this has to be one of the best stories I have ever read. I was completely sucked into it and couldn't put it down. I hope to read more from you.

That was a fantastic read. Thank-you for sharing your writing and imagination!

Truly enjoyed this story, very well written. Thank you for sharing. 

love it!!!!

Absolutely perfect.  Thank you for this wonderful story.

I really enjoed reading this story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! 

Absolutely loved this story.  Nearly cried when Sessh died but i knew it wasn't over yet so i held it together. I look forward to any future fics you might write. 

I have been really enjoying this story, mainly because I absolutely love a well-written battle scene, and have a weakness for Kagome tapping into the darker side of her powers. Nothing makes me happier is a Sess/Kag story than seeing Kagome become an actual warrior priestess. However, the chapter where she rescues Sesshoumaru really reminded me of the Kate Daniels series. It's one of my favorite scenes in the Kate Daniel's books when she makes the army kneel with a power word. I'm just wondering if that's where you got your inspiration for that scene in your fanfiction. Either way, I'm liking this story a lot and can't wait to see what else happens. I can't imagine becoming Sesshoumaru's mate will be that easy. There's always one jerk in the crowd. Keep up the awesome writing! :D 

pure awesomness!! best sess/kag fic i've read in a while, made me remember why I love this ship. keep up the great work. 

Beautiful story. Very well written and thought out.

Somebodys gonna be mad! Lol

YaY!!! I know short...but I'm excited and teary

I knew it was her, I knew it was her, I knew it was that bitch!!! Ugh!! I hope Kagome guts her!!!!...yeah I'm a little wounnd up....okay alot

WTH!!!

Awe what a lovely ending!

OMG! I just turned into a squealing mess inside my school's LIBRARY!!!!!!!!! "She could almost hear his lips slide across his fangs as he spoke." <--This line just turned me into a puddle of 'YES'. A mantra took off in my head since then, it goes a little something like this--Take her Sesshoumaru! Do it now, right now, while everyone's watching! NOW DAMN IT!!!!! Yes I'm weird, but I must commend you, these characters are the closest I've seen resembling their original selfs. I'm really enjoying this story so far and I'm satisfied with every detail you tack on to describe what my beloved Sesshoumaru is doing...The visuals...>///< BEFORE I get any more off topic--Great job on the story, I'm lovin' it so far! And perhaps I'll review again if anything else sticks out to mehhh...Ta-Ta for now!

Janie

Absolutly loved this story, so sad to see it end though. What a way to finish.....amazing.

:D Well done :D

I loved this story.  I wanted to say that first off.  I have two problems with it though.  The first is, why didn't Shippo come to live with them after he got better?  It kind of feels like he was just forgotten about.  The second is, if they now lived so long, did they manage to change history?  Did they live to Kagome's time?  Did she get to see her family again?  The story feels.....a little unfinished to me.  But again, I did love it.  It was beautifully written with wonderful grammar.  Though I did wonder a few times about the "like as if" wording.  Example: "...tang of fear and respect in the air like as if it was a cloud of fresh perfume."  Normally people don't use both "like" and "as if" together.  Now that I've said all that, I would also like to say that this is merely constructive criticism.  I think you're a very talented writer and look forward to reading more by you.  Feel free to ignore this if you find it offensive in any way.

I enjoyed this story immensely. Keep up the good work. I would request that since it is finished removing the author's notes sobthat it reads more smoothly. But outside of that wonderful hope to see more work from you soon

Such an awesome story! Thanks so much for writing and sharing with us! I'm completely enjoying your creativity and plotting. You are a great author and I'm so excited to have found your work!