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No Uta (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Aug 2015

Another great update, thank you! I think you've done impressively well being that English is your second spoken language. There are very small mistakes here and there, however to be completely honest; I leave it to others to aid you in that area. I realize you are openly seeking the correction where needed. I admire that. I'm much too enthralled by this tale to give a damned about that stuff haha. I think you're doing great! I highly enjoyed this chapter. You've managed to show that though Taisho is a warm, caring Lord - he is still Lord and not one to be reckoned with. Sesshomaru may make the occasional fuss and react a bit huffy toward his sire, but you've clearly demonstrated the boy knows his place. I believe you've done a good job at preserving the dog General's character as well as dignity. We want him to have compassion yes, we do not want a pushover. Well done!


Marie (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Aug 2015

Sounds a whole.lot.like Jesus philosophy to ;) 


KShadeslady (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Aug 2015

That was a wonderful chapter. And a good lesson for young Sessh. I love Taisho in this. I'm looking forward to seeing how they learn about her coming through the well. That is an excellent adage and it works very well in all aspects of life. Another one is to watch what a person does as opposed to what they say. Same tbought just different words. Thank you for this lovely update. Looking forward to the next one. 


Sleeping_lullabies (Chapter 10) - Tue 18 Aug 2015

The emotions!!! I am really wondering what Inu no Taisho is going to say to Sessohomaru. Looking forward to further updates. IT's an amazing story. 


roberta. (Chapter 10) - Tue 18 Aug 2015

Still loving dad. Sassy is so jealous its funny. Looks like dasd wants a daughter?


hana sora (Chapter 10) - Mon 17 Aug 2015

Possesive arent he? Aw this is good!!


Denise (Chapter 10) - Mon 17 Aug 2015

Awww, how cute! Love the chapter. I am truly enjoying this story. Keep up the amazing work! 

 

Hope you have an amazing rest of a summer!


No Uta (Chapter 10) - Sun 16 Aug 2015

Oh my goodness, such smoldering intensity within a pup version of Sesshomaru! I like this! You are developing the depth of his character beautifully. I'm also very much enjoying Inu no Taisho in this. His demeanor is smooth, gentle, yet he is not to be reckoned with. I cannot wait until father and son have their discussion. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Sun 16 Aug 2015

Very sweet chapter. I like how he is comforting her. There are a few times you use words that don't quite fit properly. You are using denounce and I think you want to mean the opposite. Just by the way you have the rest of the sentence written. Here is another one that reads strangely: 

“Hush, son,” the General silenced him. He looked at him sideways, trying to agree his thoughts without actually saying a word. “Later,” he added in a whisper." I think the General is trying to "relay" (or transmit) his thoughts silently to Sesshomaru. Are you translating from another language?

This is a lovely fic and I am enjoying it very much. Looking forward to your next update. Cheers.  

 

roberta. (Chapter 9) - Fri 14 Aug 2015

I enjoyed your story I hope to read more. I like the way the father is and sasshy.


desi_chan (Chapter 9) - Wed 12 Aug 2015

I wonder what's going to happen next.


Eva (Chapter 9) - Tue 11 Aug 2015

Thanks for sharing, no matter how you feel it turned out.This was so.touching. there isn't much more attractive than a man unafraid to comfort a child. I love to see what people do with the Inu do Taisho. I appreciate the little history lesson too. I had wondered whether it was a typo. I'm always gratified to learn sonething new while I'm entertained. 


Adomani (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

keep it coming ): but like more often plis ?

I missed you


Samara (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

I love this story its so cute.  Thanks for the update.


hana sora (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015
Yey you update it, more chapter please!

No Uta (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

Ooooooooo oooh this chapter was absolute preciousness my gooooooodness gracious!!!! I cannot get enough of Inu no Taisho's gentle demeanor in his handling of a tiny Kagome! He was so tender with her Omg I just want to KYAAAAAAAAAAH aloud but I'm at work and can't do that AAAAAAAH! I'm telling you that I am positively in love with this tale. I seriously tend to favour angst, horror and all things tragic and twisted. But this right here has been a surprising breath of fresh air to my dark soul. Aaaand Omg was little Sesshy a tad bit jealous of how his sire held his prey in his arms? CUUUUUUTE! I couldn't tell you had trouble with this chapter. It was absolute perfection. 


Denise (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

Great great chapter!! More please..when you can!! :-) 


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

I love it when Inu no Taisho is written into the stories. I love your depiction of him. Such a quandary. Will our two brave Inu discover her truth and send her home. The visual is so sweet. Loved this update. Thank you. Cheers!


Mona (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Aug 2015

Wonderful!!!  Two stubborn pups and the great dog general, please update soon.


Elspeth (Chapter 8) - Fri 07 Aug 2015

Aaaaahhhh!!! Kawaiiiiiii!!!!

Looking forward to the future updates of this story. So kawaii.


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