This looks like it can only get better from here update soon please, and also do not let there be any threesomes in this story sesshoumaru should be the only one that gets to enjoy all that is kagome.
Omg dancers have all the fun
Riccie4 (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Dec 2013
Whoa, this is pretty dark, but good. I think I'll need some wine if I'm gonna get through the next chapter too lol.
rose (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Dec 2013
next chapter please
cant wait for the hot stuff. . update soon
I definitely enjoy a controlling Sesshomaru, but poor Kagome! Can't wait to read the smut to come. I hope that the next chapter has something hot and steamy. ;)
I definitely enjoy a controlling Sesshomaru, but poor Kagome! Can't wait to read the smut to come. I hope that the next chapter has something hot and steamy. ;)
I LOVE THIS SESHOUMARU hahahahahahaha
poor kagome. hope she gets enough money to support her family
How cruel! I'm glad you updated, I didn't expect it as the story was relatively short when you stopped writing for so long. Please do continue. If there is anything I can bribe you with that doesn't involve money, of course, I will try to accomidate!
Sarah (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Dec 2013
So how is she suppose to get money for her brother now since that was the whole point of working as a stripper
Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Ela (Chapter 2) - Wed 16 Oct 2013
I completely and utterly agree with KaminokoDaughters review. I am insanely eager to read the next chapter and so on when they are posted. Please don't make us wait much longer for an update. It's hard to find a good story...a 'keeper', you can say....and this is definitely FOR SURE a keeper.
Mina (Chapter 2) - Mon 24 Jun 2013
Yumm!! Update!!
Rachael (Chapter 2) - Sun 09 Jun 2013
Oh I can't wait to see his reaction when she walks through that door. I hope she zaps him.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm so sorrry to bother you. It's just, I've tried waiting patiently, and it's just not working. It is just really irking my nerves and straining my mind. So...I've decided to come beg shamelessly while showering my open feelings vigorously upon your story in an attempt to sway your hand. First, I'm in yearning at this point. I absolutely love the amount of detail given to depict everything so clearly, without over doing it. I love the emotion I feel from each character, I believe it and I feel it right alongside them in a strange way. I can feel the extreme dislike and anticipation build wiithin me for every word and internal thought Sesshoumaru has. However, the peek into his mind as far as Inuyasha and his relations with him go definitely helps paint my mind with a slightly lighter shade of dislike due to how he doesn't completely see himself as a bxstard and purposely mean when it comes to him. You see that he believes in the boy and his intelligence and power regardless of whether that comes on the heels of a conclusion that anything remotely related to him should be full of greatness. Hahaha oh the vulgar response he gave her question just tickled me pink. I'm happy to see where the pull was coming from in regards to his aggressiveness in his determination to have her. Aggressive person + unanswered yearning= fierce takeover... gonna get what I want kinda thing.
I'm glad to see Kagome isn't going to.completely take all this laying down. I believed her desperation but I'm loving the fire. For the sake of the story however, I'm looking forward to someone breaking in such a way that leads to continued association. The anticipatory reaction you built in me has yet to subside and it's now beginning to hinder me. I am forced to beg and beg I shall.... Please please pleaseeeeee please please pleaseeeee update....like today-ish...maybe now-ish. I gotta cookie! It's a really good one, too. Good sized cookie that's been baked to perfection.... I'll give it to you in exchange for like......the next one...well maybe two.. uhhhh all the chapters to this story :). Yeah. All of them for the super amazing can't find another one of a kind cookie and a happy reader. Whaddaya say?
-KD
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