about her coming through the well. That is an excellent adage and it works very well in all aspects of life. Another one is to watch what a person does as opposed to what they say. Same tbought just different words. Thank you for this lovely update. Looking forward to the next one. 


Sleeping_lullabies (Chapter 10) - Tue 18 Aug 2015

The emotions!!! I am really wondering what Inu no Taisho is going to say to Sessohomaru. Looking forward to further updates. IT's an amazing story. 


roberta. (Chapter 10) - Tue 18 Aug 2015

Still loving dad. Sassy is so jealous its funny. Looks like dasd wants a daughter?


hana sora (Chapter 10) - Mon 17 Aug 2015

Possesive arent he? Aw this is good!!


Denise (Chapter 10) - Mon 17 Aug 2015

Awww, how cute! Love the chapter. I am truly enjoying this story. Keep up the amazing work! 

 

Hope you have an amazing rest of a summer!


No Uta (Chapter 10) - Sun 16 Aug 2015

Oh my goodness, such smoldering intensity within a pup version of Sesshomaru! I like this! You are developing the depth of his character beautifully. I'm also very much enjoying Inu no Taisho in this. His demeanor is smooth, gentle, yet he is not to be reckoned with. I cannot wait until father and son have their discussion. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Sun 16 Aug 2015

Very sweet chapter. I like how he is comforting her. There are a few times you use words that don't quite fit properly. You are using denounce and I think you want to mean the opposite. Just by the way you have the rest of the sentence written. Here is another one that reads strangely: 

“Hush, son,” the General silenced him. He looked at him sideways, trying to agree his thoughts without actually saying a word. “Later,” he added in a whisper." I think the General is trying to "relay" (or transmit) his thoughts silently to Sesshomaru. Are you translating from another language?

This is a lovely fic and I am enjoying it very much. Looking forward to your next update. Cheers.  

 

roberta. (Chapter 9) - Fri 14 Aug 2015

I enjoyed your story I hope to read more. I like the way the father is and sasshy.


desi_chan (Chapter 9) - Wed 12 Aug 2015

I wonder what's going to happen next.


Eva (Chapter 9) - Tue 11 Aug 2015

Thanks for sharing, no matter how you feel it turned out.This was so.touching. there isn't much more attractive than a man unafraid to comfort a child. I love to see what people do with the Inu do Taisho. I appreciate the little history lesson too. I had wondered whether it was a typo. I'm always gratified to learn sonething new while I'm entertained. 


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