I know this story is old and done, and I'm still invested enough that I'll keep reading. But omg is Kagome so annoying. What kind of adult is constantly giggling, touching every person she sees, bossing people around in their own home and burning research material.
She's so annoying and rude. Why is she constantly crying too. Like for the most random reasons.
The flow of the story is a little hard too. Scenes just seem to jump from one moment to another with no real flow.
Like I said, i like the premise and the other characters enough that I'll continue to read. Your other stories also interest me so I'll read those too.
Thank you for your writing
Jessie (Chapter 36) - Mon 06 Feb 2023
This is such a great story omg and the chapters are the perfect length it reads so smoothly:)
Jessie (Chapter 36) - Mon 06 Feb 2023
This is such a great story omg and the chapters are the perfect length it reads so smoothly:)
Jessie (Chapter 23) - Sat 04 Feb 2023
Omg yes!!! I'm in absolute love with this story Kagome is sooo fun and I love her growth
Fantastic!!!
Paula (Chapter 4) - Thu 14 Apr 2022
I remember reading this fanfic a long time before I knew Inuyasha and loving it. I still do, so thank you for allowing me the chance to get to know it, even if it was through Google translate. ?
So good! I binge read this whole story over the last two days I didn't want to leave my snuggly blankets all day. So much fluff and not to morbid or sad. My fav type of story
awe this was sooooo sexually cute!!!! i loved it all the way through!! its so hard to find a good read these days!
This was a wonderful story. The exicution of the growing relationship was great. I look forward to reading many more of your stories.
Ashley (Chapter 40) - Sun 27 May 2018
Lovely!
sr (Chapter 7) - Fri 13 Apr 2018
lmao! serves me right...
should have been don't :)
sr (Chapter 7) - Fri 13 Apr 2018
i really like your story.
there is one thing that kind of bugs me though...this is the second time you've said that sesshoumaru is half a century old. a century is 100 years...maybe half a millenium?
sorry, don'y mean to nitpic
This was the greatest story in the world and I wish it wasn't over...I want more.
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