Y forgot the baby part, other than that the story is perfect!!!!!!
Finally finished. Your writing is so sweet. I usually don't read stories like these, but it was enjoyable.
This part of the story is hard to read, so I skimmed them. Not because they're fighting, but because it's melodramatic and seems manufactured. Both have been pretty sensible throughout the entire story, and perhaps that's the root problem, so this reaction to the realtor/making a sole decision seems like a forced overreaction. Also... the head of the household making a sweeping decision like this was pretty commonplace with Japanese families, at least from the older couples I observed. To be honest, even though the story is set up using an oimai, the way they behave is pretty western. And I mean no offense by that. Dang near all of the Japanese families and women in relationships I knew were eventually led (and sometimes strong-armed) by the men.
I'm not past 161, but Kagome didn't mention that Ayame is getting married to her ex, Hojo or did I remember it wrong?
What's funny about this chapter is that via personality theory (like MBTI), both Sesshoumaru and Mr Darcy are categorized as INTJ men.
I like this, because i read fanfics only their, Ichigo, Sasuke e Seshoumaru.... hahah....
So, nice choice of names....
Awww your story is nice! Love it. Im not married, but i hope to have a husband like Sesshoumaru in your story ^///^.thank you for the story =)
I just now realised that this fic has come to end when I didn't get any updated reallly reallly loved it I just wish It had gone on and on for years :P (not a likeable option for an author) but still I really liked the EXTRA chapter especially the one where a jealous kags selects up sessho's attire that was toooo cute <3 such love I'll miss it T_T
Otsukare!! I'll miss having updates to look forward to!
But a bit thank you for such a great fic! Loved it!
This was a very sweet story to read. I think you could have done without the extraneous interactions of Miroku/Sango/Jakotsu that didn't relate to Sesshomaru and Kagome. All in all, I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing!
Awwwww, this has been such a beautiful journey. Great job!
I loved reading this whole story! And closing it off with some extra cute, awkward, funny moments was awesome :)
Awww. Love that "ours."
This story was awesome and amazing, and I enjoyed it!
I liked the low key and sedate approach to romance in this piece. More realistic portrayal of Sesshoumaru as being very traditional rather than the billionair playboy you see in so many fics. Kagome seems more real than the sarcastic school girl who is both a doormat for inuyasha and abusive toward him at the same time.
Awww, it's over! I enjoyed this so much! I look forward to your other stories as well! :)
Next, keep it coming.
Nice, keep it coming.
Yay! Sounds like they found somewhere good to live :)
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