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I love how this is moving along. Sesshoumaru in a daycare watching is one thing, Sesshoumaru participating in playtime is another. I thought that was just so right. He was showing Kagome he cared what she did for a living and that he wasn't adversed to having children and would also be an active role model in their children's lives. I also liked how anxious and nervous they would get around each other. It's reminisient of having dates with your high school crush. I also liked that when he asked her if she had made her decision to marry and she said yes, that he asked her if he could kiss her and not being so bold to do so and that he kept the kiss simple, yet sweet. It reminded me of my husband when we were dating. I had to wait until the 4th date before he would actually ask to kiss me. First time he left me at the door he kissed my forehead and the second, my nose and the third, my cheek and the fourth my lips. He took it so very slow and sensually let his lips glide along mine with the barest of presssure that I wanted, needed to feel more, but he broke it off saying if he allowed himself to go any further he wouldn't be able to resist my sweetness and he didn't want to scare me off. He chuckled ans smirked and I just wanted to swoon. That was over 35 years ago and his kisses still make me feel like a giddy teenager.
Wonderful job. Please know that as far as I am concerned, you are a wonderful romantic writer and the whole flow is perfect. JEN
Keep it coming.
So cute! I'm excited to read more!
Keep it coming.
Sweet, keep it coming.
Nice chapters, keep it coming.
Awesome chapters, keep it coming.
rose (Chapter 37) - Thu 15 Aug 2013
next chapter please
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Itoe (Chapter 33) - Wed 14 Aug 2013
Some wonderful chapters!
I like it very much, that Kagome did not foll head over heels for Sesshomaru at first sight!
She is more realistic than in many other stories here. Also, that she wants to make the right decision, since she is not out to marry someone, whom she does love.
Anyway, Sesshomaru is more "spontaneous". He wanted to marry her right at the first date! On the other side, he is sure of his decisions.
So I am curious, how this will work out. Since Kagome is not so "sure" about the arranged marriage, I would not be too much surprised, if she just refused... ;-) But there would be something wrong with her, if she refused THE SESSHOMARU! xD
Keep up this good work. I enjoy it very much!
Cheers
Midian (Chapter 33) - Wed 14 Aug 2013
Thankyou for the timely updates
Flo (Chapter 31) - Tue 13 Aug 2013
Super interesting story line! Absolutely love it. I really like your portrayl of Sesshomaru as well. He's not super cold and indifferent, but simply reserved and respectful. I'm impressed that he made a move that quickly, but Kagome's shyness doesn't surprise me. Please keep them coming!
Both chapters are cute, keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Sarah (Chapter 27) - Sun 11 Aug 2013
SUCH A CUTE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the great work and thanks for updating :)
Loving both chapters, keep it coming.
I love this chapter it's so cute :)
OMG!!! this is sooo KAWAII!!! i love it. i sooo can not wait until the next chapters!!! i love how you played Sesshomaru's silver hair and eyes up in this. but is he human or still demon with a concealment? so far everything indicates he is human.
More, keep it coming.
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