Reviews for You're Mine by Sayah1112

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rachel (Chapter 4) - Mon 30 Dec 2013

I like it. Very interesting (;


satuross (Chapter 1) - Mon 30 Dec 2013

Omg.. I love this. .. More fetish please heh 


Catalina (Chapter 4) - Mon 30 Dec 2013

o/////o You make me blush! Well written! Can't wait to see what happens next! I can't believe you updated so fast! I'm super happy!


hana sora (Chapter 4) - Mon 30 Dec 2013

keep it coming


Shaneka (Chapter 3) - Sun 29 Dec 2013

This looks like it can only get better from here update soon please, and also do not let there be any threesomes in this story sesshoumaru should be the only one that gets to enjoy all that is kagome.


Master_sword1 (Chapter 3) - Sun 29 Dec 2013

Omg dancers have all the fun


Riccie4 (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Dec 2013

Whoa, this is pretty dark, but good. I think I'll need some wine if I'm gonna get through the next chapter too lol. 


rose (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Dec 2013

next chapter please


hana sora (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Dec 2013

cant wait for the hot stuff. . update soon


Valasaurus (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Dec 2013

I definitely enjoy a controlling Sesshomaru, but poor Kagome! Can't wait to read the smut to come. I hope that the next chapter has something hot and steamy. ;)


Valasaurus (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Dec 2013

I definitely enjoy a controlling Sesshomaru, but poor Kagome! Can't wait to read the smut to come. I hope that the next chapter has something hot and steamy. ;)


satuross (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Dec 2013

I LOVE THIS SESHOUMARU hahahahahahaha

 

poor kagome. hope she gets enough money to support her family


Catalina (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Dec 2013

How cruel! I'm glad you updated, I didn't expect it as the story was relatively short when you stopped writing for so long. Please do continue. If there is anything I can bribe you with that doesn't involve money, of course, I will try to accomidate! 


Sarah (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Dec 2013

So how is she suppose to get money for her brother now since that was the whole point of working as a stripper


Jennifer (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Dec 2013

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter. 


Ela (Chapter 2) - Wed 16 Oct 2013

I completely and utterly agree with KaminokoDaughters review. I am insanely eager to read the next chapter and so on when they are posted. Please don't make us wait much longer for an update. It's hard to find a good story...a 'keeper', you can say....and this is definitely FOR SURE a keeper.


Mina (Chapter 2) - Mon 24 Jun 2013

Yumm!! Update!!


Rachael (Chapter 2) - Sun 09 Jun 2013

Oh I can't wait to see his reaction when she walks through that door. I hope she zaps him. 


matsujun (Chapter 2) - Fri 07 Jun 2013

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!


KaminokoDaughters (Chapter 2) - Thu 06 Jun 2013

I'm so sorrry to bother you. It's just, I've tried waiting patiently, and it's just not working. It is just really irking my nerves and straining my mind. So...I've decided to come beg shamelessly while showering my open feelings vigorously upon your story in an attempt to sway your hand. First, I'm in yearning at this point. I absolutely love the amount of detail given to depict everything so clearly, without over doing it. I love the emotion I feel from each character, I believe it and I feel it right alongside them in a strange way. I can feel the extreme dislike and anticipation build wiithin me for every word and internal thought Sesshoumaru has. However, the peek into his mind as far as Inuyasha and his relations with him go definitely helps paint my mind with a slightly lighter shade of dislike due to how he doesn't completely see himself as a bxstard and purposely mean when it comes to him. You see that he believes in the boy and his intelligence and power regardless of whether that comes on the heels of a conclusion that anything remotely related to him should be full of greatness. Hahaha oh the vulgar response he gave her question just tickled me pink. I'm happy to see where the pull was coming from in regards to his aggressiveness in his determination to have her. Aggressive person + unanswered yearning= fierce takeover... gonna get what I want kinda thing.

I'm glad to see Kagome isn't going to.completely take all this laying down. I believed her desperation but I'm loving the fire. For the sake of the story however, I'm looking forward to someone breaking in such a way that leads to continued association.  The anticipatory reaction you built in me has yet to subside and it's now beginning to hinder me. I am forced to beg and beg I shall.... Please please pleaseeeeee please please pleaseeeee update....like today-ish...maybe now-ish.  I gotta cookie! It's a really good one, too. Good sized cookie that's been baked to perfection.... I'll give it to you in exchange for like......the next one...well maybe two.. uhhhh all the chapters to this story :). Yeah. All of them for the super amazing can't find another one of a kind cookie and a happy reader. Whaddaya say? 

 

-KD


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