falcon! i didnt see this, though i like the idea of her being a raptor, 0o0o0o what if she were tengu? ultimate bird of prey
phoenix?!?!
Nyx (Chapter 5) - Wed 11 Apr 2012
Great fic, thanks for all the chapters. I was pleasantly surprised at the number. :)
koneji (Chapter 5) - Wed 11 Apr 2012
I didn't even think of that. The explanation on your take on youkai natures was fun to read. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
My, my, my. I wonder what happened now. Hmm, hopefully, Kikyou got her butt handed to her. Man, being undead brings out the worst in you. More!
koneji (Chapter 4) - Wed 11 Apr 2012
Ok, some kind of bird? A phoenix maybe? Anyways, Shippou's reactions brought a better insight to the situation. His wariness about the situation makes everything seem more realistic. Loved the chapter!
I'm guessing a rare bird youkai. Interestinger and interestinger.
i bet you can tell when i get home from work >_>
oh i hope kagome's anger rumbles the fortress, so that sess is all O_O!! I can totally see rumors flaring abot what kidna creature has that much power. and maybe the more powerful she is the more her scent could spread, making it so that most of the male demons want her, and sess gest jealous, b/c maybe he makes kagome so mad she doenst want him b/c he's a jerkface, so he realizes too late that he pushed too far, and has to win her back, only he has to jump for her b/c of what he did @_@ more please!
koneji (Chapter 3) - Tue 10 Apr 2012
Hmm, ok my next guess is kitsune youkai? I took your words as a challenge so now I'm stuck guessing for every update til you reveal it XD And the idea of her training that way, almost as soon as she woke up, is a brilliant idea! Keep up the fantastic writing!
Interestinger and interestinger. MORE!!
Susan (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Apr 2012
I like your story
I've always loved those pictures and I'm glad that someone's trying to make a story out of them
I hope that Sesshomaru isn't too cruel to her - I know he will be a bit b/c he's Sesshomaru but I hope that he doesn't break her
koneji (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Apr 2012
Air after lightning? I'm guessing she's a Raijin. And the ending there was such a bittersweet moment - I applaud you for its emotional-provocativeness! Keep up the fantastic writing!
Oh my, my, my! I'm guessing Kagome is a rare breed of youkai, probably a youkai who can still use miko powers. Hmm, I'm wondering whatever happened to that bitch Kikyou after she tried to kill Kagome for the Jewel. Is she still lurking or did Kagome manage to kill her? Oooooo, I want MORE!
dragon? b/c that's kidna what the jewel was?
aiko (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Apr 2012
gosh... love it..,. the way you gave her the marks... brillant.. scary but brilliant...
really, great start...;)
Oooo, ooo, ooo! I already want more! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!!!!
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