Right ow this is the story I can't wait to see updated in my in box! This chapter is only one reason why. Emotionally powerful and beautifully written. Watching as all of these relationships unfold and develop in such a natural way is a pleasure beyond words. I look forward to the next chapter and the bonds between all growing stronger!
Aw that made me cry! I do feel for them, losing someone that important. But, sometimes, when someone we care for dies, we forget the bad and try to build them up as saints. I noticed Miroku said Sesshomaru's mate wasn't "well liked" but liked enough. So I am assuming that based on that, Rachel was liked enough probably due to her mating status to Sesshomaru and her bloodline. But obviously she wasn't the easiest person to like or be around. So I hope Sesshomaru remembers that - there is a difference between remembering the good and the bad versus building them up as someone that was always such a good person. That is part of the grieving process - remember the bad and the good. Considering it wasn't a love match, I'm sure Rachel and Sesshomaru had some major tiffs in the beginning.
Although I hope some more interesting stuff happens with Kagome and Sesshomaru, there needs to be time for the family to heal from the grief of losing one loved by them.
Really enjoying your story!
Marie (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Oct 2014
The chapter had me feeling all kinds of ways. Elation. Happiness. Understanding. Saddness. I just dont know how to feel. wonderful job as usual. Look forward to the update.
Akita (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Oct 2014
I loved it! This was so emotional and sweet. Great job
aww this was a great chapter
Nilee1 (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Oct 2014
As I sit here with tears in my eyes, all I can say is beautifully done.
bri (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Oct 2014
ahhhh! thank you! loved the chapter!
Debra (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Oct 2014
Loved how close she has become to Sesshoumaru even in his true form. The parts with Sesshomaru talking about his late mate and his son were great. She is so good at being there for both of them. I liked how you also had Shippo come in and help to understand that you could love Kagome and still love and miss his mom. hope you update soon!
So sweet! So sweet!
Selina (Chapter 15) - Tue 28 Oct 2014
I love how you are developing their characters. Its nice to see the slow development of their relationship. Awesome job! Thanks for updating!
Great chapter, keep it coming.
Good, keep it coming.
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