I found your story on Dokuga after searching for something new and worth reading. I absolutely love this story and how you kept Kagome growing, while allowing Sesshoumaru to evolve. The gore and grit of the middle chapters was good. I hope you write more.
Omg.... where do I even begin with this story???
I loved every minute of this story; from the grammatically correct sentences and flow of the story to the scenery and beyond!
I think if you drew it out a bit longer on Sess's death it might've become a serious tear-jerker for me. I feel as though it was only the slightest bit of weirdness when it comes to Sess being beaten, but honestly that might just be my stubbornness of placing Sess on such a high pedestal. It's not like he's an eternally immortal god now, is he? X'D I think, one day, you ought to put a little bit of psychology in here to really flesh it out. I kept expecting you to play out maybe haunting feelings of Kagome seeing Sess the way he was and Sess helping her through it but it never popped up. Would've been a great additive I think.
Anyway! Beautifully, well-written story! I loved it and I hope I come back to it some day and re-read it again!
VixeriaS (Chapter 10) - Fri 13 Jan 2023
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
I loved this chapter! You have me so hooked on this story, and now I can hardly put it down! If it weren't for the fact I have a toddler in the house, I probably wouldn't! X'D
Niji (Chapter 25) - Sun 01 Jan 2023
What a lovely story I absolutely enjoyed it
Kathy (Chapter 25) - Mon 21 Feb 2022
Found this story in FF, then someone commented that it was finished here, so decided to check it out. Very beautiful. Glad i found it.
Great story
Guest (Chapter 24) - Tue 23 Mar 2021
“Youkai recognize and respect two things: open-mindedness and strength.”
BS lolol
Amazing ending to that chapter!
Danielle (Chapter 25) - Sat 08 Aug 2020
I cannot find the words to properly show my admiration towards you. I saw myself emotionally invested in this story; I sobbed. First time a fancfic has ever made me shed tears of joy and sadness. Thank you for writing such a masterpiece!
This was a sad and cute story ultimately i loved it!
Super awesome story, and very well written!
Emma (Chapter 18) - Fri 29 May 2020
Holy *wow.* Heart-wrenching doesn't even begin to describe this feeling you've made me feel. You've written Sesshoumaru so freaking well in this fic, I love it. I also really love the concept of a shinzui, it's not something I've ever seen before and it makes a lot of sense.
This is really beautiful, I can't wait to finish it.
Erica (Chapter 25) - Tue 19 May 2020
Great story!! Your writing is fantastic!
Sesskaglover4ever (Chapter 25) - Tue 05 May 2020
This was amazing the way you write keeps you on the edge of your seat. The way you stayed true to the characters never loosing what makes them them. The storyline and the way it flowed. A little OC but it was raw beautiful and perfect. Thank you for an amazing story. Ive read many sesskag fanfics but none like thi . Continue writing and making stories they are amazing and i cant wait to read more. Thank you again with much love
This story is brilliant, but Sesshoumaru and Kagome’s reunion in this chapter takes the cake! So good!
An amazing journey from start to finish. Thank you for sharing such an amazing tale and I hope that, time permitting, you'll share more. Good luck with your studies!
R (Chapter 25) - Sat 15 Sep 2018
Magnificent. Just magnificent! I was enthralled from start to finish. Your characterizations were fantastic and evolved beautifully. The unique enemy was well thought out and made the piece compelling. The slow burning mutual respect, passion, and depth that built throughout the piece between Kagome and Sessh was delicious; my favorite scene not surprisingly was the moment he kneeled before her. Could there be anything more sexy and reverent? Thank you for your dedication to this story. It was everything fun, sensual, and adventurous!
What a glorious story of finding one's self with one's power as well at that admitting that what you needed was right there in front of you. Thank you for this story.
Since I know there is another chapter after this, I will not throw vegetables, but shall instead throw mochi at your head. heh.
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