I love it! Well written, very descriptive. there was enough emotion written in it to be felt. Love both renditions of sesshomaru and kagome. Thank you!
Bounce (Chapter 25) - Wed 05 Nov 2014
That was fantastic! What a wonderful story! <3 <3 <3
tonya (Chapter 25) - Wed 05 Nov 2014
great ending!
marisel (Chapter 24) - Wed 05 Nov 2014
this is one of the best story posted. i will read again to enjoy the action on it .. thank you
write another one pleaseeeeeee
Kounami (Chapter 25) - Tue 04 Nov 2014
A well deserved ending for such an amazing story! I'm glad that I was able to be an audience to its growth and end. Thank you! And i eagerly await your next story! :)
Phyllis (Chapter 25) - Tue 04 Nov 2014
What a wonderful conclusion to this spellbinding story! Thank you so much for sharing of yourself and your wonderfully creative and talented mind. I really enjoyed every bit of this work. Bravo!
-Philli
Fantastic!! Fantastic!! I love the ending beautiful beyond words! Now that's how soul mates bond and love for an eternity. I'm also sad that its over, like any amazing story I wish it could go on forever. This just leaves me on the edge of my seat wondering and hoping when you'll be writing a new story. I hope school is going well and don't be away too long!
Zyren (Chapter 25) - Tue 04 Nov 2014
Ahhhhhhhhhhh it's so beautiful!! Thank you so much for sharing this ??
Amazing story! I loved it from beginning to end. So many unforgettable moments. I'm definitely going to re-read this one many times :) Thank you so much for sharing it!
Great story! Great writing! I wasn't here at the beginning but I was here for the middle and end and it was a wild exciting ride. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us. Can't wait to see what you produce next. :)
Wonderful story with a beautiful finish. Thank you for the great story.
Fern (Chapter 24) - Mon 03 Nov 2014
Oh wow, we are reaching th end already? I love this story and would hate to see it finish, but at the same time I can't wait! Do your best!
Phyllis (Chapter 24) - Sun 26 Oct 2014
Wondeful climax to this awesome and emotional story. Kagome will fit in well as the Lady of the West. And now, I am finally caught up!!! Can't wait to read the denoument of your tale, a bittersweet moment, to be sure. :)
-Philli
Phyllis (Chapter 23) - Sun 26 Oct 2014
What a set up to the epic fight between the human Miko and the defiant Yokai. And some nice fluff before. Very well done!
Phyllis (Chapter 22) - Sun 26 Oct 2014
What a dramatic, artisticly-rended scene! You really have a talent for painting your story into readers' minds. Something tells me that Kagome's opponent is in deep trouble. Very exciting chapter!
Phyllis (Chapter 21) - Sun 26 Oct 2014
Wonderful chapter, again with a most appropriate name. It was good to see some light at the end of the tunnel for Kagome and Sesshomaru. I love the vulnerability he showed when he thought she didn't want his babies. And wow, a proposal! Good for Kags! She's definitely something if she can bring the Lord of the West to his knees like that.
Phyllis (Chapter 20) - Mon 20 Oct 2014
And finally, the culmination of all that tension and need. Beautifully written. I was so relieved when they finally did it!
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