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Moonlight Silk

Created On: 11/27/2015 22:42:38
     

Thank you for reading and reviewing MBSL. Yes you are right in your assessment, the issues among the parties involved needs careful thought and honesty.


mandy

Created On: 12/11/2014 21:41:07
Edited By mandy On: 12/11/2014 21:43:51
     

Hey Sarah,
It's good that you don't understand at this point. When I wrote the second chapter it was suppose to be confusing. I mean, let's be honest, walls don't move (lol). But I'll go ahead and tell you what's happening since you've been so direct with your question.
Our third chapter picks up where the first let off. Sesshomaru has entered her cell because he felt her fading (he thought she was dying, escaping him and his punishment. But she was really dropping into the spiritual center of the earth -it's her gift-)
He deals her a lethal blow and is about to finish it when he feels it. Somehow they are bound. He doesn't understand how as of yet, so there should be some confusion here as well, but that is what has happened.
The fourth chapter is going to delve deeper into what has happened to kagome, but from sesshomaru's POV.
In the second chapter she thinks she has woken up in her cell again, but that isn't the case.-as you already have figured out-
Keep in mind she is a time traveler and a spiritual connector. When Sesshomaru pulled her from her death like trance, her connection to the stones was too deep for her to come out of it. So the connection was transferred to Sesshomaru (imitating a bond). They are bound and she has fallen into his past for a second, re-living a horrible memory.
It's a lot, and it will get confusing. Hopefully this pulled a few knots loose on your confusion. I like to let my readers guess what is happening, make their own assumptions. And then blow their mind with what is happening.
I'm also thinking of moving chapter 2 to chapter three so the flow is better.
Less questions that way.
Anyway! Thank you so much for your review! Happy reading!
Mandy


NitoriNikki

Created On: 11/17/2014 04:01:49
     

"As Kagome got closer and closer to completing the Shikon Jewel, she had been acting strangely. She had begun to hang out with the wrong crowd, sneaking out, staying out all night with boys, and drinking."
That would be answer to your question about Kagomes behavior. 
I would actually tell everything but this isn't chapter story. And I never write long chapters ( expect 'I'm your Master') because they bore people easily. 

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Yes, I know it's weird that sess appears suddenly in the future but he can go there, just like inuyasha. (This story should only tell about the smut/rape whatever) So, all other things are pointless/useless.
End of my little speech~
Thank you for nice review ^-^


Serena530

Created On: 07/13/2014 06:01:22
     

Yeah I can understand where your coming from with that thinking. If you have any suggestions on ways that are not humorous please feel free to let me know. I'll only have her trying to hurt herself for a few more chapters before I get her pass that stage of her depression. Still, thanks for the review.


Wunderberry

Created On: 10/23/2013 18:41:07
     

Because some people don't have a problem with others having multiple partners. As long as they are open about having multiple partners and not hiding it, it is fine. Kagome had no problem with and Sesshomaru was honest about it so there wasn't a problem.


Dragon'sPassion

Created On: 10/09/2013 22:07:50
     

Yes. I forgot to put that it was a one shot that takes place after'' truly complete. ''


LM Bluejay

Created On: 09/26/2013 16:33:08
     

Actually I did take down a few chapters to slightly tweek the storyline a bit but will be reposting them a bit later down the story. Sorry for the confusion! And yes! They are finally going to discuss her son. Thanks for reading n' reviewing!


The Bard

Created On: 07/23/2012 19:08:47
     

thank you for the review. This whole story is driving me crazy because of the way it's playing out. But hopefully it will turn out better and Kagome grows up. In a way yes Sango is kind of bad for suggesting that, but she got fed up with Kagome's whining and being immature that she pretty much told Kagome to get laid and stop complaining. She could have told Sango to go suck a big one, but it wouldn't have worked out the way it did if she did. I hope to read more from you and what you think.


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