liking the story more and moe. you are an excellent writer. flowing the story without making it too detail that will bore you. ::::
Yuuuussssss! I'm really enjoying this story of yours along with Opportunities. I like how you've gradually developed Sesshomaru' s sense of humour. It is slight, which Is perfect! You've been keeping him in character. I'm fond of authors than can keep him in character while not over doing it with his emotions. He can still have wit and express concern or emotion in a way that doesn't compromise his true way of being. I also enjoy the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha. It is hilarious. Great chapter, looking forward to the next.
jodi (Chapter 9) - Tue 23 Sep 2014
I love this story and your other stories.... it is refreshing and addictive lol. Keep up the great work and I look forward to the upcoming chapters.
rose (Chapter 9) - Tue 23 Sep 2014
next chapter please
I am liking this story more each time I read an update. It is nicely written. I don't suppose that S/K will be getting intimate any time soon like maybe when they go to the East? (hint, hint) lol :) I am looking forward to the next chapter. Great job!
I absolutely love this fic.. Thanks for updating!
Marie (Chapter 9) - Mon 22 Sep 2014
Good.job looking forward to the next chapter
Lovely chapter! Adorable moments that foreshadow some intresting shirt patrols. Can't wait for more!
I love this update! I love how amoothlg Kags is integrating in the West. I look forward to the ne t update!
bri (Chapter 9) - Mon 22 Sep 2014
thank you so much for the update!!!!!
love it keeps getting better .thank you.
some one is getting a joy out of this????
this so good and i am glad to read it.
bri (Chapter 8) - Wed 17 Sep 2014
thank you for the update! im so glad she is pack now!!
Marie (Chapter 8) - Tue 16 Sep 2014
Wow. I enjoyed this chapter so much I read it 3 times so much info. I look forward to your update dont make me wait to long
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