I really like this story and your writing style. Kagome is being a bit of a minx. Who walks into someone's home and commands things to be done and with an snappy attitude, no less? You would think that her deciding to stay in SJ would inspire her to learn a bit more about manners in various situations.
Also, it's strange that Inu's being so quiet about their extended stay. And why didn't Sess revive the poor soldier? They could have gotten more pertinent information out of him that way.
Anyway, the writing is great. Descriptive, but not too tedious and NO SPELLING ERRORS!
LOVED IT!!!!
wahhhh it was beautiful I loved it ahh<3
Nisha (Chapter 25) - Tue 02 Aug 2016
Most Enjoyeable - Well Done, my friend! Also, I wish you all success with your studies!
Rose (Chapter 25) - Sat 23 Jul 2016
I never got bored from reading this story. Excellent job. Well done. I even learned a few new vocabulary words. You left outmonr of my favourite character, Shippo.
That was excellent. Thank you so much for sharing this. Though I was wondering when is Sess going to have to prove his worth instead of the other way around? LOL Oh that might be a good story Kags father is really a god. And after he falls in love with Kagome he makes himself known. he he just a thought. I really enjoyed reading this story thanks so much for sharing it.
Misaki (Chapter 25) - Thu 14 Jan 2016
Oh my goodness this story is so amazing! All of the plot twist and cliff hangers left me on edge, I never knew what would happen next! One minute Sesshomaru is dead and the next Kagome was destroying someone! This story is truly spectacular, for me it was filled with so much love, heartache and adventure! I hope that in the future, if you ever deside to write another story, that it is as amazing as this one! (P.s please write another story, if you can of course)
Nice story. I love the range of vocabulary thrown in though it could use some more humor.
this story was so good. its the first time kagome saves sesshoumaru from death. it was full of action and the reunions were the best. im glad inuyasha wasnt a jerk in this one. i like it when the brother(half) decide to get along. i liked the way you talked about the measure of love sesshy has for kagome and vice versa. the only thing i would like to see is a daughter being born before a son. i mean having a son birthed second doesnt mean he wont be powerful, i mean, come on look at who the parents are. all in all this was a wonderful fanfic. keep up the great writing and i will look for more. c'ya'
You have to be one of the best authors on here. I am so glad I decided to read this. Thank you.
Raynell (Chapter 20) - Tue 28 Jul 2015
Damn, that was hot. You write lemons wonderfully. Love it! Well done.
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