Normally, I don't read stories that have just started out because I am such a junkie for fanfiction that I will read for hours. Your description intrigued me so I decided to read it. It is amazing. I love your writing style and imagery. You definitely have a knack for this and it is a shame that your schedule doesn't permit you to write more often. I can't wait for you to weave this tale.
Tonya (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Feb 2014
excellent. looking forward to next chapted
Very impressive beginning. Your characterization of Kagomd is spot on and you've whet my appetite in terms of what Sesshomaru's true motivation may be or if it is simple curiuosity at this point. This is the hallmark of a good writer. You've sucked me in and gIt me intrigued. So many times authors give up the whole plot too quickly and you can see what is coming a mile away. Thank you. I will be looking forward to reading more.
This story sounds interesting and great, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
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